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@chand1234

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Fantastic SS...👏
continue soon...
and do PM me o ur next update...:)

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proteeti

@sambhavami

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Whatever You Want You Do I'm Gonna Read This !

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Arunita Chandra

@RoseFairy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

PART-1

Rishi was standing at the window of his room...its only few hours past he got married to Ashi..his Junior research fellow but he is now alone in his own room..his friends were not ready to leave him alone during his marriage party but he begged few hours to them...so they didn't leave Ashi and now she is busy attending guest...and that gave Rishi much relief because he wanted to spend sometimes with himself..just wanted to go down through the memory lane and relive his 29 years again...
how many times a man takes birth in one lifetime...thinks Rishi...today he got married..he is on the verge of starting a new life..and from tomorrow he will be not alone..someone's life will be connected with him...Ashi..he smiled thinking about her newly married bride...no doubt she carries all the qualities that a perfect bride supposed to have...she is beautiful,innocent,caring,soft spoken as well as independent,smart,well educated .anyone would be the luckiest person of the world having her as wife...but what about him?? is he the perfect groom for her??..Rishi smiles again..what is he thinking should be thought before registry...but all happened in so sudden he even couldn't get a chance for that..he recalled how suddenly his marriage got fixed..he never even thought about which..
it was his friend Digvijay's anniversary party last month..Digvijay.. another name of true friendship he thought...whenever he found himself alone,frustrated depressed it was Digvijay whom he found standing there..encouraging him whenever he started losing hope...but after coming u.s.a it was 7 years past he didn't meet him...until Digvijay himself reached here.3 months back ..with his wife and 1 year old daughter...and last month when Rishi went to attend his party where his another best friend Akshay announced his marriage date...and that was the beginning of his own story...when everyone started pulling his leg for being still single..
and the situation got worst when Nitin came to the party with his wife...Nitin who used to come in his nightmares once...Rishi smiled again...its the life which shows every colors of human face..otherwise who could thought that Nitin ..for whom Rishi even thought of finishing his own life now wants him to start a new life??..seriously human mind is so strange..thinks Rishi...change is the rule of life.the proverb always proved right in Rishi's life...smiles Rishi again...
the party continued and so the pranks from Digvijay,Akshay and Nitin...and even their wives and Akshay's fiance took part in the discussion...firstly Rishi was ignoring them and took it as only fun..but with the passing time he got bored with the entire discussion and left the place...and saw Ashi was sitting alone in one corner of the party...though she was also invited in the party with other co-workers of Rishi..but she was not accustomed to such parties so was feeling awkward..Rishi joined her to make her comfortable..in these two years since Ashi came and joined his project Rishi didn't talk so much with her that too except works and projects..he spent whole evening chatting with her...when the dance started everyone joined on dance floor except Rishi and Ashi...they were still sitting but Digvijay and his wife remembered duty of the host and insisted them to go on dance floor...Rishi feared whether Digvijay again starts his pranks that too in front of Ashi and went on dance floor..he thought Ashi would deny to dance as he never saw her dancing before but perhaps Ashi understood the situation and accompanied him...they danced together..and according to his friends it was the best dance of party...
..after party ended it was 2'0 clock at night...so out of responsibility of being senior he dropped Ashi to her hostel...but it became the topic of each and every friendly discussion..but surprisingly enough Rishi found that he is not getting irritated like he used to get previously whenever his name gets connected with any girls after that incident 15 years back...may be the proverb time is the best hillier is really true...though Rishi...
and it was the fact that after the party Ashi and he started sharing more times together ...shared each others liking and disliking...he even came to know about Ashi's parent's divorce and the reason of Ashi's loneliness...Ashi also came to know about his orphan hood...but was those information enough to take decision for spending life together???...may be not...but that three musketeers ..Akshay,Digvijay and Nitin were not ready to let the chance go from hands and started convincing him that Ashi actually likes him...and perhaps they were not wrong...Ashi's eyes,her concern for Rishi outside works..on small things like Rishi's food,medicine and all made it clear to Rishi that Ashi is also waiting for his positive signal..may be its result of constant brainwashing of Akshay's fiance Maya who was also a co-worker of Ashi...
Rishi also can't deny that in his heart also a soft corner must be created for Ashi ..otherwise the loneliness which is his companion since childhood why would start haunting him??and when suddenly he got the news of Ashi's accident why did he feel so insecured and ran to hospital..why he got relaxed watching Ashi's injuries are minimal...coz he started liking her...so as soon as Ashi got recovered he opened his heart by saying..." i want to be with you"...
..and on the second moment he got tensed what would Ashi mind ..whether she misunderstands him..with all of sudden proposal...he couldn't look at her...and told "i am sorry..forgive me for my audacity"..and turned to leave...but Ashi stopped him holding his hands...she stepped closer to him..didn't utter a word but her eyes reflected her mind...they lost into each others eyes and unknowingly Rishi's forehead came down to Ashi's forehead...
after the revealing of his heart Rishi yet was not sure that it was really love or not..but his friends were not ready to waste times now...and Nitin suddenly got a better job and had to leave for Canada..so he wanted to attend Rishi's marriage before shifting..so Rishi had to agree for this sudden registry ...and there was no objection from Ashi..as expected...so finally Rishi became married from single today...
but before starting a new journey Rishi was needed time to be prepared...so in his solitude he is going back to his past...perhaps it was another birth..is living again all his pain,sorrow,depression ..is recalling the people whom he met ..the people who became gave him pain..and the person who guided him to new life..without whom he would become a ship without radder...Manish sir...
and also the person for whom he is carrying blood shedding wounds in secret chamber of heart since 15 years...for whom he never ever tried to get closer to girls...Rishi knows none can heel his wound nor even Ashi...
but once more he wants to relive those moments...because pain sometimes gives a sense of comforts...its his own feelings...

Edited by FairyDreams - 13 years ago

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bhoomi

@frozen.devil

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

awsm updt aru!

d way u described his wish 2 stay alone was just a treat 2 read. 😊

continue soon... 😊

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proteeti

@sambhavami

Stunner

+ 11

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Loved The Whole Chapter !!

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Bhavya

@YashiSingh3

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

go ahead then its fantastic...i'm voting OS

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Bhavya

@YashiSingh3

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: bhavyajiya
go ahead then its fantastic...i'm voting OS

sorry sorrry sorry,

i mean ,update soon...

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Anuja

@anu93

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Nice character sketch and update😳

Different concept...I liked it

PM me when u'll update😳

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Arunita Chandra

@RoseFairy

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

PART-2

...It was the time when Rishi used to live in an orphanage...he can faintly remember that his mother..she was maid of that orphanage..he heard that after his father's death she was driven from in laws and took shelter in that orphanage when he was in her womb...but hard works and lack of proper diet caused her early death..only in 4 years of age Rishi became alone in this world..and his days of struggling for existence started from that day..at 4'o clock he left his bed..if there would be delay of 5 mins he knew mr.Sukdev's hunter is waiting for him...Mr.Shukdev..manager of that orphanage..perhaps nobody ever met such cruel and rude person like him...he got a sadistic pleasure by torturing and frightening boys of orphanage...Rishi was very weak in childhood..due to lacking of proper nutrition..and so he couldn't be able to work hard like other boys..that's why mr.Sukdev's hunter was more cruel to him..and it was not Shukdev who was the only nightmare of him..for being smll and weak he had to follow the orders of some boys of orphanage who were elder and stronger to him..and was mr.Shukdev's obedient..if Rishi ever said no to them..they would complain to him..and then Rishi had to spend one or more days without food and water...

Edited by FairyDreams - 13 years ago