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Ritu Aigal

@Ritu278

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: indupriya2008
Excellent Ritz...
It just luks lyk a true incident... True bulling by students n teachers.
"Chirkut" 🤣
N Shah a true character of Sukhi..
Very supportive n truly different nature of Mr. Gupta from Acharya Chankya, Very innovative..👏
Titli's last dialouge is too innocent...😳
Very well portrayed..

Continue soon...

Thnx indu..aapne pura padha..I know its long...sorry for that..aur Shah amatya hai😊

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indupriya2008

@indupriya2008

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Ritu278

Thnx indu..aapne pura padha..I know its long...sorry for that..aur Shah amatya hai😊

No need to say sry...story achi ho toh chahe kitni bhi lambi kyun na ho padne mein maza aata hai..

I remembered ki shah hi amatya hai.

Acharya Chankya mr.gupta ke role mein truly different hain. But, amatya Mr. Shah ke character mein Sukhi jaisa hai 😆

Ya maine likha galat hai, it 'll be Shah a true copier of Sukhi..

Edited by indupriya2008 - 14 years ago

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Khushi Grover

@Amor.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#43

ha ha ha loved the ending

bhatka hua student

awesome part

awww my jai

us teacher ka sr phod dungi main next time n that yuvi 😡 chircut hoga vo khud

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Ritu Aigal

@Ritu278

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: BhartiKhushi909
ha ha ha loved the ending

bhatka hua student

awesome part

awww my jai
us teacher ka sr phod dungi main next time n that yuvi 😡 chircut hoga vo khud

ha😊
bohot lambi ho gayi na?😕

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Bhargavi

@Historylover

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#45

gr8 update ritz..mujhe apne school days yaad aa rahe hain...some teachers are really irritating 🤢 ...ending is hilarious 😆 bhatka hua student 😉 and chirkut pyaara word hai 🤣..keep it up 👍🏼 waiting for the next part 😛

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Arunita Chandra

@RoseFairy

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#46

great part ritu...ab ambhik bhi a gaya aur purusdutta bhi..great...koi ake dekhe hamare ye choti si forum mein kitne talented writers bhare pade hai...

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peihu

@peihu

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#47

Yaha pe sabse achi shayari kaun likta hai?
Sabse jyada Rushi se pyaar kaun karta hai?
sabke daat kaun thik karta hai?
And u say u r gud for nothing?😕
Aur titli to mujhe bhi pasand nahi hai...par sab Ashka aur Rushi ki jodi banarahe the..son i thot I'll do something different😃

@ritu - dats soo sweet of u..rushi se mujhe sachme bohot prem hai re😳

@bhargu - u r rite..mujhe apni koi competitor pasand nahi.. aur iss titli ko bohot jald
aasmaan mein uda doongi main😆

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shwetha85

@shwetha85

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#48

Simply loved it Ritu...Awesome @ your thought of putting their pictures while you are narrating the story...Hats off to you..Continue soon eagerly waiting..

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peihu

@peihu

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#49

@ritu - awesome update👏..ur story has a vry real feel to it..a delicate balance of
emotions and humour..well done ritu😊

if jai is chirkut..to yuvi kankhajoora hai😆 (millipede)
dat shah😡😡 ...jai rote nahin hai baby..main hoon na😳 aur hindi teacher ka dhyan
yahan bhi pata nahi kahan hai😆

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kamna

@superdil19

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#50

very nice

time ka bahut achha use hai

very nice

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