Forever and ever - SwaRon OS , 2nd part page-8 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
goes into melo dramatic mode...

dont kill him..plz./...nooo...nahhhiii..plz dont...uaaa😭

comes bak to normal mode...😳
dis was a really nice plot. her convo wid d woman, especially wen she said dat dey both knw each other since d tym dey were in diapers made me go awww...

I could relate the feelings she went through at the moment wen she got the call, really well. It wasnt overly done, yet it had d required emotion.
Plus, the bad weather seemed lyk a sign to her of something bad which was to happen, and which did happen. So basically all d minute details did help in building up the whole scene beautifully.

plz cont dis soon. lyk super soon.😃😃




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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
Wow nice OS.. I like d concept of engagement and the scene was romantic and nice..
But u gave d good story a shocking pause.. Oh can't wait 4 next... Plz update quick..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
awesome start but why did u stop there
plz dont kil swayam in this one
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
do continue...
waiting to read more!!
thanks for the pm ans do continue to do so!!
update soon!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Awesome
Starting was cute sharon waiting for swayam n i really liked the idea of swaron being engaged.Then her n caroline convo where she told her that they meet when they were in diapers literally..:p.It was soo dam adorable.
Waiting for next part now
Update it ASAP
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Nice plot for the OS
SwaRon engaged that's cool
But the end part
Continue soon
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Loved the way Sharon talked about Swayam and herself to the waitress and it had to stop with the news of Swayam's accident ?? Please update the next chapter soon !!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
hey hi
first of all i must say that your writting skills are awesome
i love ur writting style
my writting style is to faar faar behind ur writting style
and the update is very nice
i loved the plot do continue with it and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
Res :(

*EDITED*

OMG this OS was so sweet and romantic except the ending😭
SwaRon had a perfect love story, right from their childhood how cute!!😳
And the part where she spoke to Catherine was really sweet!
And Swayam the popular guy was shy to propose to her!😆
The marriage proposal was uber romantic!❤️
Loved it
But the ending
Continue soon!!!!!!

Edited by Neeti96 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
Hey Tanuka

very beautifully penned down..but the last part left me struck! :P

plz girl i so dont want it to be a sad OS!

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