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Shishir Darsh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Great start. Will look forward to it. Update soon.

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shaani2209

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

awww this was a lovely update...in other words, sending to dreamland update😛...update soon :) thanks for the pm :)

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Snowey

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

A very good start, update soon and PM me when you do.

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@Death_Memories

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

kkk guys here is the next update

everybody is at the shekhawat mansion which looks like this

All of them had coffee and enjoying while sharon was still thinking and blushing a little remembering about shirtless swayam
after a while everyone got busy with their partners and suddenly sharon felt pang of pain remembering about shivam😔
then everybody had dinner and were enjoying while sharon had pasted a fake smile on her face no one noticed except swayam he was enjoying when suddenly he looked at sharon he could see her soft pink lips curved in a smile but the smile was not reaching her eyes. her eyes, that was the first time he looked intensely at her big green orbs. those eyes were mesmerizing and hypnotizing he felt like drowning in them but a second later he realized how her pretty eyes were filled with pain.the pain that he saw in her eyes made him sad,he also felt a rush of pain inside his heart, he didn't know or understand why but he wanted to make the pain go away so that her pretty smile reaches her eyes.he was so lost in staring at sharon that he forgot everyone was together.his staring session is broken when his mom asks him
swm:beta kuch aur loge
sw:nahi mom mera ho gaya
swayam thinks about her sudden attraction towards sharon but then he brushes away his thoughts
ecerybody gets up from dining table and were chatting when sharon receives a call she leaves the room to take the call,when she comes back she is looking gloomy kria notices this and asks
kr:kya hua sharon?any problem
sh:nhi wo bas phir se whi sab dad bahaar ja rhe out of town for business and i will be alone sooo...
kria notices the sharon's sad face and gets an idea
kr:tum aaj yhi mere ghar pe stay krlo pls
Sh:nhi mai wo...
kria cuts in between and shouts
kr:mom sharon aj raat yaha ruk sakti hai naa
krm:ofcourse beta isme puchne wali konsi baat hai sharon beta yeh bhi to tumhaare ghar jaisa hi hai
sh:aunty par...
kr:par war kuch nhi you are staying here and thats final
after this everybody greets kria,swayam and their mom and left
now kria and sharon are sitting in kria's room when swayam enters
sw:busy hai kya doll?
kr:bilkul nhi aur aapke liye to bilkul bhi nhi
(gives him a warm hug)🤗
sw:kkk to phir kya kar rhi thi meri doll?
kr;mere gifts ka wait.ap laaye hai naa mere gifts 😊
sw:meri doll mujhse kuch maange aur main naa lau aisa to ho hi nhi skta 😉
kr:to do mere gifts
sw:uhhhuhhh pehle meri price
kr:okkk here (gets up and pecks him on his cheek)
sw:ye hui na baat ye le tere gifts ye teri fav chocolate

sw:ye tera bada wala teddy

sw:ye tere dancing shoes

kr:thank u sam 😃 i love u 🤗
sw:love u too doll

all this while sharon was awestruck too see kria getting so much love and being pampered by swayam.she was really happy for kria but the next second it dawned upon her that she was missing all this .even though she had a lot of money but none of the teddys or shoes or chocolates she had can match up to kria's presents because they lack the feeling of love&warmth.
sharon was lost thinking how she is so rich yet so poor when kria interrupted by saying
kr:kkk sam kal clg jaana hai to aap so jao or hum bhi so jaate hai
sw:kkk good night my doll (pecks her forehead)
kr:gd nt
sw:gud nite sharon😊
sh:gd nite
and so all of them sleep
next morning sharon leaves early for her home to get ready for clg while swayam and kria got ready and were in swayam's room

sw:doll tumse ek baat puchu?mujhe pata nhi mai shayad galat bhi ho skta hu bt pta nhi ku muhe aisa lagta hai jaise sharon is not happy as in like she is in lot of pain.i mean uski smile it looks fake
(looks up at kria who was having sad expression but no surprise)
tum surprised nhi ho?do u know anything abt this?
kr:sam wo (she tells him the whole story about shivam and elims)
sw:OMG really how can someone heart somebody like that

swayam was shocked and bit angry too.he just wanted to kill that bas***d who broke sharon's heart.he had this sudden urge to pull sharon in a hug and make her pain go away.his chain of thoughts was broken by kria's voice
kr:kya hua sam where are u lost
sw:nhi kuch nhi just shocked anyways clg ke liye late hai lts go come on
they wnt to their car

they sat in the car and drive to college
they enter the college and all the girls are literally drooling over swayam
he was looking hot
(he was wearing the clothes he wore in the episode when he called sharon babes with the shades that he wore when he was practising sexy charm in locker room)

kr:ohooo kya baat hai saari ldkiya aap pe aate hi fida hmmm
sw:chup kar
kr:ok ok relax acha chalo class me chalte hai
they enter class and when they were entering suddenly sharon bumped into swayam and fell in his arms both of them were lost in each other's eyes (LLHH BG tone pehla nasha playing)sharon was looking beautiful and swayam could not take his eyes away same was happening with sharon
kriyansh:ahmm ahmm
swaron come to their senses and straighten themselves
they enter the class kriyansh sit together leaving swaron no other choice but to sit together
classes ended
rehearsel time

kr:yayyy guys im so happy ab hame footloose jitna hai bas
re:par baatcutter tumhe apni team ke liye sixth dancer bhi to dhoondna padega
kr:sixth dancer to mere pass already hai
ev:kaun?
kr:sam aur kaun
ev:what!!!! ise dance aata hai?no offence
sw:none taken aur haaa mujhe dance aata hai and mai audition de deta hu kkk
kr:iski kya zarurat hai sam
sw:zarurat hai doll tumhaari team ko bhi to mujhe approve karne ki zaroorat hai so music
(he dances same as he danced first time in d3 on the way i are song when sharon slapped him)
everyone's jaw dropped when they saw him dancing his moves were smooth as if he was flying
song ended and everybody clapped and welcomed him in the team suddenly RDX sir comes
RDX:guys mai tumhe ek bohot imp news dene aaya hu but before that kria kya tumne apni team ka sixth dancer dhoond liya
kr:yes sir ye hai swayam our 6th dancer
RDX:good,guys mai ye announce karne aaya tha ki goa me ek dance fest organize kiya jaa rha hai and our college has to partcipate.two couple dance and one team performace are to be prepared.aap sab ke paas two weeks hai so choose two couples for any ballroon style dance and also prepare one group act
all:ok sir

this is it guys
PRECAP
sharon sad and tensed.swayam's brilliant idea to make sharon get over shivam and sizzling swaron dance
keep reading will update soon

Edited by cenation123 - 13 years ago

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@Death_Memories

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: manasie
aaya agar tum swayam ko aise hi dikhaogi na toh me update ke bich mwle dreamland chali jaungi ☺️anyways awesome update...

thnx mannu

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Snowey

@Snowey

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Wow, another awesome update 👍🏼

Poor Sharon its so true that all the money in the world can't buy you affection, love.

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Awesome update. Waiting for the next update. Loveed the bonding of Kriya and Swayam.

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manasi

@manasie23

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

I m loving this SS... update soon...

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@Death_Memories

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Here is the nxt update full of swaron moments so enjoy
everybody in rehearsal hall after RDX left

kr:okkk guys bohot saari prep karni hai fest ke liye to phle couples decide karte hai
re:ya so guys ballroom dance style perform karne liye kon kon ready hai
ne:neha not doing ballroom only doing bollywood with babu
vi:kkk kagu
all:*facepalm*
re:nil and simmi?
ni:give me the beat guys
nahi chahiye mujhe ye chance
door rakho mujhse ballroom dance
ballroom mujhe samajh aata nahi
rest u can ask simmi
si:no way
kr:bharat and vishakha?
bh:ae yeda hai kya tu ,mai ball ball jo bhi hai aur vo bhi iske saath hmmm
vi:yaa man noways dude
kr:rey ek to ap aur mai karlenge
re:kkk par dusra
kr:sam or sharon. Sam ke pass to ballroom style me training bhi hai.kya khayaal hai sam
sw:no problem par sharon...
sh:okkk guys as u say
kr:to ab dance style decide karte hai
re:ham dono waltz ya tango?
kr:dono me se kaunsa
re:mmm tango
kr:kkk
re:aur guys tum
sw:salsa.whats say sharon
sh:as u say
kr:kkk guys aj se rehearsal shuru
swayam and sharon were alone in rehearsal hall for practise
swayam was about to say something when he noticed that sharon is lost somewhere he can clearly see the pain and insecurity in her eyes he could not bear to see her like this and so he blurted out
sw:he is not worth it sharon
sharon was shocked and confused because it was as if he read her mind she asked
sh:wt do u mean?
sw:kria told me what shivam did to u and i am really sorry for that but sharon he is not worth ur time
tum uski wajah se sad and tensed ho who doesnt give a shit why?
use itni importance kyu use life ka nightmare samajh ke bhool jao
sh:its not that easy because uska relation meri life ki sabse imp cheez se hai
sw:?????????
sh:dance.mai jab bhi dance ke baare me sochti my past just comes and stand in front of me and it haunts me,it haunts me to such an extent that now i even fear dancing
sw:but sharon dont lose the one thing u love for someone who doesnt matter
sh:*sobbing* I.I just cant help it
sw:stop crying and listen to me very carefully i have an idea which will make u forget everything
sh:😕
sw:wait a min (takes out his phone)call him
sh:what????
sw:just call him and tell him to meet u today
sh:what no way mai...
sw:(just trust me.do u trust me(looks into her eyes)
sh:stares into his chocolate brown eyes.she didnt understand why but she could sense that she can trust him) yes
sw:then call him
sharon takes the phone and do as he said
sh:now what
sw:just wait and watch and pls dont cry.your tears are way precious to be spent on that moron(wipes her tears with his thumb)
as soon as his smooth skin comes in contact with hers she felt this burning sensation the warmth in his touch was extraordinary
something she wanted to feel for like forever she relishes in the pleasure of that sweet touch.but suddenly comes back to her sense and says
sh:chalein
sw:ya lets go
they reach the cafe where she called shivam
swaron reached there and saw shivam
sh:now what?
sw:go and slap him
sh:what
sw:ya jao and give him a tight slap.jake dikhaado use ki u are not the one who lost,he is
use jaake ye ehsaas dilaao ki he doesnt matter to u anymore besides he is the loser because he lost someone like u
go
sharon gains confidence and walk with full attitude and slaps shivam right on his face
(guys imagine the cafe scene exactly same till swayam picks her up)
sw:bas sharon stop
sh:nhi swayam i am gonna kill this creep
sw:sharon stop lets not waste our time on him come on
they left and reached rehearsal hall
sw:to how do you feel now
sh:i feel relief like i needed to get it out like im free
sw:told u😉
sharon is so happy that she hugs swayam in excitement and says
sh:thank u thank u thank u thank u so much
swayam was taken aback by the sudden hug but as soon as she came close he felt something different something new.he wanted to hold her in his embrace as tight as possible.he wanted to feel her heartbeat.when he saw her smiling this time he realized that the smile was reaching her eyes and wanted to keep her close to him so as no one else can hurt her he felt this sudden urge to protect her care for her love her

sharon soon realized and quickly broke apart
sh:sorry
swayam was lost in his thoughts when she broke apart it just didnt feel right the warmth he was feeling being close to her just evaporated he felt like something precious is being taken away from him
his chain of thoughts was broken by her sweet melodious voice
sw:its okkk lets start
sh:kkk
sw:miss can i have the pleasure of dancing with u (puts his hand forward)
sh:sure the pleasure is all mine (places her hand in his)
they start dancing to the beat of salsa
this the dance they persorm exactly same
watch this before reading further

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F5zCGgZMaWQ&feature=related

they were dancing like they have been dancing with each other for years every move so synchronised.not only their moves but their heartbeats were in perfect sync too.they never broke the eye contact not even for a second.
they looked perfect her tiny waist fitted in his arms so perfectly that it seemed like it was designed to fit in his arms her hand in his hand seemed like it was made to fit perfectly in his
they were swaying with music he lifted her of her feet so gently that she felt like she was flying
with every step they got better and closer
the song ended and they stopped dancing but kept looking into each others eyes
(LLHH pehla nasha in BG)
both come back to their senses and separate
sw:woa uare incredibly awesome
sh:so are u.uhhh anyways mai chalti hu bye
sw:wait.uhhh i mean mai drop kar deta hu tumhe
sh:no its ok mai chali jaungi
sw:oh come on itna bura bhi nahi hu mai
sh:nhi wo mai bas uhhh kk fine lets go
sw:kkk
swayam in mind yesss main ise ghar drop karunga yaay par mujhe itni khushi ku ho rhi hai
sh:chale
sw:abbbabb haa chalo
they reach class where kriyaansh were
sw:doll ghar chale
kr:sam aapne to rehearsel karli hame abhi karni ham late aayenge
sw:kk bye
swayamand sharon reach to the parking lot and sit in the car
sw:waise mai naya hu to apne ghar ki directions bta dena
sh:kkk
they were sitting quietly
sh:tum kria se bohot pyaaar karte ho naaa
sw:haaa bohot zyada she is my life
sh:waise maine ek baat notice ki hai ki use leke u are very protective
sw;haaa wo dad ne jaaate hue mujhse ye promise liya tha ki mai kria ko princess ki tarah rakhunga aur use kabhi dad ki kami mehsoos nhi hone doonga isliye
sh:she is so lucky that she has someone who loves her pampers her so much unlike me jiske dad ke pass sab kuch hai bas apni daughter ke liye time nhi hai
sharon becomes sad and swayam notices that and he gets an idea to cheer her up
sw:waise tum pichle janam me wrestler thi kyaaa
sh:what??????
sw:nhi wo tumne shivam ko itni zor se maara mujhe to darr lag rha tha kahi wo mar na jaye
both chuckle and swayam gets lost in sharon's innocent smile
sh:mera ghar aa gaya stop
sw:itni jaldi aa gaya😔
sh:wt????
sw:nhi mera matlab baate karte karte pta hi nhi chala ki kab ghar aa gaya
sh:thank u drop karne ke liye bbyee see u tomorrow
sw:bye
swayam reaches home and is thinking about how he felt for sharon he was confused about his undeniable attraction towards sharon
sw:ye mujhe ho kya rha hai.uske hasne,rone,khushi,pain se mai itna affect ku ho jaata hu
wts wrong with me (runs fingers throughhis zulfein lol)pta nhi yeh kaisi feeling hai
he lies on bed thinking about sharon
please listen this song it plays in the background

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6J1-eYBbspA

he keeps thinking about sharon and falls asleep
on the other hand sharon was also thinking the same and getting confused regarding her attraction towards swayam

swayam wanted to make sure if he loves sharon so he decided to ask rey as he was in love with kria
he got ready and went to college and start looking for rey but instead of rey he found sharon he was about to talk to her when suddenly a guy came and hugged sharon
guys the guy is sharon's cousin frm some other clg and came to meet her
when he saw him hugguing sharon swayam's inside boiled he felt this strong urge to pull that guy away ad beat him to a pulp but he controlled and was about to walk away when sharon called him
sh:hey swayam kaha ja rahe ho
sw:khi nhi wo wo wo mai rey ko dhoond rha tha
sh:ooo well isse milo yeh hai mera cousin raj
sw:(in mind)ooo cousin thank god mujhe to laga ki third wheel
sh:kya soch rhe ho
sw:uhhh kuch nhi anyways hi raj
raj:hiii
sw:sharon tumne rey ko dekha kya
sh:ha wo RH me hai
sw:kkk thnx
swayam goes to RH
sw:hey rey
re:hi dude kaisa hai tu
sw:gud accha mujhe tujhse ek bohot zaruri baat puchni thi
re:ha bol naaa
sw:wo mai wo (kaise bolu)wooo
re:bol naa
sw:haaa wo mai ye puchna chahta tha ki ki wo ki wo
re:ki wo se aagey bhi to bad
sw:ki uhh kisi ko kise se uhhh pyaaar hai ye kaise pta chalta hai
re:pyaar hmmm vaise tu kyu puch rha tha
sw:wo baad me btaunga phle ye bta aapko kisi se pyaar hai ye kaise pta chalta hai
re:simple 5 symptom test
sw:????????????????
re:nhi samajh aaya
sw:nhi
re:mai samjhaata hu

kkk uys itna hi bas agli update jaldi hi
rey ka test kya hai aur kya ye test karega swayam ki mada jaan ne ke liye stay tuned 😛

Edited by cenation123 - 13 years ago