SwaRon OS - Miles Apart

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Divya

@dvmishra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Its wonderfl 2 hav u bak. Lovd dis os. Its very touchy n emotional. Keep writing.

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Good to see you back,i really missed ur works
Awesome os
I think u change ur writing style,but still u rock..:)
Loved it specially the last part sharon's msg for swayam...
Thanks for pm

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Nish a pleasent suprise to read yourworks after long..it was beautiful...

The way Sharon was described aww and the beauty of the souls touched it...

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Gargi

@gargicool

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

WOW...Amazing! I was literally holding my breath when I read the voice mail and then exhaled at the end. The story was very good, with sweet touches in between. I liked the way you showed their first meet, although it could have been a bit descriptive, nevertheless it was very good, a pleasant read indeed!😳

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Shubhangi(shubhi)

@d3fan4eva

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

welcome back nish...gud to see u back on d forum...

awesome os...cud feel dere pain...swayam's proposal,sharon's voice mail ws just so superbly written...brilliant piece of work nish...

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Amazing OS! Do think about continuing it! :)

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@silver6strings

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

awesome OS...

thanks for the pm...

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Yaar how beautifully you write yaar,😳 it is the most touching OS, the pain, and love of swaron is fully portrayed in this OS. SUPERLATIVE is the word for this OS👏👏 The beginning portion where their love is fully bloomed with all its intensity and purity, later the upadate takes us to a different level where swaron is apart and craving for each other especially swayam, but when we readers feel that it is going to end in a tragic note🥺 suddenly everything changes with the msg, which leaves a smile and relief on the readers face👍🏼. Beautifully work yaar, thoroughly enjoyed and plz do keep writing new OS.😳

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Radioactive.

@Radioactive.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Nisshh..! It's so good to see you back here after all this while. :)

The OS was really nice and needless to say, very well written. You know sometimes I really miss your FF Letters of Love. It was so much fun to read the updates and even more to pester you into updating. Ah, good times.
Oh well, the proposal was really nice. That was exactly like something Swayam would say, only it'd go even more dramatic with him, but I like this. 😆

Thanks for the PM and come more often now. :)

Edited by Srishti_TanHa - 12 years ago