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Ankita

@radhikarani

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#111

yes peihu
we are in same water. So we knw.

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Ankita

@radhikarani

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#112

mere dad ko suhana pasand h
aur mujhe alok ji
matlab dad like sme1 daughter typ
and daughter lyk sme1 of father typ.
Bt anyway my feelngs 4 sooraj ji is real love

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Ritu Aigal

@Ritu278

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#113

Love dooesnt see age, race, color, type...Pyaar bas ho jaata hai...😛

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Ankita

@radhikarani

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#114

yup ritz
absolutely true.

My love suraj ji

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Anjali

@have-a-dream

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#115

aww sweat update ritz...wow titli's sacrifice for jai amazing😍both care for one another..😉bt jai last mein kya kar diya gr8 work ritz keep it up!!👍🏼

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Abhiram Rao

@Abhiram-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#116

Very cute updates Ritzz ! 👍🏼Am ill,so couldnt comment earlier...😔

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Ritu Aigal

@Ritu278

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: nivren
Very cute updates Ritzz ! 👍🏼Am ill,so couldnt comment earlier...😔

parvagilla bidu...rest maadu...

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Ritu Aigal

@Ritu278

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#118

Part 7

Titli ran inside and locked herself in her room. Jai ran behind her.
''Titli, plzz meri baat suno''

Titli's friends stared at Jai as if they would pounce on him any moment.

''Kya hua beta?'' Jasmeet asked Jai.
Kuch nahi aunty. Maine galti se Titli ko daat diya''

''Galti se koi daat ta hai kya?'' a girl said rudely.

Jai didnt listen to what Titli's other friends were saying. He wanted to speak to her.

Jasmeet: Ruko beta. Mai samjati hu use...Titli, darwaza kholo beta...tumhare friends intezaar karrahe hai...unhe acha nahi lagega...apne doston ke khatir darwaza kholo beta...

After about 10 minutes, Titli opened the door.

Titli: Papa ke liye wait karne ki zaroorat nahi hai ma, party abhi khatm karte hai, Cake lao
Jasmeet: Beta ye kya kehrahi ho...
Titli: Maine kaha na...

Titli didnt look at Jai even for once. The party got over in only half an hour. All her friends left one by one. Jai didnt move.

Titli: Ma. ise kehdo ki party khatm hogayi hai...
Jai: Titli, plzz..meri baat ek baar suno.
Jasmeet: Titli. ek baat Jai ki baat sunlo beta.

Titli ran inside. Jasmeet asked Jai to go and talk to her.

Jai: Tum nahi jana chahti ki maine tumhe kyun daata?
Titli: acha...tumhare paas reason bhi hai. Kal mai chup rahi. Mujhe laga tum humari dosti ko samjhoge. Par tum to bohot selfish ho Jai
Jai: Mai tumhe kuch batana chahta hu, apne baare me

Jai had no choice. He had to tell her everything about his family and Avinash Raiprakash.

Titli: Iam sorry Jai. Mujhe samajna chahiye tha...( she sobbed)
Jai: Plzz..ro mat..Iam sorry..maine tumhara b'day kharab kiya..
Titli: No Jai. This will be my best b'day. Mere best frnd ke saath jhagda karke acha laga..
acha...mera gift kaha hai?

Jai handed a box to her. Titli opened it. It was the trophy of Quiz competition.

Titli: Ye to tumhara hai..
Jai: Nahi Titli, ye hamara hai..mai chahta hu ki tum ye rakho...plzz..mere liye..
Titli: Thnx Jai..u r the bestest frnd..

Next Day at school

Jai was tailing Mr Gupta. He was sure Mr Gupta knew about Raiprakash. But Mr Gupta was busy. The competitions had ended and he was busy in classes.

Jai: Sir, mujhe aapse baat karni hai
Mr G: Baad me Jai...iam busy..

Mr G was walking with books in his hands. Jai had to run behind him to keep up.

Jai: Sir, plzz ek baar meri baat sunlijiye. Aap Avinash Raipakash ke baare me kya jaante hai?

Mr Gupta stopped suddenly. He turned behind. Jai was panting.

Mr G: Tumhe kya lagta hai Jai..kya janta hu mai Raiprakash ke baare me?

Jai didnt know wat to say.

Jai:Kal maine aapki aur Shah sir ki baat sunli thi

Mr Gupta gave a stern look and started walking again.

Jai: Mujhe bataye sir, I need to know...usne mere papa ko phasaya tha, mai use nahi chodunga..

They were standing outside a class. All the students looked at Jai including the teacher

Mr G: Sorry, plzz continue...

Mr Gupta held Jai's hand and took him to the staffroom. It was empty. all the teachers were busy attending the classes.

Mr G: Dekho Jai, Mai jaanta hu ki Raiprakash ne tumhare saath galat kiya hai. Sirf tumhare papa ke saath nahi, bohot saari families uske wajah se anaath hu hai. Wo logo ko dikhane ke liye ek NGO chalata hai, par uski asliyat sirf bohot kam log jaante hai. Unme se tum bhi ho, aur tumhare papa bhi the..

Jai heartbeat increased. He was still looking at Mr Gupta, expecting him to tell more about his enemy.

Mr G: unhe tum akele handle nahi karsakte. Bohot badi hai unki gang. Unhe to yaad bhi nahi hoga ki unhone tumhare papa ko dhoka diya tha...tumhare papa bohot izzat karte the unki..

Mr Gupta tapped Jai's shoulder.

Mr G: I know Jai ki tum kya sochrahe ho. Par unhe harane ke liye ek plan ki zaroorat hai aur wo tum mujhpe chod do..ab jao..

Mr Gupta collected his papers and left...

Jai was lost. What should he do? What can he do?

Suddenly a paper flew across the table.
Jai picked it up. It was addressed to Mr Gupta. But Jai was shocked.

To,
Madhav Gupta
Central Bureau of Investigation,
Nasik Branch,
Maharashtra.

Edited by Ritu278 - 13 years ago

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Moner_Radio

@Moner_Radio

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#119

@ ritu :
omg 😲!! wat an ending 👏..completely unexpected👏..out of d box ⭐️⭐️!!!! madhav gupta is a CBI officer😍 !!!! omg..keep updating yar..i 'm dying to read d next part !! 😃😳

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Bhargavi

@Historylover

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#120

😆 yahan pe kya lovelogy ki class chal rahi thi 😉 mera aur alex ka age difference bhi hardly matters 😳 maybe i'll grow old like twilight's bella ..but he will remain young at 32 forever like edward 😉 ...aha i know edward is 18 i'm talking in other context 😉

anyway...what an update ritz 👏
wow wow wow...madhav ji is from CBI ⭐️ ..maza aa gaya 😛 ..and gud that titli and hav patched up again 😃
loved this part ritz...desperately w8ing for the next part 😉

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