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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey that was beautifully written
thanks for the PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey..I LOVE this.Its really cute.:)
Update the next part soon,and do PM me.:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey thanks...😊

Originally posted by: swaronluvr

aweome os..nicky bros r funny as always..n i loved d part wen sharon feeds swayam..awwiieee..it was beautifully written..n i loved it totally..UPDate soON


thanks... and that feeding part na even that was my favourite...i imagined shantanu doing the same😳

Originally posted by: -Ripal-

awsum super cutee lovely

swayam sharon r soo sweett awww
update the next part soon


thanks and yeah update by evening😊

Originally posted by: ---Priya---

Rutu awesome yaar...👏

sharon feeding swayam & swayan acting baar baar as he is coughing 😆
the last part was just fab 😍
beautifully written..
thnx 4 da pm & update soon


thanks priya...and swayam toh chance mar raha hai😆

Originally posted by: asmaju

This was a very cute one.

Sharon asking for Swayam s permission aww.
Thanks for the pm.
Update soon.

hey thanks...and itna toh majnu boy deserves na😃

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron

Awesome os
Nicky bro r hilarious 😆
Sharon asking swayam for permission 😳
Last part was really cute
Update next part soon


thanks and nicky bros toh always crack me😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Suku_SwaRon

nautankibazz hai swayam😆 Well he deserves all the attention . Haye kya romantic dance hoga, they would be looking awesome together. Kash aise he ek scene D3 mai be hona chaheye. It was simply great a treat to read especially the dance part.I just dont know how many times i read that part. Plz jaldi update karo.


thanks and nauntanki swayam is a treat to watch(keeping in mind that shantanu is doing it☺️)

Originally posted by: sravani.gunturi

This is the cutest <3 <3 sharon feeding swayam...continue fast


thanks sravani...and yeah i ll update by evening..u too update ur FF fast😉

Originally posted by: meevee

Aww that were so cutely precious moments u described...always have wished to c sumthing like this in D3 itself...beautifully portrayed romantic moments...the feeding & coughing session, the rolling down, flowers in zulfein, the laughter together all of it - thanx for PM and pls update soon😊


hey thanks...and in few words u described the gist of the ss...it means a lot to me

Originally posted by: misha24

Awww so cute... i loved it. Sharon feeding swayam and asking permission... too good!!! Plz update the nxt part soon and do pm me


hey thanks...yup update by evening😊

Originally posted by: zoharocks

really cute and do pm me...pretty plzzz


thanks a ton😊


thanks sukanya😊





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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: marauder

Loved this OS. Nicky bros were funny but it genuinely contains some of the most romantic sequences. Loved the Sharon feeding Swayam part . That was sweet. Waiting for next update.


thanks...and nicky bros jahan entertainment toh banta hai boss😎

Originally posted by: Sudha-SK

Aww such a cute SwaRon OS. Loved it from the very beginning. Sharon feeding Swayam and Swayam's cough acts for her attention was super cute. The end took me to SwaRon dreamland.😍Do write more on SwaRon and Thanks for the PM.




hey thanks sudha...btw i loved ur os haan do write more😃

Originally posted by: neetha

rutu kill me..i nw realised m such a bad writer...😭goshhh..ths was so beautiful..i had a big smile on ma face as i read ths...u r awesome..ths was just ur second wrk...hey plss start writin more..it an order..😆


i could so imagine swayam's cuteness n sharon's care..hayye..they are MAGICAL...❤️


hey neetha dont scare me by that...u too write beautifully...and yeah 2nd one
and yup magical they are😳

Originally posted by: drooler

hey that was beautifully written

thanks for the PM...


thank you😊

Originally posted by: -Sakina-

Hey..I LOVE this.Its really cute.:)

Update the next part soon,and do PM me.:)


thanks sakina...and yeah update by evening...😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
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really loved it...
Waiting for your next update
pls do pm me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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super duper cute os rutu...👏 loved it...both swayam n sharon r so sweet and adorable...😃 plz update soon n pm me next time when u update...i am adding u to my buddy list...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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pls update soon ...ppm me abt it😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome os yaar... plz update fast and plz pm me wen u update...
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PART2

After an hour or so Swayam could feel someone struggling on his chest...who could it be...none other than Sharon and a smile crept on his face...But within few seconds his smile faded. Because Sharon got up with a jolt and started looking here and there and finally her eyes rested on Swayam...she had a blank expression on her face...and for the first time Swayam couldn't make out what was going in her mind...he was hell scared.

And to his surprise Sharon started laughing...yet again...for the first time Swayam had seen her laughing so hard in a day...yes she does smile ...but doesn't literally laugh holding her stomach even at sensible jokes or non-sense jokes cracked by Vicky...and today there she was laughing hard, holding stomach ...that too twice ...in a single day!!!!

Sharon said" Swayam ...you..look..as..if...you... have..seen...a...ghost...hahahahh... look at you. " Swayam was stupefied and so he asked "Why were you looking at me like that?"

To which Sharon replied blushing "Well ...ummm...i was wondering... when we rolled down...umm you were on top of me...but now when I see... I m on top of you...so..."

The blushing was clear seen by Swayam and so he asked her with a smirk "Should I remind what happened few minutes back between us?"

Sharon couldn't stop blushing by his comment and hide her face by burying it in his chest...and mumbled "I do remember."

"ummm Swayam? "

"hmmm" Swayam replied

"Things are going to change after this...na" said Sharon. To which Swayam replied "I hope so" and encircled her waist and enjoyed the scent of her hair...And Sharon continued "Why were you staring at me when I got up...you looked tensed"

"Umm... actually I thought that you got angry since I crossed my line and that you might regret it. I mean... I do certainly know that we are on trial relationship and that I told you that you can leave me whenever u feel I m not suitable for you..but the moment I saw the look on your face I thought this is it ...i have lost her...and now you would leave me just like you did after RDX sir's party...i got scared that I have lost you..."saying this he got up and sat.

Sharon's heart ached on recalling that incident the way she left him, she could feel the pain so she sat beside him and cupped his face and said "Swayam you have done nothing wrong...actually you know what Swayam ..I wanted to tell you something from many days...but didn't know how to tell you...but today I will just let it out. Ummm... I was wrong about you being intense...it was not just you...but even I was equally intense as you were...the fact that this feeling I have never felt was just hitting me...never in my life was I so affected...you affect me to the core Swayam.. I still recollect every memory, every moment that we have shared together...be it sweet, sour or bitter...those memories are etched in my heart...and no one or no moment can erase it...not even you..."

"I never considered this relationship to be trial...no it was not...the fact that we were together was more than enough for me and although you said you would make me fall in love with you...let me tell you Swayam before you could do it I had already fallen for you...don't ask me when ...even I m clueless about it...i have you and I don't want anything else now." And then she got up and facing the sea she shouted "Yes...I love Swayam Shekhawat just the way he loves me...and nothing can stop me from doing so."

Swayam too immediately got up and hugged her from behind and rested his chin on her shoulder and said "I love you too Sharon..."

And they stood there in each other's arm...unaware of the fact that time was passing...they were lost in their own little world...and were enjoying the serenity of late night ocean...the same ocean which was mysterious in its own way...just the way their love was...pure, intense and at the same time fiery and delirious.

THE END

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