[SwaRon] For the Best..?! (OS) Prt3last Pg25 Apr9

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Awesome...eager to know wat is swayam's plan...update soon

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718075

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

wow..this is beautiful..i really loved it...do continue soon...i loved the jealous sharon...and Swayam's smile...wow...continue soon...

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ABI

@ABBY92

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Khushi, this looks really good...Do PM me when you update !!!

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medha

@medha16

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

lovely OS...honestly even i had started liking swaron but the cvs have made their story stagnant...they r a couple who have a lot of shade n layers n can b experimented a lot with...but somehow their track has just remained where it was since the corridor scene...im glad u wrote a swaron OS...this is so typoical of sharon to b jealous n then try to ignore it but in vain n in d process get more irritated...continue soon!!!

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Sawyer_Tom

@Sawyer_Tom

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Posted: 13 years ago

#25

nice os! pls post the next part soon

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

lovely update khushi.

thanks for the pm.

It was superb.

you 'll nvr stop ending at cliff hanger rite.😳

ab agla update jaaldi update karo khushi.

'll be waiting to read next.

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Radioactive.

@Radioactive.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Khushi, back with another awesome piece of work are you?!
i really liked the first half of it. Like always Swayam, the angel that he is, is ready to help anyone. I like the friendship between Swayam n Taani. its nice to see them bond this way. I liked the "steeling glances" bit. Really nice part
Do post the next part soon. I really can't wait to know what happens next..
Thanx for d PM n update soon. :)
( P.S why would anyone forget you? )