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Snowey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: dips098
Sudha-As I Stood Still - SwaRon

WOW...loved the simplicity and divine nature of their love...the nature...the sea...HIM & HER...the kiss...the proposal...those lines...MAGICAL...

Sharon, I Love you, my motto in life Is to see you comfortable and happy. I want to grow old with you your face is the first I wish to wake each morning to. The kiss we just shared was so magical, your presence and aura transforms me, I want to kiss you every living day of my life and feel what I just felt.
And, you are the only reason to my existence and my only shot at happiness, will you be mine forever and Ever.

The surroundings...the acceptance... the purity of love...

I Love you Swayam, she said as she placed her head over his chest, he moved the soft strand of hair and whispered his promises of love in to her ear.

TIME...the ultimate witness...is the witness of these two souls getting married to each other...

"I as 'TIME' stood still, leaving the two beautiful souls to relish their moment a while longer as the blanket of stars and moon stood witnessing their promise to each other.

It was DIVINE...A DIVINE OS ...loved this OS Sudha...u write so beautifully ...its just unbelievable...thanx for this beautiful OS ...

Deeps thank you for those lovely words dear :)

Yeah time stood still as it was a magical moment to be cherished for ever.

thanks for quoting those lines you loved the most - it make me real happy.

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Snowey

@Snowey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: troublemagnet
Sudha..

It was AWESOME..:D

Thanks for the PM :)

Thank you and you are welcome :)

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Snowey

@Snowey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: arjuhiswaron007
Sudha, I abosoloutely loved ur os!!👏
it really was commendable😊

Thanx for the pm!

Thank you so much dear 😃

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Snowey

@Snowey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: mili1987
Sudha.. awesome...👏👏
sorry for commenting so late... commendable job you have done

No problem and thank you so much for commenting i am happy you liked it 😊

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Snowey

@Snowey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: swaron_d3
sudha 🤗
you are a star writer. every time i read any of your woks i have this stupid smile playing on my lips. the ardent love which you arouse through your work is commendable. your works have always been impeccable. all the attractions that come with your works beckon. the way you induce nature in your works,i have never seen anyone doing it with as much perfection as you. nature has always been dominating in your works,and that is what i love about your works the most. coming to this one, you had the perfect setting. the sunset and the magical couple SwaRon in-front,what could be better than this. i wish we could have this picturesque for real. AWESOME work.

Ananya 🤗

You know how much i love sunset and beech right, what better setting for a proposal 😳

SwaRon are so magical by themselves it does not take a lot for that amazing feeling one gets while reading about them. Swayam is so romantic at heart that anything he would do will sure have those killer aftermath on Sharon she can't do much but to let go 😳

Thanks for your comments dear

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Snowey

@Snowey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: Rutu
Sudha I absolutely loved it for the simplicity and the ease with which the update was written. Felt good after reading this.
Beautifully crafted must say!!

Thanks for commenting dear and i am happy that you felt good after reading this 😊

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Snowey

@Snowey

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: beeny
sudha it was a mind blowing OS pourity of love is der all over d Os just too good Thanx for PM
i just loved it😃

Sudha i just loved ur all d OS SS FF d pourity of love flowed whole over d update so plz carry on with ur writting

Thank you so much for your lovely comments dear, and sure i will try writing more 😳

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Anindita Sengupta

@Anindita91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

awesome work sudha...loved it to the core... brilliantly written...👏 keep it up 👍🏼

p.s...yet again i am late in commenting...sorry for that...😭

thanx for the pm..

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Sawyer_Tom

@Sawyer_Tom

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

So sorry Sudha for the delay. Rafi ka asar! 😛

Anyways, as you already know this is one poetic piece of work and the entire proposal is beautiful. Everything about it is beautiful. You've chosen a very beautiful setting, imagined a very beautiful proposal and taken the most beautiful couple. A good, rich mix and wonderfully written by you. And I loved the fact that you took 'Time' as the third person and wrote the story from its POV. There is something extremely magical in taking an inanimate concept and turning it into an animated object. And you did total justice to it. Take a hug from me! 🤗 I sincerely hope that you win this competition. You deserve to win.

Love,

Nidhi

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346815

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

@Sudha .. now what do I say ... well lets put it this way ... Time is ruthless . Waits for none. But Swayam proposing to Sharon ... the way you put it .. I think Time had no choice but to stand still and watch.

From the ambiance to Swayam's sincere and heartfelt proposal to Sharon's blissful contentment in being in his arms .. BEAUTIFULLY done 👏 The best part about Swayam's proposal the way you've written - The promise of infinity. This guy is all about Everydays and Forevers. So what girl would'nt sob in joy to that ?

Thank you for writing this ! 😳

Edited by TanHa911 - 12 years ago

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