D3 OS : I'm back. But not for you !COMPLETED! - Page 2

Updated guys! Check the Part 1 wala post itself..Usme hi update kar diya..

Hi. . ,. . .
Thankz 4 d pm. . . .
It was awsome. . . .
I jst lovd it. . . . .
The way kriya handeled the situation was awsome. . . . .
Hi,plz plz plz continue. . .
I realy wanna knw tat wat is gona go nw. . .
Plz continue. . . . . .

the 2ndpart was good...can we expect part3??

Part 3? Hmm..sure! But I'll stop with Part 3 ok? =P Thanks for the love guys =D

loved the second part...

make it a third part OS also...

u can edit the second post u made...

plzzz...

at least clear out the MU...

Lol! Ok ok baba :D I'll do a Part 3. =D And thanks for the appreciation :)

Nice post..part 3 will be great..plz update 😊

i want another part..dis cant end here...one mre part plzzz😭

continue na...pleash...tab mein LAMBAAAWALA cmmnt dugi...

I again loved it..:)
Everything was jus perfect.. Reaction was d same as expected..
Sharon as always out of anger blurted out.. Huh
I loved swayam.. He was angry too but kriya was more imp. To him.. After all bestie h uski..!
I loved dis line..
If it had been Taani she would have wept and melted. But Kriya stared back with so much of confidence that even she was in awe..
Hahaha.. Tani hahaha:p
N n i loved dat dance of kriyaansh.. D same passion,agression,feeling of hurt,pain.. Evrythinf came out.
Swayam still was thinkin how to ctrl rey but he was late...
Rey too spoke out harshely on her..
N kriya.. She being she.. Lostened to dem all as she too knows they hav evry rite..
N thn dat legendary dialogue..
"I m back but not for U"..
N she walkd away!!
Acc. To me d end was a bit invomplete..
U shud hav explained dat part too coz somewhr dat was d main thing..
But jo b h.. Loved it :)