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Phantasm

@Phantasm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: -Sakina-
Aww this was so beautifuly written.I love how Sharon's laughing in the beginning..and the way she confessed,facing the sea.:)

Keep writing more on Swaron,and don't forget to PM me when you do:)

thanks sakina...working on two more...will post it soon

Originally posted by: Anindita91
swayam was so scared...😲 he thought she would get angry n leave him...but she didn't...😃 loved the way she laughed...she blushed n then she confessed her love for him...☺️ u expressed everything so well...👏 sharon finally said those 3 magical words...🥳n then swayam too said them...awww... loved this os...its awesome...keep it up with ur good work...👍🏼 do write more n when u do so plz pm me...😊

thanks...and yup he was scared..it reminded him of rdx sir's party...

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron
Last part was amazing
Finally sharon confess her love
I really loved last line when she said she love him n
the same ocean which was
mysterious in its own way...just the
way their love was...pure, intense
and at the same time fiery and
delirious.
Loved it

thanks and yeah u said it all...

Originally posted by: Sudha-SK
Lovely end to a fabulous OS. Swayam must be so happy, as its such a nice feeling when finally someone reciprocates the same love with equal intensity and passion.
Thx for the PM.

thanks sudha...i know it feels like you have won the battle😊

Originally posted by: kool kanz
superb 1 rutu...👏loved d way sharon talks abt her feelings and d truth dat she has already fallen in love with swayam even before he can do ...👏👏i really hope v get 2 c in d serial also

i really hope v get to see the same😃

Originally posted by: -Ripal-
lovelyy update
swaron r sooo cutee <3
fantastic love it
how i wish dis happens for real in the show
sharon saying i love too swayam aww its like a dream cum true lol

beautifuully written
keep writing more
nd thnkss for the pm

fingers crossed for that to happen😉

Originally posted by: chimpukli10
hey it was awesum OS dear...do pm me when u update d next part...

thanks...and that was the last part dear😊

Originally posted by: tanukaswaron
awesome update rutu !!👏
i loved how sharon finally let out her feelings and excepted that she too loves swayam the same way he does with the same intensity and passion 😃
swaron are truly adorable 😳
thanks for the pm.
do write more of these amazing os's on swaron.
will be waiting...

thanks...and adorable they are😳

Originally posted by: luvSwaron4ever
its beautiful...loved how swayam and sharon shared talks with each other abt their relation...thats wat i crave to see always in D3...but they talk less compartively...thanks for the PM...loved the OS...do write more

words...they do talk less in the show ...abhi abhi dikha rahe the...but that was momentary...and things are kept hanging...they need to resolve that😳

Originally posted by: swaron_d3
it was amazing..the way sharon says SWAYAM SHIKHAWAT is so adorable...i knew she always admired him and whenever she would confess it it would be the best moment of all! in the perfect setting i.e in front of the sea...thnx for the pm
do keep me sending PMs regarding ur further works!

thanks and yup v all know she admires him...so the cat is out of the bag😆

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Fantastic way to finish ur OS ...I wuld call it the new beginning tho- this is a scene of my dreams for Swaron ...seaside with Swayam hugging Sharon from behind and resting his chin on her shoulder...the ocean is perfectly described & perfect symbol for their luv -- deep & infinite...Sharon's confession -wuld b nothing less than magic to c that happening for real - all in all an exhilarating experience reading this one ...pls write more & pm me each time!!!!! 😊

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neetha

@neetha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

wooowww...rutu..just so simple yet so beautiful..u knw??/its a treat to read ur write ups...

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: meevee
Fantastic way to finish ur OS ...I wuld call it the new beginning tho- this is a scene of my dreams for Swaron ...seaside with Swayam hugging Sharon from behind and resting his chin on her shoulder...the ocean is perfectly described & perfect symbol for their luv -- deep & infinite...Sharon's confession -wuld b nothing less than magic to c that happening for real - all in all an exhilarating experience reading this one ...pls write more & pm me each time!!!!! 😊

hey thanks a ton dear...i love reading your comments...

Originally posted by: neetha
wooowww...rutu..just so simple yet so beautiful..u knw??/its a treat to read ur write ups...

thanks neetha...n i m flattered by ur comment😳

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---Priya---

@---Priya---

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#55

awesome update rutu 👏

the way sharon confessed facing the sea...

very well written...

plz pm me when u write on SwaRon... 😳

sorry for being late... got caught with some works so cudnt read updates..

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

The ending mashallah, it is just awesome. Truly Rutu their love is pure and intense at the same delirious. Yaar it is supercool. Thanks so much.

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Mahirah

@Mahirah

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

omg this one is shooo shooo adorable and sweet

Ilove this OS...it is soo cute and different

you are a fab writer please do pm me wenever you write anything ...would love to read it ^^

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Destiny_015

@Destiny_015

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Deja vu...nyc choice of nme...it ws a beautiful updte...swaron dncn in tu bin bataye...sooo romntic...lvd wen sharon ws feedin swayam...lyk any1 i also imgned tanha in dis scene..bt hum swaronians ki futi kismat...we r nvr goin 2 c dat...bt atlst we cn imgne dat nd dat too bcz f u..thnks a lot fr dat...swaron gir gye nd rolld off d hill...i ws suprsd dat dey didnt brk deir kamariya...swt kiss dey had..it ws full f sugar...lvd sharon's realisation...nd alng wit swayam i also gt scrd at sharon's exprsns wen she gt up...lovely union...lvly os..👍🏼😃

Edited by tannu_swayam - 12 years ago

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-.Nisha.-

@-.Nisha.-

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

awesome os👏
Loved both the parts😃
Nicky part was hillarious🤣
Swayam sharon dancing together on a slow song
Sharon feeding swayam and he purposely coughing so that she patts his back😉
swaron romance😳
beauthfully written!!👍🏼
Keep coming up wid such amazing swaron write-ups😃
Thanks for the pm

Edited by --NishaGoyal-- - 12 years ago

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: ---Priya---
awesome update rutu 👏
the way sharon confessed facing the sea...
very well written...
plz pm me when u write on SwaRon... 😳

sorry for being late... got caught with some works so cudnt read updates..

Thanks a ton😃

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