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AmRiTa_S

@AmRiTa_S

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Hey, this one was my fav from your OS marathon and i am glad you decided to convert this one into an FF now and ur partner in crime is no one else by Kankshita...two amazing writers.

Prologue is very well written..Swayam and Sharon are together but something is wrong. He is confident that things can work out but looks like she is not. Looking forward to read this one for sure...update soon and thank you for the PM...will try and comment as soon as you guys update.

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tanuka

@Tanuka_TanHa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Like almost everybody here , this was one of my Fav os from the os marathon and i am glad that u guys decided to continue this :D

Awesome start Nidhi and Kanks !

the prologue is fantastically written.

Sharon and swayams feelings were very well described .

will be waiting for the next part , update soon...

thanks for the PM.

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Reserved.. Will edit it soon! In a rush right now!

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ananya randhawa

@Ananya.SwaRon

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

i'm glad that you two decided to take up the OS and stretch it into a full-fledged FF. this one was one of my fav.

coming to the Prologue,it was intriguing as Sharon is being afraid of the feelings which they share mutual among themselves while Swayam held it strong,fear-free he is trying his level best to make Sharon accept the relationship which he wants to develop. the prologue was nicely written with the scenario set to its best. the lingering dim lights in the dark made the perfect picturesque. i would love to see how Sharon would finally own up to her feelings in the process. looking forward to it.

thanks for the PM.

P.S:i hope we could expect regular updates for this one.

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pratik vyas

@pratik54000

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

heyo kanks and nidhi...

I was actually taken by surprise to see a PM by swayer tom saying prologue is up...there was a ff in title...a thought came to my mind when in the world this progress happend...and reached to prologue and i have no idea my favorite writers are wrting something...how dumb i am really...ha ha ha ha...

anyways its a treat to read kanks and nidhi write ups...and its even bigger treat now as both of you will be writting something together and which is a continuation of one of the os in oneshots of nidhi...i mean what more can one ask yar...i am def. in for this one...

The prologue by kanks was just outstanding actually i expected it to be best as kanks was writing and one should expect that it would be next to best atleast...ya it was joy to read swaron in their most cutest and sweetest and naughtiest forms...i can predict that this one would surely go places and would surely be one of the FF's that we swaron/tanha fans would be curious to read...all the good luck for this one...god bless you both...

thanks for pm...update soon...

pratik...

p.s. hey i will be having my chartered accountancy final examinations from 1st november to 18th november so i would not be able to catch up with the updates but its a request from me that please dont stop pm's to me as i will surely read all the update once i am back after exams...

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Namrata Jadhav

@nj_SRKholic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

m so glad dat ur continuing os

thnkz a lot Fr day..

Liking forward Fr an amazing ff by 2 amazing writers on if..

awesum prologue update d 1st part soon...

Chotusa comment cz m frm cell...

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chimpukli10

@chimpukli10

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

I dunno how i always know things late.i was randomly going through the pages when i came on dis FF.the prologue was nice..do update soon..nd pm me once you update..

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Gargi

@gargicool

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

This is so very sad! I've been out of touch a lot from the forum and did not even know that you are starting a new FF! 😒

So, please excuse me, but I got to ask that is this a continuation of your OS- If You Could See Me Now?? Well it seems so.

Coming to the prologue, it was amazing and you penned it down very well. Liked the description of the night as well. But I am as confused as ever! What does Sharon see in Swayam? Or does she really see him? Are they together? Or they aren't? Many questions, hope we get answers to them in the next update. Thanks for the PM and continue soon!

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Pardon me for asking that is it a continuation or not, but I haven't received the first PM! So I directly read the prologue and never read the first page! :P Hope you two complete this venture...

Edited by gargicool - 12 years ago

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Prologue is superb! 👏
You have explained it to the outlines..which i loved the most! 😳
The main thing is unclear but its just the starting so i would love to read it further! 😃
The description of the night and sharon feeling swayam's touch and his eyes really brought an ecstatic feeling to it..! 😊
Just Fabulous! ⭐️

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Radioactive.

@Radioactive.

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#60

That was such a beautiful beginning to the FF. The mentioned OS has sort of been my favourite out of all the OSs that you've posted, Nidhi(yeah not just that thread, but the rest of them included). So I'm extremely happy you both decided to continue this (with a little extra emphasis on the "You Both").

Kanks, the prologue was brilliantly written. I don't know how you mange to get it so right all the time, but you just do. :)

Thank you for the PM. I'll definitely be looking forward to updates on this one. :)