Shaadi-A Kriyansh SS (A Note-Page 12)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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This is the first piece of writing I have done on I-F hope
you like

Italics is flashback.


Kriya stood at the window. Her hands gently caressed the frame of the window as the breeze blew in her face. She was back in her room."No not her room" she thought,"their room".A sweet blush adorned her face as she thought of her husband.


Bringing about their marriage hadn't been easy.Rey's father had fixed Rey's marriage with one of his business associate's daughters.That day she had realized that Rey was right.For
his father Rey was just an investment that would bring him the most profit. By
getting him married to that associate's only daughter he was gaining the most
as Rey would become owner of both companies.But then she came along.


It was a regular day at college.During the day Rey had asked her whether she wanted to meet his
family and she had agreed.They had gone to his huge bungalow in the evening but
even before they entered they heard something.Something, that would completely
change the course of their life.Rey's father was planning on getting Rey
married to the spoilt,rich,only child of his business associate.They ran as
fast as they could to Rey's car and he drove like a maniac far, far away from
his house.On that very day they got married.It wasn't fancy,it wasn't like a
fairytale but it was perfect.She was finally his.They had spent their suhag raat
in a downmarket hotel on the outskirts of town.But still it was magical because
they were together.


The next morning Kriya noticed that her mom had called 50 times.That was when they had decided they
had to go back.The first place they went was Rey's house because as Rey's wife
Kriya was meant to move in there but they were shunned and sent away.They then
went to Kriya's house.Smriti was just relieved to see Kriya safe and
sound.After they had settled themselves in the house they told Smriti their
entire story and just like that they were accepted.</font></font>

A masculine hand that left a trail of fire everywhere it
went took Kriya out of her reverie.His husky voice rumbled near her ear "Kya
soch rahi ho?" he asked. As he spoke his breath tickled her neck making her
forget her train of thought."M-M-M Main ,H-Humari Shaadi ke,baare mein soch
rahi thi" kriya stammered."Acha toh humari shaadi ke baare mein kya soch rahi
thi?"he asked just enjoying teasing her."Woh main" kriya stuttered."Suhag Raat
ke baare mein soch rahi thi? Nahi ,koi baat nahi abhi tumhe sab yaad dila deta
hu."he interrupted and saying this he pulled her closer to him.


There was no space between their bodies and their faces were
inches away from eachother.Rey brought his face closer to hers and was assailed
by her sweet smell. Rey assessed her reaction to his proximity as he moved closer he didn't want her to be uncomfortable.
But he felt pride at her reaction he hadn't imagined in his wildest dreams that
she would want him so much.Satisfied that she wasn't feeling uncomfortable Rey
kissed her and with that action he turned off the light.


Index:

Part 1-Page 1

Part 2-Page 4

Part 3-Page 8

A note-Page 12




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