The Starry Night - Swaron OS

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Aisha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: ABBY92
That was a really sweet and touching OS !! Loved how Sharon was scared of losing Swayam like how she lost her mom !!

thank you soo much. though i thought of making it a romantic os but it turned out to be an emotional os :P

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Aisha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: jas112
awesome os
keep it up
good work

thank you soo much

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Aisha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: princessaaliya
very sweet os!
loved it..

thank you 😊

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Aisha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: tejukor
Awesome...I just loved it...plzzz pm me next time its request...

thank you. and will definetly pm u next time.

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Anonymous--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/70686210

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Karen Johnson "Maria"

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Hey dear...luvd the Upd8 sorry for the late comment :)

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Phantasm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

A one sweet OS, loved Swayam's surprise. And the way she let her guards down in front of him. The fear she had of losing her loved ones, her mom and Swayam was so touching. And the way you ended PERFECT, with Sharon wishing to be always there with Swayam and Swayam being Swayam just concluding with fulfilling her wish, was the best way to end the OS Rishita. Like he says, her wish is his command, so in a way they are meant to be together.

Thanks for the PM.

Keep writing more and explore new dimensions of SwaRon!!!!😳

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Lassi_TanHa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Thanks for d pm!!
Luved it..sweet n romantic..
beautiful surprise planned by swayam.. sharon shares her fear of losing er loved ones
" mein aur swayam hamesha ke liye ek dusre ke bahon mein aise bandhe rahe aur kabhi ek dusre se juda nahin hoye, never"
" mein bas yeh chahta hun ki jo Sharon ne manga, who use mil jayye. That's all I want!"
their wishing together was cute😊

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ShrutikaSwaRon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Hey rishita an awesome update...kya likhti ho yaar...amazing...luved d way u described d bond between sharon n her mom...n swayam tried to relieve her pain n wished that sharon gets what she wants...sharon is so lucky to have him in his life...thoda chota tha but i wuld not complaint bcz it was short n sweet.

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Aisha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: ShrutikaSwaRon
Hey rishita an awesome update...kya likhti ho yaar...amazing...luved d way u described d bond between sharon n her mom...n swayam tried to relieve her pain n wished that sharon gets what she wants...sharon is so lucky to have him in his life...thoda chota tha but i wuld not complaint bcz it was short n sweet.

thank you soo much. aur yeh short isliye hain kyunki main isse likh likh kar bore ho gayi :P so fir maine aadhe lines erase karke short main khatam kar diya :P. nywayz i am soo happy u liked it. and when it comes to my writing, i know i suck at it toh formalities plz chor dey 😆

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