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Phosphenes

@Phosphenes

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Rutu di, LOVED the story. Swayam has his ways man. He has his ways.How he helped her overcome her fear is a thing worthy of applause. Every woman deserves a guy like Swayam.

Please, di. Dont let go of them. Let them stay in your heart and make it weave wonderful stories such as this so we can carry their memories forward. Hope you write more keeping in mind our TanHa wala SwaRon.

All the very best for your exams. :)

🤗

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Sowmya

@Joshua_TANHA

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

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Unres :

This is the best sequel I have ever read!

I was not expecting a leap!! But you connected the leap to the fear of sharon so beautifully

Amazing, loved how swaya, helped overcome sharon's fear .

I admit I have read the first one Rain Rain Go away and this one already 3-4 times😊

Edited by Joshua_TANHA - 12 years ago

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lalita

@BusyIndivaBee

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

wow

u left me speechless

tulia was way too cute

finally due to swayams effort sharon got wet in the rain with tulia

their bike ride was awesome re

loved the way swayam made sharon overcome her phobia

"Sharon we always have an option to choose and it's all about what you choose the distressing past events or the good ones"

loved that line

the good memories were amazing and the way sharon reminiscenced about them

god u are more than perfect at ur work 👏

sorry for not commenting earlier in ur previous os

was busy with exams

u gave the joy of this beautiful os and a bad news that this may be ur last one

please dont discontinue 😭

all the best for ur exams re do well and come back soon

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

RUTU
It was damm amazing Os
The emotions,sharon's fear was perfectly described..
Tulia was my fav in this os..
Loved the way how swayam help sharon to overcome from her fear.Rain give her more beautifull memory as compare to bad one.Whether it was tulia's birth or their first kiss or spending n sharing beautifull memories with swayam...
Loved it alot
Ps.best of luck for ur exams n i hope u will continue to write on swaron as it is the only way to remember tanha wala swaron...:D

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swaron_tanha4

@swaron_tanha4

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

wow...
it ws damm...amazing...post...!!
luved to d fullest...!!!
all d bst fr ur exms...
Bt plz dnt say ...tht u wont write...yr i reallly jst luv wht u write ...plz...plz..plz contine...writing..

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Anonymous--

@Anonymous--

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Edited😊

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/69426100

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kool kanz

@kool kanz

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

👏👏as usual a commendable job..loved d way was tryin his best 2 overcome sharon's fear...enjoyed reading a lot😊😊👏plzzz try 2 write soon...

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Simren

@DanCing_DiVa_SK

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Awesome OS...loved it⭐️

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Ardour.

@Ardour.

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Rutu, magnificently written honey. The way the story unfolds is absolutely enchanting. As I told you earlier, the theme that you have chosen for your OS is profoundly engrossing from a reader's POV.
Tulia, beautiful name, must say. It was so obvious for them to have a daughter. The way your Tulia cries for the rains, the way she whispers her sweet nothings to the rains is all so damn-adorable. You managed to nail the essence of Swayum. His love and concern for Sharon has been brilliantly portrayed. He makes her overcome her inhibitions by reminiscing their glorious past. His affection dominates her apprehension. The ending couldn't have been more beautiful. Both of them swaying together in the rains. I wonder how Sharon ends up to be firm yet benign in all our write-ups and Swayum is always a perfect, mellow gentleman, ready to back her in all her endeavours.

P.S.-Do you remember what I told you earlier Ruts? Throw away the hair drier and accept some big cyber pats on your back.
All the best for ur exams. Both of us are in similar situations bud. I'm also in a semi-hibernation mode as I have my boards in March and JEE in April. Anyways, see u around :-)

Edited by nikita_arsha - 12 years ago