Swaron SS: A Single Moment

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Surbhi

@surbhi_d3

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

wow Nidhi!

part 1 has left me speechless..!

the story, the way you portrayed Sharon's emotions and how bad she felt for hurting Swayam was well written!

update soon..

thanks fr d pm

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Sawyer_Tom

@Sawyer_Tom

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: marauder
Awesome description of drowning. It happens exactly like that. BTW awesome update.

You talk as if you have experienced it.

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@havokhotline

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

FOR THE LOVE OF GOD!

Why do you end it like this?

Update soon, fatty! :)

I love how Sharon realized that she loves him. But I'm pretty darn sure it wont be half as catastrophic in the show. :P

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Surbhi

@surbhi_d3

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

just read part 2 and it's more amazingly written than the first one!

I have always told you that i love the way you write..!

very realistic..!

This SS is purely based on what Sharon feels and how she now realized that she loves him..and it hurts her more for mocking and hurting the person who was always there for her..!

update soon..!

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sravani

@Blessedfool

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

It so happened that I was listening to this song "ek ajnabi sa ehsaas" from lucky and opened IF and got your PM...the song and your update ...it was an amazing combo ...cant express in words how it felt to be listening to a heart breaking song alongside reading equally heart wrecking story...

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tanuka

@Tanuka_TanHa

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

wow amazing nidhi :) , u described sharons emotions realy well !! thank god she realised her love , but at the wrong time and place where she cant even express it to him :( why did u stop there , u cant let sharon die ... update asap :)

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manasi

@manasie23

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

i loved the way u have described the whole thing... the whole how she wanted him for the one last time before she died as it was inly him who could bring peace to her...

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Sawyer_Tom

@Sawyer_Tom

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: havokhotline
FOR THE LOVE OF GOD!

Why do you end it like this?

Update soon, fatty! :)

I love how Sharon realized that she loves him. But I'm pretty darn sure it wont be half as catastrophic in the show. :P

Well one can always hope! ;)