D3 OS : I'm back. But not for you !COMPLETED! - Page 3

Awesome os luved it

@Pihu you make my day with those long comments! Thanks a ton dear! And yup, it was abrupt ..is liye there's Part 3 and later Part 4 =P Baap re! Such a long OS na? =P

part 3 was superb...waiting 4 the last part of this os...

part 3 mast tha...

one thing does rey know about his condition by kria's mom

Woww. . . .
Awsome part. . .
Lovd it. . .
At last kriya ne sab sach bata diya. . . .
Abb buss shivam ka koi murder ker de,
n kriyaansh vapas mill jaaye. . . . . .
Fir,d3 gang back 2gethr . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
Vaise jaldi nxt part update krdo. . . .
Egarly waitng 4 it. . . .
Please itni jaldi complet mat krna,
take ur time. . . . . .
And we want more and more parts 4 it. .
Please. . . . . . .
Thanks 4 d pm.. . . .
Update soon. . . . .

@madhu Lol! yaar, OS hai toh complete hoga hi! Will try to write as long as I can and as long as it makes sense ;)

Yaa u r r8. . .os hai toh jaldi khatam toh hoga,
bt, kya karu,
KR ko show pe toh ek saath dekh nahi sakte,
so,aise ff/ss/os padh ke,un dono ko ek sath imagine kr lete hai. . .

Finally! Completed! Hope its good =P

Ye hui na baat..
Glad dat u continued it.. I really was eager to know how wud u frame d story n must say tht u wrote it brilliantly.. Amazing use of words..lines.. Loved it!!
Thankgod.. Yash sensed d problem n tokd to swayam..
Had he not interacted wid swayam.. They cud hav neva been successful in sorting d things out..
I hav always cherished reyam's bond.. They r d real gem!!
Rey wud listen to everything swayam wud say n d same goes wid swayam!!
Amar bharat n rinni too joined:)
Best part was as d story was proceeding everyone got included in d story surprisingly..
N d best was when sharon confronted kriya n yes she was right,nobody had been successful in stoppin kriya... Yes now vicky n rey's bond has somehow weakend bt they wud aleays remain chuddy buddies...
N d plan was actually a master blaster.. U executed it really well!!
N bharat's one line made d tears to mak thier way put of my eyes...
N swayam.. Timing dude!!
Loved it.. Atleast now they know.. Y kriya left dem all of a sudden bt few things r still incomplete.. Kriyaansh.. Waitin to c it..
Loved d update !!

Woww. . . .
Awsome. . . . . .
Kriyaansh r 2gethr. . . .
Haiiyee rey is such a sweet heart. . . . . .
0n m waitng 4 the nxt story. . . . . . . .