SwaRon OS: I Hear Thunder - Page 7

Originally posted by: ShrutikaSwaRon

Amazing os...luved the way u described sharon's rainy memories...n even swayam's way of making sharon overcome her fear...luved their cute n adorable tulia...continue soon n thnx for pm.

Originally posted by: mrash

Amezing

Beautyful

Really good

Capturing...

Best luck for exams. Hope to get more on SWARON wen u'll be back.

Originally posted by: marauder

And this was another gem from you. One couldn't have got better sequel to 'Rain Rain Go Away'. Ever since you have decided to write the sequel to that OS I was waiting for it, my bad luck I myself went mia for two weeks and missed it. This OS was just enchanting. Right from the title to the content everything was just magical. While reading I was just spell bound by its beauty. Thanks😃This may be OS but the way you dealt with it was like a complete journey of Sharon. I know it was more kinda giving an idea of FF, but to make Sharon overcome her fear I had to mention all the memories associated with rain, so yeah. And I loved the way you introduced Tulia - SwaRon's daughter in it. She was a perfect addition to this work. Yup she was like a catalyst in this, playing a vital role All the flashaback memeories or the current events where awesomely penned and wonderfully contributed to the plot of making Sharon letting go of her fear regarding rain. It was quite enjoyable as a reader. Awesome work.

Originally posted by: Sudha-SK

I know i am late but i did not want to res a spot when i knew i am going to be late. It's okay dear

Coming to the update loved it..simply loved it a perfect sequel to to Rain Rain go away.. I just loved the name Tulia and how she made to the perfect SwaRon family. Swayam as just perfect on how he handled Sharon and her fear to Rain. I know that's Swayam for us The moment when they enjoy Rain was just enchanting. I see tremendous growth in you as a writer since you started Kudos to you dear. You are flattering me Sudha😳 I hope your exams are going good..all the best..