SWARON OS-A Deja vu moment: part2 page4

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

Awesome os
Nicky bro r hilarious 😆
Sharon asking swayam for permission 😳
Last part was really cute
Update next part soon

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

nautankibazz hai swayam😆 Well he deserves all the attention . Haye kya romantic dance hoga, they would be looking awesome together. Kash aise he ek scene D3 mai be hona chaheye. It was simply great a treat to read especially the dance part.I just dont know how many times i read that part. Plz jaldi update karo.

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sravani

@Blessedfool

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

This is the cutest <3 <3 sharon feeding swayam...continue fast

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Aww that were so cutely precious moments u described...always have wished to c sumthing like this in D3 itself...beautifully portrayed romantic moments...the feeding & coughing session, the rolling down, flowers in zulfein, the laughter together all of it - thanx for PM and pls update soon😊

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Misha

@misha24

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Awww so cute... i loved it. Sharon feeding swayam and asking permission... too good!!! Plz update the nxt part soon and do pm me

Edited by misha24 - 13 years ago

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Zoha Sadaqat

@zoharocks

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

really cute and do pm me...pretty plzzz

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Loved this OS. Nicky bros were funny but it genuinely contains some of the most romantic sequences. Loved the Sharon feeding Swayam part . That was sweet. Waiting for next update.

Edited by marauder - 13 years ago

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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Aww such a cute SwaRon OS. Loved it from the very beginning. Sharon feeding Swayam and Swayam's cough acts for her attention was super cute. The end took me to SwaRon dreamland.😍Do write more on SwaRon and Thanks for the PM.

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neetha

@neetha

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

rutu kill me..i nw realised m such a bad writer...😭goshhh..ths was so beautiful..i had a big smile on ma face as i read ths...u r awesome..ths was just ur second wrk...hey plss start writin more..it an order..😆

i could so imagine swayam's cuteness n sharon's care..hayye..they are MAGICAL...❤️

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Phantasm

@Phantasm

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: luvSwaron4ever
nice update...loved the story...a party moment...they rolled down and wre laughn...reallly cute...patha nai D3 mein kab unhe aisey hasthey huey dekhengey...plzz update the next part soon...do PM me

i know these little moments...that we all crave for...dunno kab dekhne milenge...toh FF/SS/OS ke bahane we can rejoice😃

Originally posted by: D3rocksss
Awsum work plz update asap

will update by evening😉

Originally posted by: tanukaswaron
amazing os rutu !!
beautifully written 😊
i totally loved it 😃 the story is really nice .
will be waiting for the next part , update soon...
thanks for the pm.

thanks tanuka...i suppose thats ur name😊

Originally posted by: Swayamonly
Wow... It's sooo romantic...:) chori chori romance ha...:P not bad...:P nicky doing bromance...rofl... Bechara vicky...:P khamkha shart laga di...:P
n this party obviously reminded me of RDX party scene where Swayam said,"jab tum mera naam leti ho to accha lagta hai.. Pet kuch hota hai.. Pata nai isse stumach ache kehte hai ya stumach pain..":)
p.s. D dailauge is smthng like dat.. Plz bhavnao ko samzo..:P

n Rutu, why wudn't I like it yaar.. It's Swaron afterall n on the top that U r an awesome writer.. Loved it to d core..:):)

well as the name suggests ...its definitely a kinda rdx party moment... ☺️...and me an awesome writer baapre...😲