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Posted: 14 years ago
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GUYS THIS IS MY FIRST FF PLZZ DO COMMENT
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AFTER HAYE RAMA [WHICH WOULD NOT BE A DREAM] KRIYA WOULD REGRET AND WOULD TRY TO IGNORE HIM BUT COULDN'T
IN THE COLLEGE
KRIYA - mujhe rey ko ignore karna hai par jo hamare beech mien hua asne kisi ko bata diya toh mujhe unse baat karni hogi
rey - he was very happy kriya hum dono ki love story ki train chal padi bas tum kahan ho tumahara chehra dekhna hai
suddenly kriya comes
kriya - mujhe apse baat karni hai fire escape 5 min [very rudely]
rey was shocked wid her behaviour
he came to fire escape and kriya was already there he came infront of her put his hand on his shoulder kria turned away
rey- kriya kya hua
kriya -mujhe apse kuch baat karni hai
rey han bolo [tried to comfor
prerecap -kriya hurts rey




































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luv_arsha thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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it was awesome
please continue
and please pm me when you will update👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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DO PM ME WHEN YOU UPDATE NEXT...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice 1..pls updt soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome! Can you plzzz add me to the pm list?? 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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WOOW IT WAS AWESOME YAAR PLS UPDATE IT SOON AND PM ME WHEN U
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amazing add me to the pm list please i want to read on
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Posted: 14 years ago
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GUYS THANKS FOR UR SUCH A LOVELY COMMENTS
HERE'S THE NEXT
KRIYA-JO KUCH KAL HAMARE BEECH HUA VO AP REY-VO AP KYA KRIYA KRIYA-BHUL JAIYE REY -SHOCKED YEH TUM KYA KEH RAHI HO KRIYA -AP NE NAHI SUNA OR MUJHE APSE KOI FARAK NAHI PARTA
REY -KOI FARAK NAHI PARTA [COMING CLOSER TO HER] KRIYA -MERE PAS AP MAT AIYE REY TUMHE KOI FARAK NAHI PARTA NA KRIYA -NAHI REY PUTS HIS HAND ON HIS CHEEK WAS TRYING KISS HER KRIYA TOOK OUT HER HAND AND WAS GOING TO SLAP REY PAR REY NE USKA HAATH PAKAD LIYA AR APNE HAATH SE USKI WAIST PAKAD KEUSE PAAS LE AYA KRIYA NE USE PUSH KIYA AR REY GIR GAYA KRIYA ROTE ROTE BHAGNE LAGI
PRERECAP KRIYA KI ZINDAGI MIEN AYA EK LADKA OR REY USPAR BHADKA

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..Rish.. thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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liked it...
update soon and pm me...!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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its superb, very nice
continue soon and please pm me

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