D3 OS : I'm back. But not for you !COMPLETED! - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Finally kriyaansh r completed:D
I was laughing at d state of d group when they came out of d pronciple's office.. They thot kriya wud bang dem but nothing happened:p
N yash n group.. I really liked dem.. They dud every possible thong to get kriya n her friends bk together:)
N reyansh.. I love him.. Lik mad for him..
He is too too too sweet:)
I loved d every line which rey said.. U justifies his tasks very well lik y he liked tani n how he cnt forget kriya.. Fully justified...
D last para was extra emotional.. Was in tears :(
N d best part was when kriya completed rey.. I want u<3
Happy happy :D
Nil's dislogue at d end was fab.. Haha!!

Overall.. U wrote beautifully.. U gave justice to each n evry character..
U gave consideration to every minute thing..
I loved it.. :) n d best part wS u completed dis os today itself :p
Loved it!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kreya_dance

@Pihu you make my day with those long comments! Thanks a ton dear! And yup, it was abrupt ..is liye there's Part 3 and later Part 4 =P Baap re! Such a long OS na? =P



:D long but a brilliantly written OS :)
N ur welcome re!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
mujhe parts 3 n 4 ka pm nai mila tha 😡 but padhke itna achha laga, i forgot all my anger...😆 dis was a beautiful story, really, n d way u picked everythin frm d current track..camp, taani...it was all wow..i loved rey's words to taani..n kriyaansh r always magical, no words for them
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
Part 3 and 4 were
mind blowing
loved them
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35
Awsome os jst loved it ..!
Every thing was jst written perfectly ..!
Amazingly written ..!
Loved d ending ..!
Thanx 4 d pm ..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
awesome os...i read all 4 parts at one go...loved it...great work...😊👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
Thanks guys! =D
@payal Ooops! Main bhool gayi PM karna! Sorry =) And thanks for liking the story =D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
wow yaar it was... no words i just lovd it it made me emotional rey's confession in the end... it made me cry with joy...
ther plan was awesome
kriya's attitude was balanced she did'nt take any insult neither was she rude...😳
in short
i'm loving it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
kk

what was this...

song was awesome

story took slow pace but it was beautiful...

i loved every moment...

what to say more...

i m emotional now..

so cant write more...

luv u for giving this os
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
AH Mazing a Perfect story ..nothing can get better then this i guess..

No Evilness ... True Friendship True Love True Dance ..

Now this is the real d3 we loved we admired we praised ... full of dosti full of dance full of masti full of true love ...

just PERFECT ... thank u for this story ...

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