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Prachi

@justjayati

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

haha!! nice one Arushi!!!

bechaara CGM ko koi bhaav nahin de raha hai!!!🤣

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Arushi

@arushi02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Thats really good!! And you deserve it, for such wonderful stories!!

Keep writing such wonderful stories!!

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Arushi

@arushi02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

Agar chandragupt ko durdhara ke baare mein na pata chala hota.[in this... usko pata to chal jaata hai... par dono alag nahi hote. how? read and find out!]

This conversation is not humerous like the ones written before. Its full of love. Its a sweet story.

On their way to Patliputra...

D- [very lovingly] Veer, hame Patliputra mat chodo na... Hame... hame tumse alag nahi hona hai! Tum kyun mujhe vyarth hi apne aap se door kar rahe ho? Mujhe tumhe chod kar kahin nahi jaana. Ham dono saath rahenge! Aur tum chinta mat karo. Main tumhare upar ek bojh nahi banungi. Ulta... hamesha tumhhari sahayata karungi.

C-[chandragupt ki aakhen aur dil bhar aate hain. Par... wo kehta hai-]

Nahi mihika. Hamare saath rehne mein tumhe bahaut khatra hai. Tumhe kuch ho gaya to?

D-[smiling] Are! Tum faltu mein hi chinta kar rahe ho! Ham Mihika hain. Kuch nahi hoga hame! Aur bola na... tum hamari fikar mat karo! Bas, hame apne saath rakho!

C- [bade pyar se] Nahi Mihika! Tum jaisa soch rahi ho waisa nahi hai. Hamare saath tumhe bahaut khatra hai. Abhi to tumne kuch dekha hi nahi hai. Upar se... Rajkumari ke baare mein bhi to socho! Wo to tumhari priya sakhi hai na, wo agar mahal mein nahi pahaunchi... tab kya hoga. Ham log bhi to vyarth hi phas jaayenge. Hamari chodo. Tumhara kya hoga! Tum bhi to phas jaaogi!

D-[man hi man mein- "tum nahi jaante veer... ki main hi Durdhara hun. Haaye!!!! kitni chinta karta hai meri! Kuch aisa karna padega ki koi samasya bhi na aaye... aur main iske saath bhi reh jaauon. Par karun kya!!] C se- theek hai...

Raat ho jaati hai. Durdhara Chandragupt ke saath... aur Chandragupt Shashank ke saath baith kar fruits ka rahe hain.

C-[to Shashank sadly] Mitr... mera D ko chodne ka bilkul man nahi hai... pata nahi kyun... par aisa lag raha hai jaise ab meri jeevan sari khishiyan jaane walin hain. Kuch aisa nahi ko sakta, ki ham hamesha sath rahen.

S- Nahi mitr, mujhe to aisa nahi lagta. Aur sach bolun to, mujhe bhi kuch aisa hi lag raha hai jaisa tumhe.

C- Kiske liye?? Mihika ke liye[actually D]

S- Are nahi yaar! Kaisi baat kar raha hai tu? Mujhe to aisa, Durdhara ke liye lag raha hai.[actually Drakshita]

C- haan??? Ye to bahaut achchi baat hai. Par... 🤔

S- han chandu. Kuch nahi ho sakta. Chodo! Jo sapna poora hi nahi ho sakta... uske bare mein sochkar kya fayeda.😭

D[to drakshita] Tu sahi keh rahi thi yaar! Mujhe veer ko sab sach bata dena chahiye. Ab to mujhe bilkul achcha nahi lagta. Kal bhor hote hi main veer ko sab sach sach bata dungi. Chahe uska koi bhi parinaam(result) ho.

Drak-Theek hai.

Bhor hote hi...

D-[thodi dari hui] Veer... main tumse kuch kehna chahti hun.

C-[ek pyari si mukaan ke sath] Bolo. Kya kehna hai?

D-wo veer... [eyes close karke] veer... main hi Durdhara hun!

C-😊 Bas itni si baat? Mujhe pata hai priy. Aur mujhe ye bhi pata hai ki tum mujhse prem karti ho. Aur ek baat bolun... main bhi tumse prem karta hun.

D- Sach!!!! 🤗 Ye baat to samajh mein aati hai ki tumhe mere prem ke baare mein pata chal gaya, par ye kaise pata chala ke main...

C- Asan hai! Tumhare hao-bhao se. Aakhir main Acharya Chanakya ka shishya hun!

D- Chanakya ke shishya? Yani ki Chandragupt! Koi baat nahi. Mujhe koi farak nahi padta. Chodo pitashri ko!!! Main tumhare hi sath rahungi. Aage ki baad mein dekhi jaayegi! Then...🤗

[Shanky and Drak. smile at each other, then Shanky takes her aside...]

S- Oh to tum mihika ho.

Drak- Haan!!

S- Main kuch kahun?

Drak- Haan!

S- Main tumhe bahaut pasand karta hun... bahaut! Ab... aur kya kahun! Aur tum?

Drak- par tum mere bare mein nahi jaante ho.

S- Kya nahi jaanta hun?

Drak- tells her whole story.

S- 😊 Koi baat nahi. Kya antar padta hai ki tum kaun ho?

Drak- Sach!! How sweet of you!!

Drak. apne bare mein C aur D ko bhi bata dete hain. No one bothers abt each others's truth.

To be continued. Wait to see aage kya hoga? How will they tacke with Dhanu... Tell you after 1-2 days.

How was it?

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Prachi

@justjayati

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

wow!! arushi nice one👍🏼... that was really sweet!!! CGM toh bada fast forward nikla!!!

and shanky bhi kuch kam nahin...😉

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Arushi

@arushi02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

ARE!! sirf do-teen log ki likhte rahenge ki aur bhi?!

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Ashi

@ashi.melodyfire

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Arey kitni sweet stry hai aur mere mind mein thoda khayal aaye phir likhti hoon plus abhi mobile se onli9 hoon

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Arushi

@arushi02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Thanks Ashi, and I am waiting for your story!!!! very eagerly.

Whats the topic??

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bhaiyyaji

@bhaiyyaji

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

totally enjoyable as they manorajak come on guys keep it up am not so good at this as soon as i get good idea i do it but until then and thanks this should be used in comedy circus🤣

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Arushi

@arushi02

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

I'll continue with my second story's second part. PLEASE READ THE 1st PARA [scene] TO UNDERSTAND THE STORY.

Now Durdhara, did not bother ki veer hai kaun and was ready to help him in conquering Magadh. But still... jo bhi ho, thi t wo Dhanu ki hi beti. Kya poori tarah uska dil maanega? Lekin usne ye socha ki koi to baat aisi hogi jisliye Chandu ne aisa kadam uthaya? Uske liye poori baat jaanna bhi zaroori thi. Agar uske pita sach mein galat honge, to D unka saath kaise desakti hai? She asked C to tell the whole story and Chandu did as she said...

D- Oh! to ye kahani hai! Pita shree to sach mein galat hain, aur main unko sahi samajh aiyi. Ye sochti rahi ki bas tum Dhan chahte ho, aur Chanakya ji dhan. Asli baat to pita shree ne batai hi nahi!!

C- Kyun bataenge? Jaante hain ki wo hi galat hain. Unhone hi paap kiya hai. Apni putri ko aisi baat kyon bataenge, ki unhi ki wajah se, meri maa mujhe, aur unse main chin gaya! Wo aisa kabh na karte!

D- Ab mujhe lagta ha ki mujhe poori tarah tumhara samarthan karna chahiye. Maana ki wo mere apne pita hain, aur mujhe bura bhi lag raha hai, parantu, bas isi karanvarsh main unka saath kaise de sakti hun jab unhone itna galat kaam kiya hai.

C- Nahi Durdhara, koi zabardasti nahi hai. Tum chaho to jaa sakti ho apne pita ke paas. Mujhe koi aapati nahi hai. Main tumhari bhavna samajh sakta hun.

D- Nahi Chandragupt. Wo galat hain. Aur main tumhara saath sirf isliye nahi de rahi hun ki main tumse prem kati hun. Main, ye insaniyat ke naate bhi kar rahi hun. Pehle main bhi apne pita shree jaisi hi thi, par tumhare saath rehte rehte main ab pehle jaisi nahi rahi. Ab mujhe bhi doorron ki taklif samajh mein aati hai? To main ye baat jaake bhi anjaani kaise karoon?

C- Durdhara... mujhe garv hai tumpar.

Shanky- Par Chandragupt... ahar ye dono yahan rahin... to ham par to khatra bana hi rahega, aur ye don bhi samasya mein aa jayengi.

D- Kuch nahi hoga. Ham har samasya ka saath milkar saamna karenge!

C- Nahi! Isse hamare lakshya ki beech bhi badhayen aa kati hain. Mere paas ek yojna hai. Tum mahal jaao. Aur maharaj ko kuch aisi kahani batao, jisse unko tumpar sadhaye na ho. Aur tum mahal se hme wahan ki soochnaye bhejna. Taaki, hame wahan aakraman karne mein aasani ho. Par...

D- Par kya?

C- Bhadrasaal ka kya?

D- Kuch nahi. Bas darao!

Shanky- Matlab?

D- Matlab ye, ki jab ham Mihika ko rajkumari banakar, unke saath Sahal gaye the, tab unhone, Mihika ko apne kaksh mein bhej kar hamara apmaan kiya tha, aur bahaut peeda pahunchi thi. Ab ham use, ye batadenge ki ham kaun hain, aur ham is jungle mein tumhari sahayata karne isliye aaye the,taaki wo saara pita shree ka swarn chala jaaye, aur wo mushkil mein phas jaaye. Hamara apman karne ki baat aur swarn chale jaane ki baat ham pita shree ko bata denge, ham isse use darenge. Aur rahi baat hamari, tumhara saath deneki, to uske liye bhi yah bhaye hai. Ham usse ye kahenge, ki pita shree ye baat nahi maanege, ya ham apni koi kahani bana kar unhe suna denge, aur bhadrasaal wali baat unhe bata denge to mushkil mein to wahi fasega. To... wo hamari baat na bataye aur ham uski. SAMASYA HAL!!!

C- Us dusht ne tumhara apmaan kiya! Uski to main.

D- Koi baat nahi Chandragupt. Wo to ab samasya mein fas hi gaya hai. Tumse kya wo swarn wapas le sakta hai? Nahi! Uska sar to jald ki katne wala hai!!!

C- Tumhari buddhi ka to jawab nahi.!!

D- Dhanyawad! Dhanyawaad!

[Everything happened as planned.] [in the palace of patliputra]

Dhanu- Aao putri aao!! Kaisi ho tum priy?

D- Ham bilkul theek hain pita shree! Aur aap?

Dhanu- Tir kit Dha! Ham bilkul theek hain!!

[ Ghamandi bhadrasaal ne entry mari]

Dhanu- Aao B aao! Kaise ho tum? Chodo! Main bhi prashn pooch raha hun? retake please! Aao B aao. Hamara swarn kaisa hai?

B- Bilkul theek. [ and he told the same thing abt gold and C and C as shown in the show]

[ Next... same thing... C went to Rajgrah... and so on but, Chanakya ko kuch nahi pata! Hee hee hee hee hee!😆]

Battle ground mein har kar, Dhanu marte waqt zameen par leta hua hai hai, aur Chandu ne bola,

C- Sasurji ji, aapki is haar ka credit sirf mujhe aur meri gang ko hi nahi, aapki suputri Durdhara ko bhi jaata hai!