kriya in b/w life and death os

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Asma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

res

Unres.

This was amazing part.

finally they came to know the truth.

lovely one.

I was shocked wen I read Kria mar gayi but thank god usko phir se jaan aa gayi.

Tu bhi hame attck dene lagi hai kya.

Edited by asmaju - 13 years ago

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Awesome update
lovd it
She gained senses as soon as their heart met...omggg how adorable...nice scene...
Bt dnt u think woh part thoda bada hona chahiye tha...i mean rey dialogues thode zyada hone chahiye the...bt it was amazing
wer is nxt part?

Edited by --Kinjal-- - 13 years ago

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

sorry guys mene bola next part main con/ but mene type b kar liya ... update karne hi wali thi ki ligt band ho gyi . ab mood bohat khrab ... sorry please gussa mat hona ... raat tak pakka complete kar doogi ...wait main again typr karti hoo so wait ok

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Amazing update:):)
Waiting eagerly for d next one:):)

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: aromakriyaansh
<font color="#990000" face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="6">sorry guys mene bola next part main con/ but mene type b kar liya ... update karne hi wali thi ki ligt band ho gyi . ab mood bohat khrab ... sorry please gussa mat hona ... raat tak pakka complete kar doogi ...wait main again typr karti hoo so wait ok</font>

no prob:):)
We will wait:):)

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

rey come near kriya and sit like gud boy ... kriya want to break this silence but don't know how . rey also thinking same ... idea ...( evil smile ) ...

rey : kriya muje congratulation nahi bolo gi ...

kriya : ( confused ) . why ...

rey : mere engagement ho gyi . is liye ...

kriya : waht to jao na apni mageter k paas . jha kya kar rhe hoo .. muje bchaya kyu ...aap jha kya kar rhe ho ...( imagin kriya in angery wala face ...)

rey : chila kyu rahi hoo ... tumne hi bola u don't love me ...

kriya .: mene bola or apne maan liya ... how sweet na ... kisne bola main apse pyaar nahi karti ...( wait j mene kya bol diya ...) ...

rey : kya bola tumna ...

k : mene kya bola kuj b to nahi ...

rey thik hey main ja rha hoo ... kriya close her eyes ... and i love u rey ...

yes finally usne bola . jiske liya wo itne salo se wait kar rha tha ...

rey : kya bola tune ...

k : i lov u rey ...

rey take her in tight hug i love u to please muje dubara mat shor k jana ...

k : i promis main kabi nahi jaugi ... sorry mane jo b kiya apke saath ... and tears roll down from cheeks ...

rey : no kriya tumhari galti nahi thi . and i want ki tum vo sab bool jao mere liya . hamare friends k liye ...

suddenly voice .. congratulation ..( oh they all listing ..very bad guys .)

smriti : j kya ho rha hey ...

k : mom vo main ...

r : mom she said she love me ...

k : rey j kya bol rahe ho ...

smriti : finally its kriyaansh ...

everyone kriyaansh ...

smriti : ha kriya + reyannsh = kriyaansh ...

o kreyaansh ... not bad aunty ...

kriya blushing n all ha or rey ki to hasi control nahi ho rahi ...

smriti : i think guys hme chalna chahiye ...

rey take kriya in hug again . now this is start of new journey not as kriya and rey ... as kriyannsh a megical love story ... yas .but wait guys kriya still in b/w life and death ... kyu ki kisi ko mili pyaar main na kamjabi ...

taani : main apna pyaar kisi or ko nahi doogi ...

so guys wait for next os ...

ok i know u all want muje marna kyu ki mene bohat ghatiya kiha ... or galiya to alag se milne wali hey .. joote or chappals too had se jada parne wale hey ... sorry guys kya pta marte waqt bolne ka moka do ja nahi to pehle hi bol diya ...

comment jaroor kar dena ...

vese i know kis ka wait kae rahe the dirty mind . ko mat use kro ... kriya bach gyi ise khushi ki kya baat ho sakti hey ... or universe ji muje bcha lene in sab se😭

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

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unres

Nice os aroma.

mai ise jayada kuch nahi bolungi kyuki last mai tune sab acha kar ke last mai ___ kar diya.

Do continue with ur new Os soon.

Edited by asmaju - 13 years ago

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prabhjot ARMA

@bluelashes

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: --Kinjal--
Awesome update
lovd it
She gained senses as soon as their heart met...omggg how adorable...nice scene...
Bt dnt u think woh part thoda bada hona chahiye tha...i mean rey dialogues thode zyada hone chahiye the...bt it was amazing
wer is nxt part?

are i know jada hone chahiye the but bhai ne tang kar diya or doosri update b likhni thi to is liye but next os bohat amazing hone wala hey i promise . or wo main ss complete hone k baad likhu gi kyu ki main bohat alsi poppy hamesha bolti hey to ... ek waqt pe ek kaam hi kar sakti hoo ... to next time rey ke bare bare dialogue likhu gi ok ... is baar maafi de do na . muj pyaari c bachi ko ... nanhi si jaan kya kya kre ... kinjal don't b gussa on me ...