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Khushi Grover

@Amor.

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#121

wowww gr8 yaar maza aa gya

titli n jai r frndz again

n Mr. G chupe rustum nikle

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peihu

@peihu

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#122

@ritu - awesome update⭐️..mere jai ne gft mein cup dekar saste mein niptaadiya😆
bestest frnd..accha hua jai ne same feelings reciprocate nahi ki😆
gupta ji to cbi officer nikle re..yahan bhi yojna banane wale hain..maza aayega😃

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indupriya2008

@indupriya2008

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#123

too interesting update...👏

I loved that part when jai handed over that trophy to titli...i just remembered the part of Tere Liye..

n wow ab gupta sir ki planning...

last mein yeh kaisa blooper tha...gupta sir teacher hai aur cbi se unka kya connection...lagta hai woh raiprakash ki asliyat pta lagane aaye honge..👏

update soon...i'm too excited to read its next part...

Edited by indupriya2008 - 13 years ago

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Abhiram Rao

@Abhiram-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#124

Wah ! Mazaaa aa gaya ! 👏 Got addicted to the story,and dying to read the next part !! 🤗

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Anjali

@have-a-dream

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#125

😲OMFG what an awesum part ritz...its rocking👏hats off to yaa...jai-titli story⭐️gift was unexpected n d same was mr. gupta's emergence as an officer..awesum update👍🏼
thnx for the update n PM

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chahat singh thakur

@dharma22

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#126

wow ritu i am reading it till starting

very cute yaar

cute

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Ritu Aigal

@Ritu278

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#127

Part 8

Jai read it over and over again. How could this be? The teacher whom he trusted, he shared his joys and sorrows turned out to be a CBI officer.

Akshay: Jai...tu yaha hai?

Jai quickly stuffed the letter into his pocket.

Akshay: Chal, humare class ko address karne ke liye kuch khaas log aaye hai..
Jai: Khaas log?
Akshay: Ha, wo hamare safety ke liye aur hume terrorist attacks se bachne ke liye tips denge...

It was a gathering and all the students and teachers were gathered in the auditorium. Jai looked at Mr Gupta. He was busy talking with the principal. One of the guests began speaking.

''Hum jaante hai ki aaj kal... aatankwaad ka darr sabko hai...''
Jai was still looking at Mr Gupta. Akshay realised something is wrong.

Akshay: Kya baat hai Jai. Chup chup sa hai...Phir se us butterfly ke saath jhagda hua kya?

Jai couldnt shift his gaze. He was neither listening to the guest nor to Akshay.
Akshay shook him hard.

Jai: Kya hai Akshay..ek minute ke liye chup nahi reh sakte?
Akshay: Tum Mr Gupta ko aise kyun dekhrahe ho?
Jai: Kuch nahi..kabhi kabhi hum jaise sochte hai waise hota hi nahi..hai na?
Akshay: Lagta hai tujhe compound ke bahar wale doggy ne kaat liya hai na?

Jai didnt reply...

In the staff room

Mr Shah: ye sab speeches, ye warnings etc sab bekaar hai...itni powerful forces hone ke baad bhi terrorist apna kaam aaram se karte hai...

Mr Gupta: Aapne kabhi socha hai kyun aisa hota hai?

Mr Shah: Mai ek teacher hu aur mera kaam padhana hai...

Mr Gupta: Ya..i know that (He gave a mishchevous smile)

Mrs Bhattacharya: Madhav, aap mujhe class 5 ki attendence book de sakte hai...

Mr Gupta: Ya sure..

He opened his locker to find the book and he realised that his letter was missing. He couldnt ask anybody about it. He got tensed.

Mr Shah: Kya hua Gupta? Kuch zaroori khogaya kya?

Mr Gupta was in no mood to argue with Mr Shah. He went to all the classes, labs, office but couldn't find it. At last he came to the library. Jai was sitting with Akshay. Mr Gupta began his enquiry with the librarian.

Akshay: Kuch Pareshaan lag rahe hai Gupta sir..hai na?
Jai: Mai abhi aata hu...

Jai went to Mr Gupta

Jai: Sir, jo aap dhoond rahe hai wo ye to nahi? (He showed him the letter)

Mr Gupta was shocked. He pulled the letter from Jai's hand.
Mr Gupta: Ye tumhe kaha se mila Jai?
Jai: Kya ye sach hai sir..

The librarian looked at Jai suspiciously.

Mr Gupta: Plzz Jai..ye library hai, Can we talk outside? (For the first time Mr Gupta was nervous before Jai)

Mr Gupta took Jai to his house after school. Both didnt talk with each other until it was the time for Mr Gupta to explain.

Mr gupta: Dekho Jai, ab jab tumhe pata chal hi gaya hai to mai tumhe bata du ki mai yaha ek secret mission par aaya hu. Mai tumhare papa ka bachpan ka dost hu. Par hume parstitiyo se majboor hokar ek dusre se alag hona pada. Jab tumhare Papa ki maut ki khabar suni tab mai yaha aaya.

Jai: Aur aap mere school aaye mujhe dhoondte hue hai na?

Jai seemed to have forgotten that he was talking to his teacher.

Mr gupta: Maine Mrs Bhattacharya se tumhare baare me sab pata karwaya aur tumne bhi mujhe Avinash Raipraksh ke baare me sab bataya..

Jai: To aap ye kyun nahi kehte ki aapne mera use kiya hai...apne promotion ke liye...

Mr Gupta: Nahi jai..mai yaha sirf tumhare papa ke liye nahi..kisi aur maksat se aaya hu...

Jai: Mujhe nahi jana aap yaha kyun aaye hai...plzz..mujhe jaana hai..

Mr Gupta(to himself): Iam sorry Jai...par mujhe ye karna pada...I hope tum mujhe maaf kardoge..

Edited by Ritu278 - 13 years ago