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Abhiram Rao

@Abhiram-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#61

Sumaaaru chanda bardidya kanau !! 👏 Baritaa iru !🤗

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peihu

@peihu

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#62

@ritu - wah meri ritu rowling😆 kya story likhi hai..adhbudh

mera rushu yahan bhi allrounder hai😳 shahs secret..dis is gettin so interesting...
u v really woven ur story vry well ritu..i absolutely love it..ab in ff ka hi sahara hai😭
keep up de good work girl..ur story rockzzz👏

jst one thing plz keep titli n jais romance thoda kam..nahi to mujhe hurt hoga😭 (jst jokin..dnt
tk it seriously..har story mein main yahi kehti hoon..par meri koi nahi sunta😆 )

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Vrinda....

@-Vrinda-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#63

awsome dear ritu
just loved it

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Ritu Aigal

@Ritu278

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#64

Part 5

Jai felt Mr Gupta was the ryt person with whom he could share his feelings..Mr Gupta was more than a teacher for Jai. He was his guide and above all he was his friend.😊
Jai: Mere papa terrorist nahi the...unhe phasaya gaya tha...wo bekasoor the...phir bhi unhe phasi hui..Kyun sir?😭
Mr Gupta consoled Jai..he wiped Jai's tears...
Mr G: Pata hai Jai..sab Mr Ahuja ko gunehgaar nahi maante the...kuch logo ko unpar vishwas tha...mujhe bhi...
Jai: sach...
Mr Gupta: Ofcourse...tumhare Papa is desh ke veer putra the..aur hamesha rahenge...tumhe bhi unhi ki tarah bana hai...
Jai: Aap jaante the ye sab kiski wajah se hua?

Mr Gupta was shocked. No one knew this secret...

Mr G: Tum jaante ho Jai?
Jai: Avinash Raiprakash😡
Mr G: kya?..ye kaise ho sakta hai...unhe to..😲
Jai: Ha..unhe paramver chakra diya gaya...jo mere papa ko milna chahiye tha😡...wo hamare family ke dost the...nahi dushman par dosti ka natak kar rahe the...he was involved in the blasts..par unhone mere papa ko phasa diya😭...
Mr G: ye baat aur kaun kaun jaanta hai?
Jai: Koi nahi..maine ek baar papa ko Raiprakash se baat karte hue sunliya tha...meri maa bhi nahi jaanti thi...
Mr Gupta: Relax Jai...ab is baare me aur mat socho..tum apne papa ki sapno ko pura kar sakte ho Jai..tumhare rago me bhi unnhi ka khoon hai, wahi deshbhakti..
Jai: Thnx sir..for listening...
Mr Gupta: Class chale...mera hi class hai..
Jai felt relaxed...he tried to be cheerful for the rest of the day...
but now there was another problem...
Mr Gupta had told him to study with Titli coz he had urgent meeting with the principal in the evening...

Akshay: tu akele jayega..Bhagwaan tumhari raksha kare😳
Jai: Shut up..Study ke liye jaaraha hu..yudh ke liye nahi

Titli was waiting for him...
Jai arrived...he was 15 minutes late..
Titli gave an angry look at Jai...
Titli: 15 minute ki value jaante ho...😡
Jai: sorry..wo mera dost..
Titli: Ok..mai nahi jana chahti..aaj padhai mere ghar me hogi...

Poor Jai had to face another new problem...Titli's mother..

Jasmeet: Haye...kitna sona hai( She pulled his cheek)😳
Titli: Ma plzz..late comers pe itna pyaar barsaane ki zaroorat nahi hai...😕
Jai: Thnx aunty...ek glass paani milega..
Jasmeet: ha zaroor..tum dono jao...mai aati hu..
Soon the request had turned big. The glass of water had now become a huge cup of bournvita, there was a plate of samosas and ladoos...
Jai: meri maa bhi aise hi ladoo banati thi...
Titli: Acha..very gud...ek minute..banati thi matlab?
Jai was quiet...he picked up a book and began reading..
Titli: Iam sorry Jai..I didnt know..
She placed her hand on his..Jai pulled his hand back instantly...
Titli: Tum roj yaha aake ladoo kha sakte ho...mere hisse ke bhi...Ye ladoo khake mai moti ho rahi hu...
Jai: Thnx...
Titli:Friends?..(She stretched her hand forward)
Jai had many frnds from school but no girl ever became his frnd..Titli was the first..
Jai slowly extended his hand..Titli shook his hand hard...😊
Titli: Now that we r frnds..tum mujhse kuch bhi puch sakte ho..kuch bhi bata sakte ho aur jitna man kare utne ladoo bhi kha sakte ho..😃
Jai: Thnx Titli...ab padhai kare?
It was almost 7 PM when Jai looked at his watch...
Jai: Oh no...late hogaya hai...
Titli: mai tumhare saath gate tak chalti hu...
Jai: No thnx,,mai chala jaunga...
Titli: Ok..kal milte hai..Bye😊
Jai: Bye...uh..ttli...tum mujhe moti nahi lagi...
Titli smiled...😊
Thnx Jai

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kamna

@superdil19

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#65

u know when i read this post then i think i read any nice novel

"or mai chahti hoon iski story hamesha badti jaye kabhi khatm na ho"

very awesome post

abhi mai pad rahi hoon ye

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Ritu Aigal

@Ritu278

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: superdil19
u know when i read this post then i think i read any nice novel
"or mai chahti hoon iski story hamesha badti jaye kabhi khatm na ho"

very awesome post

abhi mai pad rahi hoon ye

Thx kamna dear..aur mai aajse kannada sikha rahi hu...aap plzz meri achi student ban ok?😊

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Bhargavi

@Historylover

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#67

wow..lovely part Ritz...bahut hi sweet hai 😛
akshay: tu akele jayega..bhagwan tumhari raksha kare 🤣
and i'm liking titli...she is a nice sweet girl 😃
and when jai said- but mujhe toh tum moti nahi lagi 😉 that was really sweet of jai 😳
ur dialogues are so good ritz 👏 keep writing ⭐️

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Ritu Aigal

@Ritu278

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Historylover
wow..lovely part Ritz...bahut hi sweet hai 😛
akshay: tu akele jayega..bhagwan tumhari raksha kare 🤣
and i'm liking titli...she is a nice sweet girl 😃
and when jai said- but mujhe toh tum moti nahi lagi 😉 that was really sweet of jai 😳
ur dialogues are so good ritz 👏 keep writing ⭐️

Thnx Bhargu dear😊

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indupriya2008

@indupriya2008

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#69

Nice dialogue Ritu.. this is growing more n more interesting day by day..👏

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Kya mystery hai..👏...Avinash Rai prakash..

the convo b/w Akshay n Jai 🤣 🤣 🤣 (Battle of Titli 😆as Panipat)

Jai n Titli's friendship is too innocent n nicely presented by u..👏

Keep it up...👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Bichari peihu di per kya guzar rahi hogi...hum sab unke rushi ko idhar udhar vyast rakhte hain 😆

Edited by indupriya2008 - 14 years ago

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Ritu Aigal

@Ritu278

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: indupriya2008
Nice dialogue Ritu.. this is growing more n more interesting day by day..👏
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
Kya mystery hai..👏...Avinash Rai prakash..
the convo b/w Akshay n Jai 🤣 🤣 🤣 (Battle of Titli 😆as Panipat)

Jai n Titli's friendship is too innocent n nicely presented by u..👏

Keep it up...👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Bichari peihu di per kya guzar rahi hogi...hum sab unke rushi ko idhar udhar vyast rakhte hain 😆

Thnx indu...sirf FF's me vyasth kar rahe hai...asal me Rushi unhi ka hai😆

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