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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#61

sorry sorry sorry... I know i'm late bt... I was a bit busy today... Hehehe... Sorry... Nd nw coming to ur OS... To... Hhhaaayyyeee... It was sooo damn freaking hawt yarrr... Maza aagya padhke... 😉 ... I loved ittt... Awesomeee meow... U did a fabb job... 😃

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Nicely written - the dream was an incident from her childhood right if I understood correctly...the passion of the romance was brought out effectively

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

aw... this one is too good...

m left with no words to express this...

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senoritashweta

@senoritashweta

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

totaly hawt !!!

no words left..!!

bt i didnt get pm 😭...hope u pm me d next tym..!

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kuhu bhatta

@kuhu_Arsha

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

hawt hawt os,,,,,,,,,,,

i jst luv it,,,,,,

thnkx 4 pm,,,,,,,,,,,,n so sry 4 late cmt

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Hey dear great OS 😃
Start was indeed hot and passionate.😳
Vaise i don't think any 18 wali warning was needed 😕
Kria was just remembering d incident in past that's y she was terrified so couldn't sleep.

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pallavi.14

@pallavi.14

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

sorry i'm really late...

wat an amazing, extremely hawwt nd exciting OS...👏
ahh... i'm dead by kriyaansh's chemistry...🤢

just loved it...❤️

awwiee dat was funny kriya has sleepless nights boz one of her childhood memory is haunting her... hahah...🤣🤪

thanx fr pm...

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Shailja

@---Shailu---

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#68

WOWWIIEE...TRUELY LOVED IT !!! MUJHE LAGA I'VE ALREADY THIS ONE...BUT NEVAR MIND...I GUESS U POSTED BEFORE TOO... WELL JO BHI HAI I TOTALLLY LOVED IT ALL...FROM THE VERY START TILL THE END...EVERYTHING WS ARRANGED PERFECTLY AND ACC. TO THE THEME TOO... VERY GRACEFULLY WRITTEN... U WERE FABTASTICALLY MARVELLOUS DIDU...TOTALLY LOVED IT... PLS DO WROTE MORE PARTS OF IT...DYING TO READ...AND PLS APNAFASHION WAALA BHI UPDATE KRO NA PLSSS...