ArSha OS: Destiny - Page 5

Originally posted by: KriaReyansh

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UNRES

WHAT THE?! (raizada style 😎) lol I fully pictured u saying dat

OMGGG ANKII! THAT ALMOST FREAKIN MADE MEE CRYY 😭

IT WAS SOOO DAMN BEAUTIFUL. thankuu Pria.. But m glad u wrote almost.. I dint wanna make anyone cry...

the emotions, the confusion, the passion- everything was so mesmerizing. i thot i had just written jumbled up confused sentences!! which dint make any sense!! m sooo happy dey do!!

Ironic, wasn't it. They always said that Destiny brought us back together again... Little did they know, that every time it did... We already belonged to someone else...

absolutely lovee tht linee! dat line was the first line dat came to my mind reading ur update!! So give some credit to urself!! 😆

and kya hai rey...were u trying to blind me with the tiny font in ur pm??! 😆 and what do u mean it was bullshit?! it was freakin awesomee! Arre as I had told every1 on the grp.. my lappy died on me.. u know I had to write the ArShi OS again frm scratch.. And dis one also.. I have been using moms lappy.. and d screen is much bigger and d settings are changed.. so i dint even realize that it was dat tiny.. Sholli!!! And i genuinely thot it was bullshit.. as u know romance i can write a bit.. this was my first tym writing something like dis..

*sniffle sniffle* im soo proud of you. itni beautifully emotions ko likhti hai!!

AWESOMEEE!

*does a little dance in excitement*

and honestly i loved this OS...even tho it was sad, i felt this was soo damn close to reality!

you better write moreee! bas tera ashirwad bana rahe.. toh i ll write more..

LOVE YOU LOADS ANKS 🤗 Love you tooo!!!

Originally posted by: chsripriya

its nyc yaar its just that they r not together disappoints😔 thats all amyways awesome os and thnx for pm me

Originally posted by: nikitajha

Di, u r a fab writer. Pls continue writing such mindblowing OS n ffs too. I hv been a silent reader n appeciated d hard work dat u put up bt srsly di, dis forum is incomplete widout guys lyk u n robin; so pls cum bac

Originally posted by: cheersona1

Phew I loved ittt...though I hate myself fr loving it...obviously you have done a marvelous job...bt u knw y I hate myself fr loving this...it is along the lines of what we discussed a mnth back ...me nt mentioning everything here...

Sighhh...big sighhh

Originally posted by: luv_arsha

it was very heart touching OS you made me emotional

its written very beautifully and last lines of destiny were really very beautiful and sweet

awesome ...loved it very much

Originally posted by: lovekriyaansh

Res

huh...let me take a breath...first of all so sorry for commenting late... second thing jhappi le le ekdum tight vali...you made me skip my breath nd you deserve the same with this hug... isiliye ekdum tight vaali jhappi... Commenting on this OS is as difficult as believing on this...Take a bow for having the though of writing this as well as taking all the pain to write... I know it must hav been painful... every word in this update was so real.. each and every word holds a bitter realism... its painful to believe on this... but this is what the truth about the so called "Arshaa"... and i must say its the perfect step toward moving on from this... nd for you writing... i really dont have words to praise you...just some days ago we were talking about the angst writing... nd here you are making me speechless with your angst piece of writing... this piece of writing is the best piece of angst writing on this forum... nd i mean it Anki... Love you from the bottom of the heart !!! ab firse aisa kuch mat likh...though its brilliant i dont want you to make me and my queens cry this badly...(i know tu bhi bohat royi hogi yeh likhte huye)

Originally posted by: Arsha1994

Awesum os...

Apt & perfect fr arsha...Dis is somewhere related 2 thr lives...

Stil i hav a ray of hope lik n idiot..

I luvd it...perfectly ritten...u r an awesum riter..it was worth posting...

Thnx fr d pm...

Keep riting such work & plzz do pm me...

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

sahi mein aap isse post nhi karna chah rhe the paagal ho...

it was wonderful

the so called hatred and the not so called love..

beautifully written...

plus the ending line was so ... perfect and ekdum dot-to-dot with the situation...

plus the immediate reaction to their closeness loved it fulfilling their subconscious wishes...

di ek request hain : plz iska 2nd part post karke unite them plzzz

Originally posted by: PD_puja

Awesome OS...mayb reality is somewat lyk dis...n d last lyn ws superb...
U knw wat...i knw ki arsha ko real main 2gethr frevr hone ke chances close 2 nil hain...bt pta ni kyu phr b my heart says ki it will happen... 2day tomorrow bt will...as i always say..if ders smthing lyk destiny...arsha will hppen...craziness f mine i guess...
Fr ur writng kya bolun...awesome...mind blowing...fantastic...thums up 2 u...
Plz nxt tym arsha OS hppy wala likhna...wud luv 2 read it...