A SWARON SS OR FF IS IT REALLY JUST ANOTHER CRUSH - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice start, liked the CS.
Please update soon and do PM me.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Intriguing character sketch. Update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey harshita... i m also harshita..😆 nice cs... great gal... keep gng on..n welcum...update soon...<3😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey guys kkk so the my story is same yet different kkk so in this ss the story starts from footloose elims.As we all know shivam copied the routines,same happens here except that sharon was really in love with him and he betrayed her also the weaklings helped the dazzlers to make up a new routine in one hour and helped them with the choreography and thus dazzlings and weaklings both qualified for footloose.After this kria and sharon became best friends and rey and kria are couple now.okkk so now i begin my story

Part 1

Scene starts in college
kr:yayyy guys im soo happy today i feel like flying(she was dancing around in canteen with joy)
dazz&weakling:wts the matter kria u r very happy today
kr:baat hi kuch aisi hai hey amar aaj canteen me sabko meri taraf se treat everything's on me
Ev:kya baat hai kria itni khushi wts the matter footloose elims me qualify hone ki khushi me
kr:uske liye bhi aur kuch aur bhi baat hai
sh:ab bata bhi do kriya aisi kya khushi ki baat hai
kr:kkk guys aj mai itni khush isliye hun kuki aj mera bhai new york se wapas aa rha hai yayyy
ev:tumhaaaraaa bhaaaiii !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
kr:haaa mera bhai my twin brother sam i mean swayam
re:pr baatcutter tumne kabhi btaya nhi tumhaara bhai bhi hai
kr:kabhi mauka hi nhi mila waise bhi jabse is college me aayi hu itni busy jo hu phle aapse pange ,fir team bnayi, fir dance practise, fir aapse aur ladaayi.
sh:anyways kria twin brother huh par wo new york me aur tum india me kaise?
kr:wo actually sam ko NYU me study scholarship mili to wo chala gaya par phir mom ko laga wo wha akele to unhone kha ki wo yaha clg join kr le and also since he loves us so much he agreed and now he is coming bk today
re:kkk to kitne bje ki flight hai
kr:wo aj 4 bje tk pahunch jayaga and since wo hamaara hi clg join karenge to i was thinking ki aap sab log mere saat chalo unhe pick up karne isi bahaane wo aap sab se mil bhi lenge
ev:yaaa sure
sh:(in sad and lost tone)nhi guys tum log chale jaana mai nhi aaungi(after shivam incident and and footloose elims sharon started spending time alone being less interactive soo...)
kr:sharon tum meri best frnd ho aur mai chahti hun tum mere bhaai se milo tum mere liye itna bhi ni karogi *puppy dog face*
sh:ok fine i'll come happy now?
kr:yaay kk guys lets go come on

at airport
re:btw baatcutter tumhaara bhai dikhta kaisa hai uska description to do
kr:rey aapko description ki zarurat nhi padegi unhe pehchaan ne ke liye
re:wo kyu?😕
kr:kuki jaise hi wo airport pe aayenge saari ladkiyon ki nazar jis ek insaan pe hogi wahi sam hoga
ev:ooohooo aisa kya?
kr:haa aisa hi
si,ri,vi,ne:OMGGG!!!!!!!!! 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲
all boys:ab tum logo ko kya hua
girls:waha dekho just look at that guy in black he is so gorgeous ahhh
the guy was none other than our dashing swayam
(swayam was wearing this)


kr:maine kaha tha aap se
ev:wo tumhaara bhai hai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
kr:yup
ne:kria why u not telling neha before abt ur handsome bother me leaving babu now
vi:kagu tum mujhe sach much chod dogi 😭
ne:nhi babu mai to bas joking.😛
all this while sharon was lost and was brought back to earth by kria's scream
kr:sammm (runs and hug swayam) 🤗
sw:hello my doll kaisi hai tu
kr:bilkul theek aur aap kaise hai
sw:mai bhi mast
when kria shouts that is when sharon looked up to see swayam and when she saw him she couldnt take her eyes off him 😍 😲
she had never seen a guy so innocent he was perfect tall,lean,muscular,absolute angelic face,perfect glittery chocolate brown eyes,soft velvety hair touching the nape oh his neck.she was staring at him continously and her staring session stopped when she heard kria screaming
kr:sam tum kal se mera college join kar rhe ho so i thought ki apne frnds se bhi milwa du come on
sw:okkk my doll (pecks her on her cheek)
kr:kkk so sam ye hai rey inke baare meto aap jaante hi hai
sw:haaa hey rey ur very lucky jo meri princess tumhaari life me hai
ev:awww 😊
kr:kya sam tum bhi naa
re:nhi baatcutter he is right i really am very lucky cuz u are a princess
ev:awww 😊
(so introduction continue sab ka intro nhi likh rhi sry bohot di update ho jaayegi)
kr:and sam this is my best frnd sharon
sw:hey (puts his hand forward)
sh:hiii (shakes his hand) ☺️
kr:okk guys ab sab mere ghar chalenge come on
ev:kkk lts go
at home
swayam and other go inside and everyone was shocked to see swayam touching his mom's feet
sw:kaise ho mom
swm:main theek hu aur ab tu wapis aa gaya hai to aur bhi khush hu 😃
sw:mai bhi 😊
swm:chal tu fresh ho jaa mai khaana lagaati hu
kr:ha phir hum sab masti karenge 😊
swm:nhi swayam abhi 2 aaya let him rest
kr:*pouts* par maine socha mai sam se bohot saari baatien karungi 😒
swm:kria!!!😡
sw:mom its ok waise bhi mai apni doll ko naraz nhi kar sakta hu 😉
swm:tum aur tumhaari doll bigaad do ise
sw:ise nhi spoil karunga to kise karunga😉
ev:awww😊
sw;achaa doll mai jaldi se naha ke aata hu phir baat karenge kkk
kr:kkk mai tab tak coffee banati hu
ev:kkk
swayam goes to take shower and when he comes out he looks like this



water was dripping from his his hairs making him look even sexier.
girls were preparing coffee when sharon accidentally dumped a little coffee on her dress and she went out to clean it up and as soon as she saw swayam standing there shirtless with water dripping from his hairs she gasped and her jaw dropped she had this sudden urge to run her finger through his we locks and she took a step forward but stopped and came back to her senses she quickly erased these thoghts frm her mind and ran back to the kitchen sinking in the fact of what she saw a few minutes back she didnt know why but she was blushing as the pictures of shirtless swayam came in front of her eyes ☺️

swayam on the other hand was not able to find his shirt and was looking for it when he felt like someone was looking at him with deeep gaze he turned around to find no one.he felt wierd cuz he was sure somebody was there 😕
he cleared his mind picked up his shirt and went outside

okkk guys this was the first update
i know its horrible so jutte and chappals are most welcome
i will update next part in few hours till then feel free to like,dislike,comment and criticize
again sorry for crap writing and less swaron sure to give u something good in next update

Edited by cenation123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey gr8 update. Lovd 2 see sharon staring at swayam. Plz pm me when u update.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: dvmishra

Hey gr8 update. Lovd 2 see sharon staring at swayam. Plz pm me when u update.



thnx dear thnx
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Posted: 13 years ago
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aaya agar tum swayam ko aise hi dikhaogi na toh me update ke bich mwle dreamland chali jaungi ☺️anyways awesome update...
Edited by manasie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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We dont know anything about the update except Swayam Shirtless ☺️...Awesome amazing..Thanks for the PM..update next part soon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG. great update :)
lovely.. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#20
Hey! whomever ur kidding. This is a great update!! 👏
Do continue very soon!!! 👍🏼
I toh loved it...😊

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