OS : Is it just a dream?!*Completed*

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kriyansh19

@kriyansh19

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Awsome update ..!
Loved it ..!
Very hot n funny at d end ..!
Thankx 4 d pm ..!

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Pihu.k11

@Pihu.k11

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Mumma.. It ended :(
I loved dis update.. D bond between kriyaansh,u showed it really well..
N god,rey is so so carin :)
d romantic parts..hah... Passionate again bt stl wid d same innocence n purity..!
M so in love wid rey <3
N poor kriya.. Dat dream was an incident of her past life.. Actually a funny one:p
Hehe..
Loved it :)
Cant u continue it..??
Obv u cnt.. Mai pgl hu.. Title has been justified already..
Hmmm :(
Waitin fr another OS frm u !!

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Aarushi Gupta

@cool_star14

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

AHEM !!! AHEM !!!!

d OS was really hawt!!!!!!!

kriya in red saree... haye!!!!!

kriyaansh romance was out of this world...

kriya's dream was reality ...😆

luved it...

Edited by cool_star14 - 13 years ago

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Namrata Jadhav

@nj_SRKholic

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

itz amazing dear..!!

lol seriously d dream would b d reality i nvr thot so..!!
loved it..!!

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Aarushi Gupta

@cool_star14

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

waiting for d nxt part!!!!!!!

update soon...

Edited by cool_star14 - 13 years ago

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Fabulous...just fabulous

loved it meow

seriously yaar kahan se aate hai tujhe ideas

it was hawwwt one...

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Anki

@KR_anki_ArSha

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

finally you updated...😃

wow that was hot...☺️

and dream sequence was unexpected...😲

love the suspence...turned out to be lil bit funny...😆

please try to continue it na...

over all awesome os...

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

so am sorry for the late comment...

arrey had openeed the reply dabba then close it without commenting only...

so now coming to the OS...

it was so lovely...

blissful reading surely...

the title so apt ...

i mean dream only lead to this... aise dreams aate hi rhe ...

par as i told u my views abt the dream...

it was really a surprise the significance of the dream...

kriya's angry pout was so adorable...

and rey bhi zyada der tak dur thodi na reh sakta hai kriya se chahe jo kare...

18+ jaisa kuch bhi nhi tha... and vaise bhi every1 reads it... lekin fir bhi...

so just i adored and loved the OS>...

aise hi khayal jaise-2 aate jaaye likh diya kar...😃