Forever and ever - SwaRon OS , 2nd part page-8

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Jyoti

@Jyoti93

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Lovely os sharon's convo with that waitress was vry sweet and the flashback was adorable bt swayam ka accident i hope evrything goes Well update soon

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Ajit sahu

@sw1234

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Good start yar nice.do continue loved it.swaron bonding is very good.sharon blushing in the mention of swayam name.

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Jum

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

i hate it when i have to be the LAST one to RES! :(

RES RES RES! :(

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tanuka

@Tanuka_TanHa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

@ JUM

I am sorry , next time onwards , I will reserve the first post for u :D

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

TAnuuu🤗 pehle jhappi le, bahuth dino ke baad. Yaar it is really a very sweet update, awww swayam proposing sharon hayeee❤️ The convo btween the caroine and sharon was so cute, sharon telling about swayam is a treat to read, her blushes and all so lovely. But end mai swayam in the hospital 🥺 I cant bear it tanu.😭Well let me tell you, you are one fantastic writer, tere pehle OS too was super sweet and full on romantic, but this one has got the features of a blockbuster film, thodi, love, frndship and motherly afftection, then later on suspense. But it is an heartbreaking suspense that makes us readers spellbound. 😳 The best part was sharon look on to her iphone and saw swayam's face and her description about him So narrative and so much emitions are portrayed at one stretch. WOW👏⭐️ jaldi continue karna ji...

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Anonymous--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/71199157

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Priyambada Subudhi

@pri_tanvi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Wow lovely start!! Do update soon

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AmRiTa_S

@AmRiTa_S

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

U are pretty good Tanuka...lovely start..love how she managed to wait for Swayam without getting hyper..lagta hai humari wali Sharon se thodi different Sharon hai 😆

They are together since they were in diapers aww..childhood sweethearts 😊

And accident..hope he is alright. Update soon..thnx for the PM. 😊

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Anindita Sengupta

@Anindita91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

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awesome os tanuka...brilliantly described...swaron r childhood buddies...wow...n swayam is so sweet...he almost wetted his pant to propose her...awww...shuch a chutie phie...the way a smile crept on sharon's face seeing his wallpaper in the beginning was amazing...caroline is a sweet person...its good that she let her sit there for some time more...but i am shocked after reading the last part where mandy gave Sharon that shocking news...that swayam is in hospital...plz plz plz dear update the next part soon...will be waiting for it eagerly...update ASAP...

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-Shravzz-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Nice start...
Aww...Swayam and Sharon are childhood friends...
Loved the way Sharon waited for Swayam for 2 hours without getting angry...
Everything was perfect in this update...
Loved it to the core...😃

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