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Anjali

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

wow abhi awesum...keep updating n thanx for pm...😃

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Ankita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

Abhi so lucky.. Abhi surrounded by 'WE', the gud gals.

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Abhiram Rao

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: jhum_86

you should write in that language in which you feel comfortable its upon you..but i personally feel the dialog in ancient era should be in shudh hindi which are between two indian character..it would be more convincing

Aru...i am comfortable both in English and Hindi...yes even I had thought to write the dialogues in pure Hindi...I myself am going to enjoy writing the dialogues in pure Hindi...but the dialogues are still far away...I will add some fictional dialogues in between tht may have occurred in the story...as as to make it more interesting...😉

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Abhiram Rao

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

: : Part 2 : :

This was the exact moment that Acharya Inderdutt was waiting for.The dream of King Puru, to conquer Takshila, was just some distance away.

Slowly and steadily, the commanders of Gandhara started losing their mental consciousness.They were lost in the world of wine,sleep and beauty.The network of female spies,soon succeeded in making the enemy army ineffective.Gandhara, soon became virtually paralysed.Inderdutt,was waiting for this golden opportunity.He immediately gave orders to attack Gandhara.

Kaikya army launched an attack on Takshila.When the Kaikya army was marching towards Takshila, Singnaad was intimately playing with the lustrous hair locks of the ravishing beauty, who was infact an enemy spy.All other commanders and Mantris of Gandhara, were lost in the artificial beauty of the horde of Kaikya spies.

The king of Gandhara, Ambiraj, was totally taken by surprise.He never expected such treachery from Puru.He could not fight back now.The army of Gandhara, had already been seduced.There was no chance now.Gandhara was doomed.

To save his people, Ambiraj readily accepted defeat.King Puru, however showed magnanimity to Ambiraj, and instead of dethroning him, appointed him as his representative governor.

When Puru came to Takshila, he was given a grand welcome.The officials of Kaikya were treated royally. Puru met Ambiraj, and said,

Puru: 'Gandhara Naresh, ab yeh Rajya meraa huaa.Par mein aapko iss singhaasan se nahi nikaalunga.Aaj se aap merE Pratinidhi bankar Gandhara par shaasan karenge.'

Ambiraj :' Dhanyawaad, Maharaj Puru.Mein aapka yein prastaav swikaar karta hoon.Aaj se Aap Gandhara ke SarVochha Naresh Hai.'

Fate does not spare anyone.Once a mighty king of Gandhara, was now reduced to being its representative governor.Now King Puru, ruled over it.However, King Ambiraj had become an admirer of Puru, due to his generosity in appointing him as governor.

One person was not happy over this arrangement.His burning mind could not accept the meek surrender of the Gandhara Naresh.His eyes flashed everytime with anger, when he thought of the magnificent welcome given to Puru.The treachery of Puru made him seethe in anger.His heart became obsessed with feeling of revenge.Revenge.Just revenge.Revenge for having done treachery.Revenge for humiliating the king of Gandhara.

The person was none other than the Rajkumar of Gandhara, Aambhik.

Edited by nivren - 14 years ago

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Arunita Chandra

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Posted: 14 years ago

#25

wow i am feeling attached to ambhik...great part...update soon...really i have sympathy with him

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Bhargavi

@Historylover

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Thanks 4 the update abhi 😊

so the whole reason was puru...i have read many texts which prove that he was a greedy king...here its proven once more indian kings never had unity and that led to the destruction...but thanks to chanakya for his strategy of akhand bharat 👏

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fuzzyface

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Historylover
Thanks 4 the update abhi 😊

so the whole reason was puru...i have read many texts which prove that he was a greedy king...here its proven once more indian kings never had unity and that led to the destruction...but thanks to chanakya for his strategy of akhand bharat 👏

Most leaders and their insatiable greed for power is root of all evil. Unity is never a good deal for them, at the end it is all about dividing and conquering. Even now our so called great leaders think unity works against them and they feel the need to have friction among people, so that everyone has only one person who they can run to, thus putting the leader in more power.

We need people who thinks and acts like Chanakya coz he belived in the greater good not just what's good for me, myself and I. Clearly he must have thought out of the box and looked at the bigger picture.

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Abhiram Rao

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Historylover
Thanks 4 the update abhi 😊

so the whole reason was puru...i have read many texts which prove that he was a greedy king...here its proven once more indian kings never had unity and that led to the destruction...but thanks to chanakya for his strategy of akhand bharat 👏

U r welcome Bhargu...and smile more naa...😃 Like this...

Yes...Pourava was the main reason...yes i have also read in many texts that he was a greedy king...i mean he did not actually fight...he captured Gandhara by deceit...cheating...Indian Kings had too many differences...they put their personal differences above national interest...unity was a word they had never heard in their life...Chanakya was a person who knew what fruits would unity bring...and the need for national unity...⭐️

Was the part well written...😕

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Abhiram Rao

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: jhum_86
wow i am feeling attached to ambhik...great part...update soon...really i have sympathy with him

thanks Aru...only tell me was it well written...😕

Yes I too felt sorry for Aambhik...

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Bhargavi

@Historylover

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#30

Yes Abhi😃 look it's a big smile😆 and yes...the part was well written...keep it up👍🏼

I sometimes wish ki Muslim and British invasion ke time Acharya Chanakya toh kya hota😉...unlike today...desh ki condition kuch aur hoti...😍

And Yes...i too felt bad 4 Ambhik...but as far as I know...he will realize his mistakes at last...i mean the mistakes he is doing in the show😕...let's c is story meiin kya hota hai😛

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