8th June - Swayam-Sharon - Into you like a train

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Setting woh hi ... location bhi woh hi ... aur log bhi wohi ...The same St. Louise ... the same locker room ...And the same two ppl, Sharon and Swayam ...Lekin aaj ... aaaj wahan ki hawaon mein baat hi kuch aur thi ...

Lets start from the beginnning ... Like I said before ... Swayam is no Chauvinistic hero who demands attention from his lady love ... Swayam is ur just Swayam ... not the least bit agressive or crasss ... just plain Swayam the boy who loves Sharon the gurl ...

But let me make something VERY clear ... despite his passive nature ... Swayam is clearly the one in control in this realtionship ..

Starting from waiting for Sharon in the locker room ... He knows her so well .. Ke jab gussa ayega toh woh kya karegi ... jab mood kharab ho toh kahan jayegi ;.. despite all the Diva airs Sharon puts on in front of everybody .. he can read her like an open book .. and the fact that he knows her inside out.. so well , scares Sharon ' she is not afraid of losing control ' she is afraid because she is not being able to push him away ' that for once she is not hating not being the one I control ' What She is afraid of is losing herself ' In Swayam ' to Swayam ...

And then the part where he goes like "Cool down kahunga toh manogi nahin " ' oh how Sharon hated him for that .. hated him cuz she wanted him to say kuch aisa takey woh uss par chilla sake .. cheekh sake .. but no ' all he did was make sure she didn't hurt herself ! Did u see the way she looked away ? Because Sharon is not stupid ' she knows that if she keeps looking at those eyes of his .. full of sincerity, she'd drown in them in no time '

And the part where he says he doesn't care about no rules or regulations ' U can see he is no weak minded wuss ' for him its all about Sharon ' If Sharon reciprocates .. then theres no obstacle big enough to keep him from her ' not even the Sky-high barrier / LOC of Dazzlers and Weaklings .. No Swayam doesn't give a dead rats ass .. BUT if Sharon objects , then he has the willpower and self-constraint to pull back '.

And the mirror .. MY GOD that took my breath away ! We we're all hoping itd be some kind of jewellery/trinket .. but what he gave her was wayyy more than that '. He gave her ' Sharon. The real Sharon ' he gave her the mirror so that she could see for herself the woman he loves,, not the college diva ' he wants her to feel it for herself '

So Sharon ' is just a train ' speeding at its highest velocity ' towards her destination ' towards Swayam .. and no matter how hard she pulls her brakes, she cant stop herself from doing so ' She is sinking in the quicksand that is Swayam .. sinking fast 'and she knows it '


And this is one of my rare posts where Im not poking fun, taking a dig ... just refecting ,..

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0LjpAj6mVVQ[/YOUTUBE]

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: geet_maan_magic

So Sharon ' is just a train ' speeding at its highest velocity ' towards her destination ' towards Swayam .. and no matter how hard she pulls her brakes, she cant stop herself from doing so ' She is sinking in the quicksand that is Swayam .. sinking fast 'and she knows it '


omg... i luv d way u wrote dis... it sounds lyk ummm a quote from a famous book or sumthng...⭐️

btw i luvd swayum's gift thou... 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tabzy


omg... i luv d way u wrote dis... it sounds lyk ummm a quote from a famous book or sumthng...⭐️

btw i luvd swayum's gift thou... 😳


Its not a quote from a book .. but I do dabble in a bit of writing myself ... infact Ive been writing a novel for the past two years 😳 Anyways ... I just put it .. the waay I felt it 😊 And lord knows I ship this pair crazily enuff to end up writing a book on them someday 😆

Swayam's gift .. WHATEVR this guy does is something sooo unique and different it throws u completely off the track .. this guy is so awsome he is the end of DDLJ's Raj 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh and sorry for the out of sync audio ... i dunno what went wrong =S
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oye Rafi... amazing babes... Tabzy was right wonderfully written..

You know why Sharon's train can't stop even if she wishes to? Cos she's not the engine driver, it's Swayam!

and even i loved the mirror... it was a perfect answer to the question Sharon has had on her mind ever since RDX's party... Sharanjeet or Sharon... and the answer is no one but you. 😃

BTW i'd love to read something from the novel you're writing... 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sheherzade

Oye Rafi... amazing babes... Tabzy was right wonderfully written..


You know why Sharon's train can't stop even if she wishes to? Cos she's not the engine driver, it's Swayam!

and even i loved the mirror... it was a perfect answer to the question Sharon has had on her mind ever since RDX's party... Sharanjeet or Sharon... and the answer is no one but you. 😃

BTW i'd love to read something from the novel you're writing... 😊


Exactly ... Actua;;y its Swayam whoz calling the shots , and I for one , am LOVING it 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: geet_maan_magic

Starting from waiting for Sharon in the locker room ... He knows her so well .. Ke jab gussa ayega toh woh kya karegi ... jab mood kharab ho toh kahan jayegi ;.. despite all the Diva airs Sharon puts on in front of everybody .. he can read her like an open book .. and the fact that he knows her inside out.. so well , scares Sharon ' she is not afraid of losing control ' she is afraid because she is not being able to push him away ' that for once she is not hating not being the one I control ' What She is afraid of is losing herself ' In Swayam ' to Swayam ...


i so agree wid dis part😳



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Posted: 14 years ago
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This scene was made special by swayum...his calm and quite nature is winning over sharon's stubborn and uncanny nature...& m sure by the end swayum will totally win over our DIVA
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sana.shanak

This scene was made special by swayum...his calm and quite nature is winning over sharon's stubborn and uncanny nature...& m sure by the end swayum will totally win over our DIVA



Day before yesteday's encounter in the rehearsal hall ... the way Swayam answered her back ... and she couldnt talk back ? Swayam has clearly won the game 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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love dis scene...love da way u hv analysed it rafi...i must say shantanu acted really well in dis one...nd sneha's gud nyways... 😊❤️
awsum rafi...

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