KR SS : ~|| A NOTE || ~ (completed) - Page 7

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Posted: 13 years ago
#61

In our defense we were really busy in preparations of some school events, so it was really not possible to update this.

Btw thank you so much guys for all those likes and comments. Really sorry couldn't personally reply to each one of you..

Here's the last part of the SS. Hope you all like it.

Enjoy 😊

LAST PART


"Baatcutter here I come "

Here I stood in front of Dehradun International airport ( meko nhi pata hai ya nhi)

Hmm so I only had her address and here I am in Dehradun. But huhh I am Reyansh Singhania the son f the business tycoon Rajveer Singhania. Finding a house in Dehradun shouldn't be much of a difficult task.

And indeed it was not. He had mailed the address to, some of his men the day before coming to Dehradun and it took them only 2 days to find it.

The next day I decided to go and meet her. My heart was beating at an unimaginable pace. All the memories from past flashed in front of me like a motion picture. Meeting her, falling for her ,every moment spent with her, the pre-valentines day, the heartbreak, the pain, Living like a lifeless soul for the past 9 months and at last landing here in Dehradun where it all started. Somewhat like a cycle of love.

"Cycle of love" err when did you became so cheesy??!...Rey you have lost it" said my mind.

"Uhh I should better go and talk to her or I would land myself in a mental asylum for sure" I thought. I breathed a sigh and walked up to her door and pressed the bell.

Ding-Dong!!

After a few minutes the door was opened by non-other than my angel. She was in her pajamas and looked no less than a doll. Damn cute!!!

She looked wide-eyed at me as if I am a ghost.

"Rey" she literally shouted.

"Uhh ya baatcutter" I said smiling at the same time enjoying her state.

She stepped back as I came forward.

"Rey, what..what are you doing here??. I had already told you na that I'm not interested in you, then why the hell are you here??!!. *chuckles* you came here from Mumbai to Dehradun to meet me? Huhh still love me na.. I knew it, Kriya you are great (facing her back to him and spreading her arms to depict greatness) well, well... Reyansh Singhania I am seriously bored. I have left that college so you are clearly of no use to me. So (now facing him and showing attitude) why are you here?.

I simply kept quiet and brought that note forward. She at once recognized it as she stared at it horrified.

"wha..what is this??

"ahh you don't know" I said coming forward.

"No (again turned her back to him) you brought it and now you are asking me? huhh Reyansh the dude has seriously lost it over love.

"You seriously don't know about this" now a bit angry. I handed her the paper. She took it rather snatched t and acted as if reading.

"wha..what is this *chuckling*huhh so this what brought you here. Ahh so sorry but this is not written by me but someone else. (Now facing him and smirking) how many times do I have to repeat myself I don't love you!! Huhh (now facing his back)

Now I had lost my calm, I could not take it anymore. I turned her around fiercely, gripping her shoulder tightly.

"What the hell" she screamed.

"Can u stop pretending and tell me the truth. I know you are hiding something. Kriya please I know you baatcutter, you would never break my heart.( she loosens herself from the group and now her back turned to him). Baatcutter,I love you and will be with you always!! (Voice breaking a bit). Trust me and tell me for god sake kriya..Kriyaa..

She din't respond. I again turned her towards me. Tears trickled down her cheeks. She looked at me . she looked vulnerable and hurt and in a matter of seconds she was in my arms. I was bit startled but then held her passively trying to calm her down.

"sh..shh kriya stop cryng,Kriya.."

"I am ...i am really sorry Rey. I am sorry. I din't mean to hurt but I ..I had no choice" she tried to speaking between her sobs.

"shhh..i know everything..i know you promised your mom, " I said as I tried to cup her face.

"Why din't you tell me? You could have told me, I would have understood" I said removing my hands and now looking at the ground.

She sensed the change in my behavior and held my hands and said

"I know, I should have told you but I thought I was simply the wrong one for you and I wanted you to move on "she said.

"And you thought I will move on? You will say few things that you don't love me, you used me and I will hate you? That's just not possible baatcutter. Me love isn't that weak I love you and always will. And dare not say you are the wrong one, I don't like hearing such things about my princess".

She smiled looking at me and I again pulled her into a tight hug.

"I love you Rey"

"I love you too Kriya"

We stayed that way for I don't remember how much time. It just felt so right, so perfect. Having her in my arms. If it had been on me I would have kept her that way forever. At last I was with my love, my princess, my baatcutter.

"Kriya "said a familiar voice. We both turned and looked wide-eyed towards the person standing in front.

Uh-oh RLB (Rani Laxmi Bai).


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Okay so the last part updated!!...okay okay I know u people will probably kill us for such an ending..err..we wanted to..mann kiya esliy aise end kiya..

Phr bhi do hit the like tab and cmmnt ( all jhoota, chappal, stone,boulders..Etc etc. allowed)

Criticzm/suggestion allowed.

Do tell us what u think about this SS. Do leave your reviews.

Now running out of here>>>>>>> *in full speed* isse phele ki koi maare..BHAAGO!!!!!!!!

Edited by muzzy_sk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#62
res

unres

yippie first one to comment

awsm update

but why did u end at such a point

ah i wanted to read further yaar

chalo neva mind
Edited by abhiyakreya - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#63
nice update...par tuney kyu aisa end kiya...thanks 4 the pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#64
loved it...

it was complete in a sense...

sweet...

yep mke it an ss if u can
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Posted: 13 years ago
#65
1st of al thankz 4 the pm.
I was waitng 4 the update so badly. . .
Coming to the update. .
I jst lovd it. .
Kriya bhi na,kuch bhi kehti h. . .
Bt,i jst love the way rey ne use console kiya. ,
nw,to my question. .
May i knw wen u r writng so brilently so.why did u jst end it??
N perfct ending?
I need m ans. . .
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Posted: 13 years ago
#66
Awesum updte
luvd it
fiinally kriyansh together
happy fr dem
bt RLB ???
uska kya hua ????
why did u stp it der
luvd ur SS
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Posted: 13 years ago
#67


yeh lo slipper tum dono ke liye
abrupt ending???
but i must say this part left me with many questions like who was right rey or kria??
loved that...
will miss this ss very much...

Edited by crazysky - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#68
nice update and thanx for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#69
Wonderful update gals.

this was superb..

finally kriyaansh met..
wish u could continue..

thanks for pms..

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Posted: 13 years ago
#70
amazinggg update,,,

bt ese kyn ending kiya😡

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