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Snigdha

@Snigs.

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#111

Zeal...u made me get my days back!!!!

Wow..dis was really a fantabulous story dan d3..

No misunderstandings much..very friendly rey n our cutesy kriya..

Really loved it alot!!!

Esp. d way rey shows sharon dat she had fallen off her pride n gesture..I loved dat!!!

Becuming serious is a very common thing but showing her d things was really different..

He appreciated weaklings team n d way he told her dat problems cum in lyf n all was awesome...

N kriya has decided to join weaklings team bcoz of rey's words...waah!!!

Superb..lovely..marvellous...

Thanks for d original n loveable d3 u r giving us..

Love u alot..

Keep doing d same...

N d update isnt completed yet another part to be updated tmrw...

waiting for tmrw...

Edited by snigdha_arsha - 13 years ago

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#112

zeal firsly a big hug 🤗 for such an amazing update...i toh just luved it!!!!!!!
wow luved the way rey helped kriya...
i thought rey would scold sharon for doing this but didnt expect dat he would make kriya ahead of sharon n say dose things...seriously its awesome...
n wow rey being a dazzler he ie appreciating the weaklings team...n more over no MU between kriyaansh acha hai...eagerly waiting for the next part update soon

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Shravni

@Shrvz_PoPpY

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#113

Wow awesome update mujhe is FF ka rey bohot accha laga kitna helpful hai nd usne kriya ko supprt kia ab pata nahi sheron ko kya hoga ab waiting for next update

Sry aaj kelie itna hi kal ise pure se complete karungi comment ko i jst want to keep res...

Edited by ShravniC - 13 years ago

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zeel

@reyaanshlove

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: snigdha_arsha
Zeal...u made me get my days back!!!!
Wow..dis was really a fantabulous story dan d3..
No misunderstandings much..very friendly rey n our cutesy kriya..
Really loved it alot!!!
Esp. d way rey shows sharon dat she had fallen off her pride n gesture..I loved dat!!!
Becuming serious is a very common thing but showing her d things was really different..
He appreciated weaklings team n d way he told her dat problems cum in lyf n all was awesome...
N kriya has decided to join weaklings team bcoz of rey's words...waah!!!
Superb..lovely..marvellous...
Thanks for d original n loveable d3 u r giving us..
Love u alot..
Keep doing d same...
N d update isnt completed yet another part to be updated tmrw...
waiting for tmrw...

thanks alottt meow!!!!!!!!!

love u alottt dear!!!!!!!!!!

hudreds of tight hug from me 🤗

i m very pleased that u like it!!!!!!!!

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Nirjana

@Nirju99

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#115

pm me next time when u update ,amazing update luv it

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zeel

@reyaanshlove

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: Nirju99
pm me next time when u update ,amazing update luv it

thanks alottt dear!!!!!!!!

i will surely pm u!!!!!!!!!!😊

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zeel

@reyaanshlove

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: ShravniC
Wow awesome update mujhe is FF ka rey bohot accha laga kitna helpful hai nd usne kriya ko supprt kia ab pata nahi sheron ko kya hoga ab waiting for next update

Sry aaj kelie itna hi kal ise pure se complete karungi comment ko i jst want to keep res...

thanks alot!!!!!!!!!!!!!dear i will eagerly waiting for ur comment!!!!!!!!!

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zeel

@reyaanshlove

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: lovely7010
zeal firsly a big hug 🤗 for such an amazing update...i toh just luved it!!!!!!!
wow luved the way rey helped kriya...
i thought rey would scold sharon for doing this but didnt expect dat he would make kriya ahead of sharon n say dose things...seriously its awesome...
n wow rey being a dazzler he ie appreciating the weaklings team...n more over no MU between kriyaansh acha hai...eagerly waiting for the next part update soon

first of all thanks alottt dear for ur lambu lambu comment!!!😆

i just loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

and second thing i dnt like sheron's cherecter in d3 so i made it like this so thanks for loving that also love u alottt thanks again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!❤️

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#119

dear plzz index banao na...kk abt updtes i will cmnt after reading...😃

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zeel

@reyaanshlove

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#120

hey guys!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i m back !!!!!!!!!!!!!! waise gayi hi kab thi!!!!!!!!!!!!!😆

i know i know tum logo ko meri iss bakwas mai koi interest nahi hai so let's just not west time and started with my chep. 4th's second part...

part 2 of chep. 4

"kriya! tum inn sab chhoti chhoti baaton ka itna bura maanna chhod do yehi tumhare liye better hoga...aur tumhari eyes ke liye bhi!!!!!!!!!!he gently cleared her tear from her face and...(the llhh moment begins...)

kriya:

thanks for this much concern rey!!!!!!!!! swayam ne muze inn dazzlers aur weaaklings ke partition ke baare mai sab bataaya hai so i was thinking ke aap bhi unki ke jaise honge u know rude,egoist but no u r not like them...she looked at him with her super cute childish way..

rey:

i know they r very rude but wo jaise bhi hai mere friends hai aur unho ne muze bohot love diya hai meri care ki hai mai unko kabhi hurt nahi kar sakta specially sheron u knw she is my best buddie since my childhood i always share my all the things with her!!!!!!!!!

kriya:

aur aaj aapne unko itna bhala bura kahaa ithink muzse jyaada unhe aapki jarurat hai...i m alright now and she needs u more than me...aap uske paas jaayiye...

rey:

r u sure u r alright????

kriya:

ya...

rey turned round and walked to the door again turned at her gave her a smile and walked to sheron...

kriya took a deep breath and went out from the fire exit...

she searched for swayam...she found him at the common room where the "weaklings" were rehersing and she saw somthing which made her fully happy ...swayam was showing some amezing steps to the gang she went to him...

swayam:

hey kriya!!! tum yahaa!!!! dazzlers ne kahi fir se kuchh nahi kiya na!!!!!!!!!

kriya:

kiya tha but i m okey u know what swayam rey deffence me...

swayam:

haan rey is a nice guy!!!!! he always helps everyone and specially who is hurted by his dazzler friends...

kriya:

ya...wo to hai...par swayam tum dance kar sakte ho...i saw u ...u r just amezing...fir inki dance team joint kyu nahi karte???

swayam:

because i dnt want

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so that's it for today guys hope u like it i want all comments from u gud or bed anything love u all and next update will be on friday!!!!!!!!!!