An OS from you is a treat for ur readers...and this work of urs is absolutely
A-M-A-Z-I-N-G...heavenly...magical...just like our SWARON...u r absolutely fantastic as a writer...i wait for ur OSs😊
Coming to the OS...u were successful in captivating me ...from the very beginning...her sulky mood..her mindset ...u depicted it beautifully along with the weather...her confusion about their break up...it was amazing...
It's been a week and she hadn't talk to Swayam. And those seven freaking days were like ages to her. He was an intrinsic part of her life and to be away from him was like leaving behind a part of her.
his state of mind...u symbolized with the coffee ad weather ...it was beautiful...the connection u hv shown here...rain, HER & HIM...he knew she will come there...she was expecting him to meet her...her reluctance to show her feelings...her care for him...it was lovely...
"I think I'll get wet in the rain so in way you don't have to worry about keeping a distance"so swayamish
The way she was trying to hide her emotions through umbrella it was amusing...
The convo...finallyy...when she said sorry and he hugged her...the hug was heavenly...
She instantaneously engulfed his neck and buried her face in his shoulder, mumbling sorry in every sobs. She didn't want to upset him by crying her heart in front of him, but she was aware of the fact, letting out the feelings in front of him would lessen her confusion, if at all it existed.
the kiss...it was magical...the candid conversation...which became an emotional one...when she let her secrets out in front him...her fears...her confusions...her LOVE.."I love you Swayam, even if I don't talk to you sometimes, I still love you"
"I know that you love me, I love you too silly girl, and who told you not to talk to me?"
loved it when he teased her...with his "BABY"..she was getting jealous to a car ..hehe..poor girl...it was AWESOME...loved every bit of it...i just love ur style of writing...keep writing dear 😊
Udne Ki Aasha
Kumkum Bhagya
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