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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey this is my first Kriyansh OS hope you like it...


Kriyansh OS- Dance

Kria POV

Kria was walking down a busy night street with the cars and street noise blaring but Kria couldn't hear any of that as she had her iPod in and the music was blaring over the noise pollution from the streets. She turned the corner into an empty alleyway which cut the noise from the streets off, the alleyway was quiet and airy. Kria shivered and went turn down her music but as the song changed she heard another sound of music blearing from a stereo from the other side of the alleyway. She followed the music and came to opening where a large group of people where circled around a group of guys dancing. Kria watched them they were pretty good.

Kria was watching the guys as someone barged assed her without looking back and saying sorry, just then lightning crossed the sky and there was the sound of thunder building up above them but the group carried on dancing and the others kept on watching them.

Kria: Oi! Watch it! (she shouted at him)

As the guy approached the opening to where they were dancing a silence ran through the crowd as everyone watched the coming through the crowd. Te man carried on walking to the centre everyone was silent except for the music that blaring through the speakers.

As the man reached the centre rain starting pouring down as the guy started dancing. Kria stared at him mesmerised it was nothing like she has ever seen before the made his dance even more magical as he did a spin on the floor the rain whirled around like a tornado. Kria was through by the rain but she couldn't take her eyes off of this guy.

Just then everyone heard sirens and the crowd quickly cleared the guys stopped dancing and bent down to pick up his hat but his eyes caught Kria's the only person who hadn't moved at the sound of the sirens.

He walked up to her not breaking eye contact with. Kria's breathing quickened as he came closer.

Rey's POV

Rey gave her an amused and confused look as she was just standing there in the rain while the police were coming.

Rey: Hey did you not hear the sirens?

Kria did not say anything

Rey: Hello! (waving his hands infront of her)

The sirens were becoming louder around them. Rey took Kria's hands and ran with her through the alleyway.

He ran through until he found a warehouse he led Kria straight into it. They were both soaked as they were in the rain for a long time. As soon as they reached inside the warehouse Rey looked at Kria who pulled her hand away from Rey's. Rey held his hand up in surrender, showing her he wasn't going to do anything.

Kria: (couldn't help but smile) you're a good dancer!

Rey: (looked at her curiously) Thanks! Do you dance?

Kria: Yeh!

Rey: (nodding his head at the stereo in the corner) let's see what you got then!

Kria: (looking at the stereo and thinking)

Rey: What are you scared? (He looked challenging)

Kris: (that's it)

Kria walked away from Rey to the stereo and connected her ipod to it. Rey watched her smiling. She turned her head and the water from her hair went onto Rey's face, as he wiped it off Kria started dancing.

She started of slow as the music picked up her moves became faster in sync with music. As she danced Rey found her dance different, unique it was like she was dancing from her heart...

As Kria danced she felt all the tension and stress fade off of her and she matched the music beats with her hearts and she let herself go to the music. This was her way to life.

Kria carried on dancing but she slipped, but Rey' caught her around the waist and twirled her around together they danced through every rhythm and beat until the song finished. Then there was complete silence, a deafening silence as Rey and Kia stared into each other's eyes.

Kria lowered her eye's and stepped backwards she turned her back towards Reys and took her iPod out of the stereo she then continued walking towards the door.

Rey watched her as she completed these steps her footsteps echoing through the warehouse as she reached the door.

Rey: Hey!

Kria turned meeting his eye

Rey: What's your name?

Kria: You don't need to know

And with that she was gone her footsteps fading after her...


I hope you enjoyed it xxx

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wowww !!!!!

It's truley Awesum gal !!!!!

pls continue nd do PM me !!!!!

Yayyy 1st one to comment !!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome 1...totally different...pls tell me dat u r goin to continue it...wud love to read more of it...plz do continue and pm me...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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if you will update then plzz pm me...a different one!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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An unique one...


Loved it...


Hopefully i think u'll continue..


If so pm me..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Superb wow plz continue n pm me plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it was amazing...

sahi mein loved it u know totally alag duniya mein le gaya...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey it was awesome
loved it plz do write more os like this
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Wow yaar...
Itz amazing...
It unique...
Luvd it...
Plzz do continue..
Plzz pm me...
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fab work gal, totally unique and different.
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