Chandini SS: Naane Kutram Saidhavan/I am the culprit UPD pg 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Dears,

I can see few readers in this forum as Tamilians & sudden urge to write on Tamil / Tanglish...

This is my first try in this way as i have written in English only till date... Still what is harm in making a try... So here it is...



Part 1

(Nandhini nirabaradhi endru mudivagivitadhu... nerubanam agivitadhu.. Chandra epadi nandhiniyai ethirkolvan)
(Nandhini is decided as innocent... proved as innocent... How Chandra will confront Nandhini...)

Chandra kutra unarchiyal thavikiran...
Chandra is feeling guilty...

Epadi Nandhiniyai parpadhu...
How can i meet Nandhini...

Epadi aval mugathil muzhipadhu...
How to see her face...

Oru nimidam naan yosika villaye aval medhu pazhi podumun...
I didn't think a moment before declaring her as guilty...

Nandhiniyum Durdharavum sagodharigalaga allava vazhdhargal...
Nandhini & Durdhara were just like sisters...

Apadi erukum podhu naan epidi ninaithen Nandhini Dhudharavai kondrirukka koodum endru???
In such case, how i thought that Nandhini might have killed Durdhara...

Periya thavaru saidhuvitten...
I committed a big mistake...

Naan matravarin pechai kettirukka koodadhu...
I might have not heard others words...

Aval tharappu niyayathai ketirukka vendum...
I might have her side too...

Avalukku oru vaippu koduthirukka vendum...
I might have given her a chance...

Aanal andru irunda nilamaiyil... En thozhi matrum manaivi yana Durdharavai ezhandhu thavikkum valaiyil ondrum thondravillai...
But in that fateful day where i lost my friend & wife Durdhara i didn't thought of anything...

Durdharavin viralgal Nandhiniyai nooki irundhadhu...
Durdhara fingers showed towards Nandhini...

Durdhara avalaidhan adayalam kattugiral endru thavaragha ninaithuvitten...
I thought Durdhana showed her as guilty...

Melum Helena matrum en guru Chanakyar Nandhinithan kondral endru urudhiyaga sonnargal...
Moreover Helena & Chanakya were confident that Nandhini killed...

Nandhini kodutha thaneerileye vizham kalakka pattu irundadhu...
Poison was mixed in the water given by nandhini only...

Ellam serndhu ennai kurudan aaki vitadhu...
Altogether it made me blind...

Andhu Raman than manaivi Seethayai izhandha podhu manam varundhi Valliyai murai illamal vadham saiya villaya...
Even the lord rama lost his control when he missed his wife Seetha and killed Vali in wrong way...

Kadavulana.. avadharamana Ramane apadi thavaru saidha podhu, Naan Chandran emmathiram...
If that is the state of Lord & incarnation of Lord Rama Where i am...

Anal naan ennai sari endru samadhana padithikolla thayaraga illai...
But i dont want to justify what i did...

Naan saidhadhu kutrame...
I committed mistake...

Samayamum Sandharpamum edhiraga irundalum naan nidhanam izhandhu iruakka koodadhu...
Situation & time though stood against i might have not lost my patience...

Theera visarithu irukka vendum...
I might have enquired properly...

Mannanaga nandhiniyin kanavanaga en kadamaiyil irundu thappi vitten...
As a King.. As a husband of Nandhini, i failed to do my duty...

Thavaru seidhuvitten...
I commuted mistake...

Naane Kutram Saidhavan...
I am the culprit...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Why Discontinued Banu ?
Un Tamizhin suvaiyai rasikka ododi vandha engalai emaatradhe Banu... emaatradhe...
Edited by rajatshweta - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajatshweta

Why Discontinued Banu ?

Un Tamizhin suvaiyai rasikka ododi vandha engalai emaatradhe Banu... emaatradhe...


i thought not good... Thats why..😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Banu, Telugu is my mother tongue. But I do understand ordinary spoken Tamil and the Tamil Brahmin slang. But that's it. I was finding it a bit difficult to make out the dialogues. This is coming from a person who actually watches Tamil movies very frequently. The visual medium and written medium are very different. There the viewers can understand a number of things based on the context, the gestures, the body language. Here we have only your language to guide us. If we fail to understand that, communication fails. No responses or comments automatically does not mean your work is not good enough. It might be that the readers are merely unable to understand. Make it easier for us. Please provide translations which will improve the readability factor. Instead of losing hope or discontinuing it, try to remodel and repackage it in a way that will reach your audience.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I agree to shailu's comment. I followed all your ff's posted here. My mother tongue is telugu and though i tried to read this ff i couldn't fathom much. As suggested by shalu, english transalations would do the need.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sorry dears... i didn't mean to discontinue in that way...
I never ever discontinued my FFs...

Actually in some curiosity i started this FF in tamil...

First thing i never tried this Tanglish...

Next i felt i am giving difficulty for other readers to read this...

That is why i decided to discontinue...

Nothing else...

Anyway as you all suggested.. i will reopen & start updating in both Tamil & English so that both readers can read it...

Sorry if i hurt anyone...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Brilliant beginning Banu. The whole update sounded very poetic. Continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update banu..can't wait to know nandini's reaction..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: shailusri1983

Telugu is my mother tongue. But I do understand ordinary spoken Tamil and the Tamil Brahmin slang. This is coming from a person who actually watches Tamil movies very frequently. .






Shailu,
In the above para, you can swap the words Tamil for Telugu and Telugu for Tamil in my case. 😃
I used to talk also back in school days. But i have lost touch since there is no telugu person in the place I live.

The words written by Banu in Tamil - is pure tamil, like the ones Kings used to speak. Now, that she has given the translation, I think all of us can sit together and enjoy.
Edited by rajatshweta - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 2

Naan medhuvaga aval araiku sendran...
I went slowly inside her room...

Aval Durdharavin pugaipadathai parthukondu nindrirundhal...
She was standing staring at the picture of Durdhara...

Medhuvaga avan pinnal sendru aval tholai thoda aval udane thalli sendral...
I slowly went behind her and touch her shoulder while she swiftly moved away...

'Nandhini... Ennai mannithuvidu...' endren...
'Nandhini... Please forgive me...' i said...

'Nengal mannar.. Naan yaar ungalai mannika...' endral...
'You are king.. who am i to forgive you...' she said...

'Naan matravarukke mannan.. unakku kanavan...' endren...
'I am king for others while i am husband for you...' i said...

'Kanavan!!! Evalavu naal nenaivindri erundhero???' endral...
'Husband!!! where you in amnesia all these days???' she asked...

'Nandhini... ' Endren melum pesa varthai indri...
'Nandhini...' i said without further words...

'Kanavan enbadhu payanathin podhu erpadum natpalla... payanam mudindhadhum perindu sella...' endral...
'Husband is not the friendship created on travelling which end as the travelling ends...' she said...

Naan thalai kunindhu nindren...
I was standing with my head looking down...

'Adhilum mosum padhiyil irakki viduvadhu...' endral...
'More worst when dropped just half the way...' she said...

'Ennai indha aranmanai vittu veliye anuppa mudivu saidhu anupiya podhu nengal kanavan naan manarivi enbadhu theriya villaya alladhu marandhu vittera???' endral...
'When you sent me out of this palace did you realise you are husband and i am wife or forgot it...' she asked...

'Naan saidhadhu thavaru...' endren...
'I committed mistake...' i said...

'Naan ungal thavarai mannithadhagave irukattum... irundham naam kanavan manaivi endru vazhum vaipai izhandhu vittom...' endral...
'Even if forgiven your mistake... We lost the chance of living as husband & wife...' she said...

'En Nandhini???' endren...
'Why Nandhini???' i asked...

'Kanavan Manaivi uravu nambikaiyal anadhu... Nengal epodhu andha nambikayai ezandhero appodhe andra uravu thool thool aanadhu...' endral...
'Relationship of Husband & wife is based on trust.. when you lost trust on me.. the relationship too broken to pieces...' she said...

'Enaku oru vaipu kodu Nandhini...'Endran...
'Give me a chance...Nandhini...' I said...

'Palagayil ezhudhi pazhaguvadhalla azhithu thirumba ezhudha... Kallal sedhukiyadhu...' endral..
Its not slate to erase and rewrite.. its carving on stone...' she said...

Padhilillamal avalai parthu nindren kannil neer vazhiya...
Without answer i was standing with tears rolling from eyes...




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