SwaRon OS ||Entangled Destiny||

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SwaRon OS-Entangled Destiny

The old man glanced at his watch and glared at the girl who was standing in front of him with big green eyes pleading him to give her one last chance so that she won't repeat it next time but little she knew was she was never going to change. She is saying some or the other reason and daily she is coming late. This behaviour of hers irritated him the most Although she is efficient in whatever she does but doesn't mean she can come whenever she wants to because for him discipline matters alot. She tried whatever she can do but nothing worked all that went in vain because this time the old man was very serious and dint fall to her cutie antics like he usually does. She went on begging him to give her one last chance but old man dint even cared to listen to her. He was so much obsessed with her that he thought instead of talking to her he just raised his hand and pointed his finger towards the main door indicating her to leave but still she continued saying "one last chance" He just sighed and forcefully dragged her out

She screamed "One Last Chance"

Peep''''..peep''...PPPeeepp''ppepeepp

She looked here and there and realized that all this while she was dreaming standing at the traffic signal waiting for the red light to turn green but thank God the vehicles sound decibel was more than her and no one listened to her. She hated the vehicles horn and was about to shout to shout at the auto rikshaw wala then suddenly realized that it was her mistake the traffic light was turned green and all the vechiles besides her were leaving but her scooty was not moving even a bit. She immediately started it and left from there raising the accelerator thinking about the same scene which she just imagined. She very well knew that the same is going to happen once she reach there. The other day the old man personally called her and said her to there by sharp 9am but today again she was late. She looked at her left hand to know what exactly the time was but again in vain because she knew was going to be late so instead of putting her watch on her hand she kept it in her bag thinking that after reaching there if everything is well then she will wear it. Also there is one more reason why she dint kept the watch because she knew whenever she goes late the old man has the habit of asking her "What time it is ?" so she thought it would be better if she keep it in the bag.

She is cursing herself that even after so many warnings how can she be late? she wished she dint slept last night infact she is thinking that she shouldn't have leave from there so that today she wouldnot be late.she cursed her alarm and her sleep . Morning she cursed her alarm for disturbing her sleep and now she is cursing her sleep that even after the ring of the alarm how can she just switched off and again go to sleep.

Daily while returning to her home she used to pluggin her ear phones and enjoyed listened to her collections because that was the only time when she could hear what all she collected and she wished the distance to be little more longer so that she can listen to one more song of her favourites but now she is cursing for travelling such a long distance (though its not longer) she is wishing that the distance would be little less It would have been best if its located beside her house itself then there is no need for her to travel.

Most of times she used to enjoy looking at others while travelling because she somehow relates all the images and makes a funny story out of it Some group of friends doing masti and college students going their clg 3,4 members on one bike,couple fighting on the bike arguing that one is responsible for the other to be late,people busily walking on the footpath to reach their destination,school children crying to goto the school and the parents manofying them .It seemed liked God had created all of them and is watching all scenes It was like they all were enacting a scene but now she doesn't want to see any sight ,she hated it because all this was becoming a disturbance for her and couldn't concentrate on driving fastly.she became more worried. One was definitely sure that today he is going to throw her out.

She was fascinated towards cars she likes them a lot when ever she sees any new car she admires it as if it is a human and stares at it not only that after reaching home she learns more about that car and saves it different models but now those cars have become a Big disturbance for her . she dint even leave the one who invented car because all the cars were moving more faster than her and also blocking her way By this way it was becoming difficult for her bike to find a way in between those cars.

All this while she reached another signal and now her frustration had no bounds "Y this bladly signals have to be there?" She knew nothing can be done except wait till the signal to turn green .she sighed and looked up to sky saying " Bas yahi hona tha..aaj aapse mujhe bachne ki vinti bhi nahi kar sakti kyunki pehle hi aap mujhe bahut baar bachaye toh ab kis muh se phirse bachane ke liye kahungi but still pls God agar aap chaho toh aaj ka din mere liye Bad banadene because I deserve it lekin worse mat banao plz God I beg you.."

To be continued...

The journey is not yet over she dint reach her destination till now.

Hmm i think i have bored you all by this update and about the girl whoelse the girl could be? well its none other than Sharon and i think i have disappointed you all by not introducing Swayam but i promise in the next update ill definitely get him This OS contains more parts. well i know this part is so lame but m sorry i cant help it . Do give your reviews about this one . Good,bad or worse koi bhi chalega

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow awesome :-):-) Plz pm me when u update:-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hmmm ...plz added sme color plz
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it's nice update plz pm me d next😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It was cute to see Sharon cursing every thing she likes cause she's getting late !! Can't wait for the next part !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I always love a swaron story from Sharons POV. Fab one and waiting for the next part. Poor sharon😳 I want to see our hero enter fast, wow sparks will def fly. Thanks loved the start.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Sharon on a scooty
Amazing concept
Waiting for s nxt part
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Anjie!!!i really liked the whole sharon part..and I have lots of questions..cz u kept most it a suspence as why she goes to the old man!who is that old man!!many more!!so better update soon!!as u said its goin to consist many parts..so why dont you convert it into a SS!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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itz amazing dear.. cont soon plz..!!
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itz amazing dear..!! cont soon plz..!!

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