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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello Everyone.. Yes Its Me finally back! :P Sorry For vanishing.. Had a really rough time in life but now things are back to normal.. And What other way to return back to the Forum than writing?! :) So here I am..

This one was actually inspired by someone VERY close to me.. I really hope you guys like this :)

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MilesApart.
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Love! Ah if it really had to exist cant it simply exist with only happiness? Bloody thing!

He was lying on the bed with tiny drops threatening to fall from his eyes. It had been a rough month for him. His entire world had come crashing upon him.

Exactly a Month back was the day he didnt want to remember as long his heart was beating lifelessly now.

He was never the person for true love or anything of that sort. He liked girls and that was about it till he had met her 2 years back.

He had gone to his lovely village in Rajasthan and though he was the perfect city guy, with a bad reputation and everything, he loved this place more than anything. It had contained all the wonderful childhood memories and involved most of his firsts.

But this First he hadn't expected to happen at all.

He was with his friends having a fun time, smiling and showing off his lovely dimples when he first saw her.

She walked towards him in a Black Salwar, he hair flew in the light wind talking animatedly on the phone and didnt watch her path. He simply stood there paralysed and couldnt move his little finger let alone move his 5'9" Figure from the way.

She realised there was an obstacle in her way a bit too late and stopped not more than 50 mm before his face. Her Beautiful Green Eyes highlighted perfectly by the magic of Khol and her sweet scent spread across the little space between them. He could see her lips shining naturally in the color of a pure pink.

Something Within him had gone wrong. His breathing was strained and he was numb and lost in her beautiful Orbs, He thought maybe his heart had actually skipped a beat.

She smiled at him shyly and said "Sorry. I didnt watch where I was going." in her honey voice and went away.

It was then he knew what True love was.

As he was lying on the bed, every thought, every moment spent with his angel passed by in his eyes in front of him.

After that day they met for the first time, He simply couldnt stop thinking about her. It had become impossible to go through a day without knowing her.

He tried hard and harder and finally talked to her. Till this very minute heard the sound of the same honey voice when she first told him her name "Sharon".

It had all seemed like a dream to him. Falling in love to such an extent he used to think didn't exist.

"I love you Swayam" She had said one fine day and every day after that was a painful memory for him to think about now.

The way he held her in his arms, the sweet way he kissed her gently everytime, Their long drives, the playful games, the long night calls and Every I love you was painful.

One fine day, He had gone down on his knees in a place almost like heaven. On her birthday he took her to a lake where every single tree was covered with white lights and under the beautiful canopy tent were big lanterns and White roses. A huge Satin carpet was laid in the green grass with soft petals all over it.

He took her hand and led her to the Center of the Canopy. and went down on his knees. "Sharon, I love every moment I spend with you, Every breath I take with you and Every moment your in my arms and I want these to Last till your last breath! I cannot live a day without you! I love you more than I knew was even possible to love a person. Will you give me your hand to hold forever for the rest of Our lives?!"

She had tears in her eyes and slowly breathed out a soft "Yes". Little did they both know that the yes was to be short lived.

She had to move away from Him and from mumbai forever as her father fell sick and with that she took away his heart and her promise to be with him, a month ago.

Thinking about her made his heart hurt. It had been a month since she left and didnt even try to talk to him. She had called it A clean Break. He closed his eyes and was tortured by the image of her in front of him until he fell asleep.

*

She couldnt stay away anymore. She took her phone and dialled his number without even looking into the screen.

"You have reached Swayam Shikawat's Phone. I am unavailable to attend your call now but please do leave a Message after the beep."

His Voice was her undoing and all the tears she had refused to shed for the past month.

*

He had woken up and sighed as it was going to another tough day to pass by. He took his phone and saw that it had a voice mail from an unknown number.

"I am so..oorry Swayam.. I loove you.. I...I Wish i could be with you but... but.. I.. I will come back to you... I will... I lo..loove you.." And the honey voice had continued to sob on on the phone for roughly 20 minutes.

He Let a lone tear fall from his eyes and wiped it off and smiled after a long time.
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Anindita91 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow nish awesome os...👏 brilliant piece of work...👍🏼 the way love changed him...their first meeting... his falling in love with her in the first meeting...their confession...😳 swayams pain n then the last part sharons voice msg...😊 everything was described brilliantly...👏 loved this os...thanx for the pm...😊

p.s...its good to see u back nish...🤗 i really did miss ur works...do update ur other works soon... 😊

Edited by Anindita91 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WOW...awesome OS dear...just loved it..the way u described his attitude towards love..then their 1st meet...her effect on him...he knew its love from the first sight itself...their love...his proposal ...dreamy...his pain...loved the ending...i could feel their pain...amazing work...
Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Good to see you back on forum, Nisha. 😊. To be honest was missing your works. So it was indeed a pleasant a surprise to see your PM in the inbox.

Coming to the OS it was sweetly penned from Swayam's prespective. All the effect of first love nicely written and a really nice proposal scene. And yeah loved the way you described the Sharon when he saw her for the first time. But I wish Sharon ke side ka bhi kuch POV likhti. Any way sweetly done. Will be waiting for your other works :)
Edited by marauder - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice n a plesant surprise to see you back nish...
coming to the OS...
your writing has changed🤔
but its still beautiful...nicely penned work...
the pain n then the relief after hearing the voice was covered nicely...
do write more now :)
thanks for the pm...


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Its Lovely dear:-) plz cont and pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nish it does feel wonderful to read sumthing from u after a looong time...and u don't dissappoint either...the best thing abt the OS was that even thru all the pain and disappointment, u kept the beacon of hope alive...do write more and soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nish its always a pleasure to read your work and this was no different.
Was pleasantly surprised to see your PM. Please do keep writing.
About the update just like Rosh even i felt you have changed your style in writing a lil but beautifully penned. Even during the pain in both Swayam and Sharon they thought of their love for each other and it was nice to see Sharon finally confessing and Swayam smiling.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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that's it ??
i want more
it is so beautifully written

dhruviarmaanfan thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's Damm cute one... I love when Sharon says I love u to Swayam.. The way he gets happy... Make me happy

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