[SwaRon] For the Best..?! (OS) Prt3last Pg25 Apr9

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sukanya.

@Lovenarbhi

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#201

Hey first rain a biggg jhappi for you...🤗. One of the best OS i have ever read. Swaroon=love and romance. It is an awesomeee OS. Thank you sooo much. Plz continue doing it

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Monica

@_Monu_

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#202

awesome end

loved their convo in girl's locker room

i was laughing at swayam

"the rules cn go 2 hell 4 once Im going in"...lol

awesome dialogue..!!..loved it!!

so finally she told..that is matter 2 her

"since when?" "since forever"...

wwwoooww !!! loved it!!

really great work khushi!!

keep it up

love yaaa

mmmuuaahh

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i dont know u tell me =P

@inshuu

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#203

hii khushi am sorry but in the future i will not be able to comment or like as i will be deactive for a month but please send me pmx as soon as i give my exams and get tym i will like and comment on ur FF's and all

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Ritu

@.Comics_Music.

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#204

Awesome OS...loved all the three parts!!!

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Surbhi

@surbhi_d3

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#205

i just read the second part and it was too good!

very well penned..!

you have projected SwaRon very well, the way they are..

and i hope something progressive happens after i complete reading the 3rd part..

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Surbhi

@surbhi_d3

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#206

part 3 was the best khushi!

i really loved how after so much of misunderstandings, all the confusion, the fights everything had been put on a dead end and there we have Sharon at least taking a step forward.

I especially loved this bit--

"Since when?"

"Since forever. I just didn't know it myself. I always have."

an open ended OS was a brilliant idea!

i love the way you write..an amazing writer!

👏