SwaRon OS ||Entangled Destiny||

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Anjie di!! 🤗
The starting is very interesting!! 😃
I really liked how you kept the story moving..concentrating on only one thing and one person! 👍🏼
really looking forward to it! 😊
waiting for the next update! 😳

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shaani2209

@shaani2209

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Anjie firstly congo for posting it😳

its a lovely one..sharon cursing and begging god to just not to make her day worse...waiting to read the next part...

thanks for the pm...

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_bellaSwan_

@_bellaSwan_

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

ya it was nice ,nice to read it from sharon pov .update soon iam waiting for swayam's entry

Edited by bhanumathi - 13 years ago

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nly4usharon

@nly4usharon

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: --Rose--
Wow awesome :-):-) Plz pm me when u update:-)

thanks for the comment well i will definitely pm you :)

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nly4usharon

@nly4usharon

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: beeny
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unres
it's nice update plz pm me d next😃

thanks il pm you once i update

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nly4usharon

@nly4usharon

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: ABBY92
It was cute to see Sharon cursing every thing she likes cause she's getting late !! Can't wait for the next part !!

thanks alot for the comment abi i hope my work doesnt disappoint you all

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nly4usharon

@nly4usharon

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon
I always love a swaron story from Sharons POV. Fab one and waiting for the next part. Poor sharon😳 I want to see our hero enter fast, wow sparks will def fly. Thanks loved the start.

well its not exactly from sharon's POV its the narrator POV and yeah in the futrure parts you can expect swayam's and sharon's POV...thank you fro the comment and in the next part our hero definitely enters the storywell i kept is as simple as it can be. M glad that you liked my start ):

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nly4usharon

@nly4usharon

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: D3rocksss
Sharon on a scooty
Amazing concept
Waiting for s nxt part

hmm thank you i hope you ppl will be satisfied with the other parts :)

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nly4usharon

@nly4usharon

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: --Rumeli--
Anjie!!!i really liked the whole sharon part..and I have lots of questions..cz u kept most it a suspence as why she goes to the old man!who is that old man!!many more!!so better update soon!!as u said its goin to consist many parts..so why dont you convert it into a SS!!!

thanks rumeli :) hmm so many questions haan well most of your will be answered in the next part so have a look on it...hmm even i was thinking its the same but lets see depending on the response il try to continue :) once again thanks for the comment dear