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@shivi_reylover

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

@nams : ur proposal *DEAD*

the way u portrayed rey

i luved rey in the os

👏👏 ol in ol..it was awsum!!

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pratik vyas

@pratik54000

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

@sudha sk... sudha it was amazing thing i just read...the way time described swaron was just so ever refreshing touch to the swaron story...the swayam proposal was so good ya it was practical yet full of emotions...how would girl stop herself from loving a guy who has ocean of love in his heart...

the way swayam proposed sharon and sharon felt happy emotional and top of the world was just pleasure to read...i can say it was truely most captivating proposal i have seen with time itself being the object that is communication the story...

just brilliant idea and too good execution...you rock sudha for writing one unique proposal...

thanks for pm...i loved it...

pratik...

p.s. sorry i am late in reading and commenting...

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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

Dear - Nidhi,Rafi and Shishir 🤗

You guys know me and my writings real well now.

Yes SwaRon as a couple and their story is beyond excellence and needs not only a perfect setting but a heavenly narrator. Time can be ruthless but not in its history did "time" witness a pure love like Swayam's and hence couldn't stop but stand still and take in the magical moment. You guys are too generous with your blessings and this makes me more happy than winning the actual competition.

Love you guys

Sudha

Originally posted by: Sawyer_Tom
So sorry Sudha for the delay. Rafi ka asar! 😛

Anyways, as you already know this is one poetic piece of work and the entire proposal is beautiful. Everything about it is beautiful. You've chosen a very beautiful setting, imagined a very beautiful proposal and taken the most beautiful couple. A good, rich mix and wonderfully written by you. And I loved the fact that you took 'Time' as the third person and wrote the story from its POV. There is something extremely magical in taking an inanimate concept and turning it into an animated object. And you did total justice to it. Take a hug from me! 🤗 I sincerely hope that you win this competition. You deserve to win.

Love,
Nidhi

Originally posted by: TanHa911
@Sudha .. now what do I say ... well lets put it this way ... Time is ruthless . Waits for none. But Swayam proposing to Sharon ... the way you put it .. I think Time had no choice but to stand still and watch.

From the ambiance to Swayam's sincere and heartfelt proposal to Sharon's blissful contentment in being in his arms .. BEAUTIFULLY done 👏 The best part about Swayam's proposal the way you've written - The promise of infinity. This guy is all about Everydays and Forevers. So what girl would'nt sob in joy to that ?

Thank you for writing this ! 😳

Originally posted by: marauder
@Sudha : Sorry for the late reply. Although you knew why 😆

Now coming to the OS. This was seriously beautfiful or I must say it was enchanting. The whole setting ethereal and your writing mesmerising. And the best of thing of this OS was the narrator. You always come out with something/someone completely unexpected as the narrator for your works whether its a diary or here in this case Time. Maybe the unworldly quality of SwaRon romance can be justified with a unworldly narrator only. Fabulously written.

Edited by Sudha-SK - 13 years ago

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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: pratik54000
@sudha sk... sudha it was amazing thing i just read...the way time described swaron was just so ever refreshing touch to the swaron story...the swayam proposal was so good ya it was practical yet full of emotions...how would girl stop herself from loving a guy who has ocean of love in his heart...

the way swayam proposed sharon and sharon felt happy emotional and top of the world was just pleasure to read...i can say it was truely most captivating proposal i have seen with time itself being the object that is communication the story...

just brilliant idea and too good execution...you rock sudha for writing one unique proposal...

thanks for pm...i loved it...

pratik...

p.s. sorry i am late in reading and commenting...

Thats okay Pratik, you read and commented and thats all that matters.

Swayam's love is so pure and his promises and emotions true to his heart so its really hard for a girl to resist to his charm 😳

Swayam are Sharon are so magical a couple that they held time captive and Time stood still to witness the magical moment.

Thanks again

Sudha

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kuhu bhatta

@kuhu_Arsha

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

nams ur proposal os was damm awsummm dear,,,,,,,,

luv d y u describe dey r feelings👍🏼

i jst luv it,,,

ps. missing ur updates😔

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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: tanzz15
Awesome as usual:) i am really very sorry for being so late sudha.hope you understand the reason dear...hugs...

Thank you so much Tania 😊

and no sorry needed, i understand...

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Nisha

@NishKP

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

@ *lovely7010*
it was mind blowing os
just loved it

Edited by kriyaansh4ever1 - 13 years ago

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

@maneet- Lovely OS...
the proposal was really unique . . . . . 😛
In a theatre & that too in front of crowd 👏

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#89

lovely7010 aka manmeet aka mannu i love ur sweet n simple OS...dat was really cute...proposing ur best frnd n dat to infrnt of whole world n thread awwiieee i love da idea...loved it yaar