I wish I knew more-SwaRon OS - Page 6

Originally posted by: surbhimathur

Wow...that is d word vich escaped my mouth aftr reading dis wonderful OS! 👏
D way u portrayed sharon's feelings was soo perfect! 👍🏼
I always love vulnerable sharon... 😳
infront of swayam obviously coz dat is d feeling vich shows us dat dis feeling is only for his swayam..nobody else...😃
as she gets vulnerable infront of him only!
and dis feeling is permanent in sharon's heart! ❤️

Thank you for exploring this feeling of hers! 😊

Hiii Sudha sorry firstly for the late comment.Lately I'm so disturbed with the kinda scenes we are getting and also repeated posts on rapport that TanHa share...I am not visiting forum

lovely os dr...
thanks for pm yar...
really nice...

Sudha this was osm...i really loved the way u showcased each imp moments till now in swaron's life through sharon's pov...loved it..

Originally posted by: Sravani...

Hiii Sudha sorry firstly for the late comment.Lately I'm so disturbed with the kinda scenes we are getting and also repeated posts on rapport that TanHa share...I am not visiting forum

I loved it...Sharon always fights with herself...also the song completely suited the situation.It's my fav too.Keep writing.They say girls never forget the dates I love it that you actually included the dates in this OS.Donno about others but it feels special to remember dates 😳

Originally posted by: yasu2810

lovely os dr...
thanks for pm yar...
really nice...

Originally posted by: tanharocks

Sudha this was osm...i really loved the way u showcased each imp moments till now in swaron's life through sharon's pov...loved it..

Sudha you have no idea how much u have grown from ur first OS to this one. It was well thought and well penned. And it seemed complete. We all were at some point of time ecstatic about the actual confession on the show but there was no denying that it was abrupt and seemed incomplete. With sharon mentionin a finale to loose ends and barging into his room the next moment, there wasn't much that could appeal to sharon fans. This OS of urs has done full justice to the sharon we know and the sharon we love. The entire concept was amazing. Even the style of narration was fabulous. Though if u dnt mind me sayin it, it seemed to me that the song video in the beginning sort of broke the flow. The content and concept was so very intense and matured that it didn't need the video. But i speak only for myself here.. :)

Originally posted by: lyfisbeautiful

Sudha you have no idea how much u have grown from ur first OS to this one. It was well thought and well penned. And it seemed complete. We all were at some point of time ecstatic about the actual confession on the show but there was no denying that it was abrupt and seemed incomplete. With sharon mentionin a finale to loose ends and barging into his room the next moment, there wasn't much that could appeal to sharon fans. This OS of urs has done full justice to the sharon we know and the sharon we love. The entire concept was amazing. Even the style of narration was fabulous. Though if u dnt mind me sayin it, it seemed to me that the song video in the beginning sort of broke the flow. The content and concept was so very intense and matured that it didn't need the video. But i speak only for myself here.. :)

Loved it sudha.. pls keep writing more.. This was by far ur best piece of work!! And one of the most interesting concepts i hv come across so far! trust me when i say this cos i love reading OSs and i hv read quite a lot over here!! This was superb!!