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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
this update reminds me of the tym wen dazzlers ragged kriya n rey helped her out..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
Amazing update supa lykd and i think hez rey.. Update fast please
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
awesome part...loved it very much
i hate these dazzlers ahhh😡 they dont have any sense
poor kria😭

continue soon waiting eagerly for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
Awesome ff pls pm me when u update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
lovely update zeal.
guess that guy is rey.
and it was lovely one.
thanks for the pm.
update next part asap.

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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
awsome!!!!! update
n agrhhh!!!!!!!! dat sharon 😡 😡
bt dn't create MU b/w our lovly dovly kriyaansh...n i love ur update
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
heya zeal !!!!😃
finally u updated your ff !!!!😆

it was a nice update...👏
loved the way how swayam helps kriya nd rey 's inner talks !!!!😆
olso sharon nd dazzlings ...u showed them truely right !😊

hayyye...😍jaldi kriyaansh ko milao dear !!!!😉

sorry guys wo kya hai naa i m little lazy and specially about writing!!!!!!!! so plz forgive me for late update and as a treat for u i m giving u all a long long update...

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sheron returned back from the door of rehearsal hall very angry looking and she was making her ragging pranks for kriya she callled dazzlers and they started discussing somthing...

sheron:

nil,vicky we have to do something and we need to think otherwise this ls behenji will grab all our prestige from us and we will become nothing...think guys think...

nil:

i have an idea...they discuss it (ab plan tumhe bataa diya toh mazaa thodi aayega😆)

in the r.h...

kriya:
she was still breathing hard due to her actions and rey's reactions ...wo rey i m very sorry muze aisi cheezo se bohot dar lagtaa hai...

rey:

its ok kriyaa...its totally ok tumhari jagah koi aur hota toh aisa hi uska bhi reaction hota...inside of his heart he was thinking agar tumne aisa nahi kiya hota toh mai itna special fill kaise karta...but outside he was looking fully calmed as he was the"cool hunk"...ab aage chalein????!!!!!???
kriya:

ok lets go...

they went to the their class rooms and suddenly vicky came to rey,

vicky:
hey rey!!! hwz u dude aur ye kiske saath hai????????

rey:

vicky!!! mai kisi ke saath nahi hu just princi. ne bola isse collage dikhane ko so i was doing that yaar just chill!!!!!!!!

vicky:

tu aur aisi "weakling" ke saath dosen't suits u yaar chal na mere saath i have some work for u!!!!!!!!!!!

rey:

par yaar princi ke orders hai!!!!!

vicky:
ek dazzler kabse orders follow karne lagaa,,, dazzlers hamesha order dete hai remember!!!!!!!!!!

rey:
but yaar he is our princi!!!!!!!!!!

vicky:
whatever!!!!!!! tu chal na

kriya:

rey aap jaiye agar aapko kaam hai toh...

vicky:

usse jo karna hai wo karega tum kaun hoti ho usse kya karna chahiye ye bataane wali???????

rey:
shut up vicky!!!!!!!sorry kriya on behalf of vicky i gotta go i'll see u leter...

kriyaa:

ok bye...

she started waking towards the class and she felt somone was following her and as she enter in the class one bucket of black coloured bucket fell on her...

it was none other than sheron's plane...

everyone started laughing at her and she was totally emotional and she started crying tears rolled out from her eyes...

lets go from here...one voice said and literary pushed her from that crowd

maine bola tha na mai aa rahaa hu kahi mat jaana fir kyo gayi???????

kriyaa:
crying badly...i m sorry swayam ...plz maaf kar do lekin ye sab kaise log hai yahaa par swayam kitne bure!!!!!!!!

swayam:
stop crying first kriya...and mai jaanta tha tumhare saath aisa hi kuchh hoga issi liye bol rahaa tha wahi rukna..

first lets go to washroom clean urself i have very important things to tell u...

she went in the girl's wash room came out she was still shivering ...

they started walking towards the class...

swayam:
kriyaa ye jitni badi collage hai na yahaa ke partitions usse bhi bade hai...tum par jo pani girayaa wo dazzlers ka kaam hai because jabse tum aayi ho they felt ke tum unse unki repo. chhin logi so they had planned already to make u a looser like me and some of us which they called "WEAKLINGS"...

kriya:

par swayam unhe aisa kane ka right diya kisne????????

swayam:

kriyaa...ye sab log bohot hi rich families se belong karte hai and inke perents yaani sheron aur reyaansh ke perents iss collage ke trusty hai so no one can say anything against them...

kriyaa was shocked with the name she heard rey...she never thought rey would be like this...

kriyaa:

swayam in mai aisa kya hai jo ye apne aap ko itna mahan samzte hai????

swayam:

they have their own dance team dazzlers . and they have very skilled dancers like rey,sheron etc.

kriyaa:

to ham weaklings maise kisine kuchh nai kiya unke agaist

swayam:
hai ek team weakling name par hi there are four members vishakha,neha,bharat,amar they are also good dancers but they want a good caption who can give them good directions ...

kriya startrd dreaming her mission her aim her first love dance she can coduct her team...

swayam:
kriyaa...kriyaa...

kriya:
haan swayam...

swayam:
tum ruko muze neha aur wo tin bula rahe hai tum yahi ruko and be carefull...he left her

kriya was yet in her dreams so she didn't pay attention to swayam and started walking towards library door...

one poor looking boy came to her who was nil...(it was sheron's prank again...)

"kriyaa...tum kriyaa hi ho na..."

"yes...mai kriya hi hu!!!!!!!"

"mai iss collage ke weakling union ka supporter hu unho ne aapko ye gift bheja hai"

"thanks"she opened it up!!!!bang!!!!!!!it was a cracker and it fired very big with a loud noise but the main thing was that kriyaa was totally afraid with this all the other people were laughing at her and she again started crying and ran to fire exit...

where shron was ready with her next prank...full on ragging

sheron:
welcome!!!!!!! kriyaa tumhara hi wait ho rahaa tha...kriya was nt able to say anythng...tum jaanti ho miss LS ham yahaa ke dazzlers hai suna tumne dazzlers we dazzles in every way and in anyway listen miss kripa tum jo kuchh bhi karlo tum hamesha ek low grade ls dm weakling hi rahogi samzi?????!!!!don't try to be over smart warna iss collage se tumhe dhakke marke yahaa se bahar fikwa sakti hu samaz gayi !!!!!!!!1

"guys!!!!!!!!!!what the hell are u doing?????????"

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so guys this is it for now hope u like it and ya keep thinking who was he?????

i will post the next update the day after tomorrow and yaa the precap is as following:

kriya cry hard rey become our "good good" guy and say somthing very inspirational to kriya which will help her to make her team!!!!!!!!!"

❤️zeal❤️


so dear update sooon nd PM me !!!!😛
mwaaah !!!!🤗

waiting for that moment...when they unite together !!!☺️
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
ohhh so nice
loved it dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
zeal it was an amaizng update i loved it thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kriyaanshd3

this update reminds me of the tym wen dazzlers ragged kriya n rey helped her out..

you are absolutely ri8 dear!!!!!!!!

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