kriya in b/w life and death os - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wat rey n taani n sagai r u serious.. No please it cnt happend. Please kriyansh ko milao.. Update soon n do pm me please.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome part...loved it very much
waiting eagerly for the next part
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome plz continue and send me pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome start... pm me when update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ohhh . . . Dat was really touchy 😭

kriya in coma . . 😔

damn . . . Taarey ki engagement . . . . But ab to taani khud hi tod degi 😈

plz update soon . . .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazysky

u know what this idea was running through my mind...n i was thinking 2 write on it but u wrote ...n wow u write lovely...

plz pm me next time 4 this


ooo so sorry mene idea chori kar liya ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: yogini64

Ohhh . . . Dat was really touchy 😭

kriya in coma . . 😔

damn . . . Taarey ki engagement . . . . But ab to taani khud hi tod degi 😈

plz update soon . . .


kar rahi hoo 10 min only ok
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Arpoma this was a nice Os.
Tu kyu nahi pm karthi hai???


Continue it soon.
Guess the gal is Kria nd Lady smritti.

Rey aur tanni ki engagement kara di:(

Plz continue and pm me.


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Posted: 13 years ago
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aroma plzz update karde mujhse aur wait nahi hota
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sorry guys morning main complete nahi kar saki kyu ki main late thi or bhai bohat tang kar rha tha ... and sorry pm nahi send karne k liye ...

gang standing in front of hospital ...
rey : swayam hum log yha kyu aye hey ...
swayam : guys andar chalte hey tum logo ko pta chal jayega ...
rey : * self talk * muje j kyu lag rha hey ki koi mera apna jha hey ... jise main bohat chahta hoo par kon ...
everyone tensed they want to know what going on ...they all walk into the hospital ...

swayam : aunty ...
lady : ( run toward him ) ... tum log a gye ... please save her ...tum log use bcha sakte ho ...
every one shocked : aunty aap ...
yes its smriti ...
neha : where is kriya what happening use ... please aunty ...
rey ... don't know how to react its like his body stop working ... just a drop of tears fell from his eyes ...
smriti tell the real truth to all of them ... and it is the biggest shock for them ... jise wo itni nafrat karte hey ... one lagta hey usne unhe cheat kiy ... rey ko use kiya . in realty se suffer more then anyone ... but kisi ko show nahi kiya ... and today she is like dead body ...
and that was kriya ... rey's battcutter ...

doctor enter : i'm sorry to say she is no more ...
after hearing this they don;t know hoe to react ... they all standing like statue ...

she gone ...no ... vo nahi ja sakti ... she have to stay for me ...and rey run toward i.c.u. ...she look very week .. no now she is only a body without soul ...rey ( shouted ) : get up kriya ... u have to come back for me ... { he crying very badly }..
but there is no response ...he take her in his arms and tight his grip around her ... the tears from rey eyes fell on her face ... as soon as there body come in touch there heart
also come in touch ( u know guys scaha pyaar dil ki darkan sun leta hey ...)...her heart start beating . yes ... she is back for her love ...and first word she utter is rey ... yes she know its rey ..
rey : doctor . doctor ...

after sme time doctor came out ... she is fine . but she need some rest ...
everyone happy now ...but rey is more happiest parson in all of them ...
smriti : sorry rey . this all because of me ..
rey : no please ese mat bolo app aunty ...
smriti : call me mom ...
everyone shocked ...
rey : a ,...am ...mom ...
next morning ...
doctar : she is fine now ...
as soon as they enter in the room they run toward kriya ... all kriya we love u ... sorry hum tume samaj nahi paye ... and a big group hug ...
sharon : friends ...
kriya : yes ...
but her eyes finding some one ... yes rey ... he was standing ... a little far from all of them ... he just staring at her baatcutter with sweet smile ... all of them taking lagatar ... ...
at last swayam : guys i think hame chalna chahiye ...
everyone leave ...
rey want to break this silence ...

con. in next post ...
whole night all of them just wait for morning ... next morning ...

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