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Chapter 8

Chandra was seated in secret Chamber where he discuss all political affairs .He only allows Chanakya Helena ,few top notch ministers and his most trusted spies and ministers in that room.He keeps it only for very important discussions related to safety and security of Kingdom.

CHANAKYA : I have something more important piece of information to share Chandra

Chandra : (in hush tone) : what is it ?...Is it related to Malayaketu (looks into Helena).

Chanakya : Operation Shikhandi...Padmanand is going to attack you from behind during Vasanth utsav celeberation

HELENA : Name is somewhat ... unrelated to our region Acharya. ..Why he kept that name.

Chadra : Shikhandi means A character from mahabharat. He attacked Bhishma.Why he uses this name acharya?

Chanakya : It also means ,Peacock tamers clan of Pataliputra.
Since they openly supported us during wars, He wants to attack them to provoke us.

CHANDRA : THEN we will retaliate him.

Chanakya : Of course, we have to save innocent people. But you have to capture them ,he is our target.Nand is dangerous out there.

Chandra: Does Nandini knows her father's plan .(somewhat hurt)

Chanakya : I cannot say for sure .Through my spies I came to understand that Nandini has indeed sent message once after your marriage.

Helena :Acharya... I don't fear Nandini, even if she is plotting. SHE is a puppy.We are hunters...She cannot defeat us

CHAndra : Is the news trustworthy

Chanakya : SPY who works for Nand is a double agent. My trustworthy spy,who gave all information to us all these years.

Chandra : Can I keep Nandini in house arrest .. She cannot plot against us.

Chanakya No, She is a pampered daughter,this will backfire against you. Since you have taken I suppose your relation or I can put like this, that you have accepted her as your wife . PHYSICALLY, at least... you cannot rub her wounds.

CHANDRA- What else will work Acharya?
Chanakya - Treat her like as If you trust her.!
Chandra - Will it alone help?
CHANAKYA- NO, we need to deal her emotionally.!
Chandra- Durdhara,can I send her
CHANAKYA - No not her. Send Avantika her mother,Wife Of Padmanand

(Chandra and Helena together) - Rani Avantika.You release her.

Chanakya - As per my information,She openly detested Nand. Even now, She thinks that You are good king I have learnt through dasi's that Avantika influenced Nandini to marry you. She infact advised her to act according to Chandra's desire.

HELENA - very well, Let us release Rani Avanthika.
CHANDRA -YES , you go ahead Helena and release her

Chanakya - Not Helena, you go to her Chandra. On releasing her, just say her that Nandini is not cooperating to you. SHE IS not ready to accept you as her husband. She still broods over Her father.Any mother will take this as warning call ,she will emotionally deal her,by making her to face truth of Padmanand.It will have an effect on Nandini.Once she starts to hate him for his bad deeds,She will be forced to lead us to Padmanand. No other way we can bring him before us. Nandini is our shield as well as weapon.

Last but not least, we have to somehow make Nand believe that Nandini and you have sorted difference and close in physically and emotionally.Already Amatya is hinted about your proximity with Nandini through My spy. Nand is not believing it seems. If we bring Nandini out of palace and make her appear publicly with you as your Mukya Maharani,Nand will start believing our spells.

CHANDRA: When should we do..

CHANAKYA : Befor Vasanth utsav!!! we have only 15 days for it and In between harvest festival is going to be held.we may enact a drama. We will be with people and you have to be paying special attention to Nandini. Nand will definitely come to see his daughter in disguise. Onseeing you and Nandini together happier,he may stop manipulating her. He may desert her. He may even attack her because of her closeness to you. That's all I want. Your relationship with her will be strengthened and Nandini will able to see her father's other side.

CHANDRA : WILL NAND YIELD TO US

CHANAKYA : Don't worry ,my spies will take care.We shall go there along with Rajmata, ChAya and your queens to Pataligram across Ganga.You announce Nandini as Mukya Rani who will make her public appearance and to please Durdhara make her Janapada kalyani(Queen who sows seed for cultivation. Topmost honor in those age.Hope Helena does not get upset.

Helena : me no.. I don't want anything.If Nandini make Avantika ma believe that she indeed developed closeness With Chandra?Then what options we have

Chanakya : sow the seeds of disbelief.

Helena : Acharya,I will make Dasis gossip how Nandini did not accept Chandra ,These back talks will make her belief. Also Durdhara.She will say anything to cement relation of Chandra and Nandini. She loves her more like her sister. Chandra ,you are going to be with me today when Rani Avantika is released and If by chance Nandini came to you,you have to be Indifferent.

Chandra Yes... For sake of my people.

Chanakya : Day after tomorrow is Purnima, make all announcement. Helena you have to make Avantika believe all we want. Chandra you should make Nandini seek you. Rest in hands of God.I will summon spies late tonight.

All of them dispersed. Chandra personally went to Avantika,released her and asked her pardon.Avantika felt happy. Chandra at apt time spilled his beans. Avantika was shocked. She was pursued by Helena to her room and she in turn twisted all about Nandini and made her believe Nandini rejected Chandra's Advancement. Durdhara and Nandini was deliberately sent to royal temple while these things were taking shape. Dasi's also gossiped about Nandini which made Avantika feel terribly shocked.
She went to Nandini's room

Nandini: Ma .. What a surprise. How did you come.
Avantika : Damad ji released me
Nandini : Is it!!I am surprised,how he did...he is impossible mysterious person whom I had a fortune to meet.
Avantika : He is not mysterious. Iam surprised by your attitude.
Nandini: What Have I done.
Avantika took hold of her hand: Why are you rejecting Maharaj's demand.That too for your father.
Nandini: What.. no you are wrong... We have sorted all things,infact we have consummated our relation.
Avantika: you Nandini,when Have you started to speak lies?
Nandini What are you saying.. Iam
Avantika : Stop...I know... you have rejected him
Nandini: Who said you
Avantika: What does it have to do ...I know you silly girl.. You are still plotting against your husband
Nandini: ma ,,,now everything is sorted.
Avantika: Is it... Common Nandini tell me ..Where is your husband
Nandini : he is with Acharya...
AVantika: No... he is in snankaksh with Helena.
Nandini: What are you saying.. He said that he is with Acharya for tonight.
Avantika : then go and fetch him here. I will believe you
Nandini : Ok... I will be back

Nandini at first went to Acharya chamber. To her dismay,he was not there.So she went to his Hamam room. There she beheld Helena and Chandra in highly romantic mood.
Nandini : maharaj ,you are here.I was searching for you.
Chandra: Nandini, dont you have any sense. I'am spending time with MY dear wife. Why you are here.
Nandini : Chandra .. I dont get it..
Chandra: yes yes.. you dont know. When I came to you ,you rejected my advancement,now what brings you here. Get out Nandini. I dont want to see your face.
Without saying a word she came out and was shocked to see her mother standing there and her facial expression it was very clear that she heard Chandra and Nandini conversation.
Nandini : Ma .. i,,,
Avantika: stop, everything has been sorted right... thats why he insulted you silly girl.Oh ishwar,,, My girl 'slife..He is your husband,you don't know where and with whom he is.he says Helena my dear wife and you say I have accepted him.
come here and she whisked Nandini to her room.
INside Hamam Chandra and Helena smiled at each other
Helena: atlast our plan worked.
Chandra : I feel sorry for shouting at her.
Helena: Dont worry,you can console her. you are good at endearing and loving skills. You can make her. If nothing works just kiss her (with twinkle in her eye). You are a good lover and a great kisser too.

Chandra: If you say it must be correct... I know how to deal her... I just love her tantrums...and her cute innocent face .. You know ,when she sees me,I feel agitated.

Helena: Padmanand is taking his revenge ... by giving a seductress named Nandini to you.. Well ... If you are happy... I am happy too. because I cannot love you like her... I am a fish of different kettle...I found my mother misleading me... So I sent her to Greece.

contd...
Edited by Avantika1115 - 8 years ago
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You have brought in the historical intrigue angle in this chapter. That's nice. So C&C have their aces up on Nand and are manipulating Nandini and Avantika. That's intriguing. Thanks for the PM!
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Hi Avantika,
I like the way you cleverly insert and intertwine historical facts into the story - like the running lion, existence of Chanakya's daughter, the court room sessions, plan against impending attacks from NAND etc.

Chandra is shown as a typical man belonging to that era - strong, manupulating, chauvinistic, coupled with an attitude of a emperor who thinks he can break and bend things the way he wants ... and when he wants it...

Chanakya is shown as a normal grihasta who has his own personal problems, of a dead daughter and a mentally sick wife, despite being a strong political diplomat.

Helena, for a change, is shown As a strong lady, confident of herself, Not afraid to take decisions by herself, strong companion to Chandra in terms of war and administration, very clear about her relationship with Chandra, and knows that he has a strong inclination towards Nandini and not bothered about it.

Durdhara is a comforting companion to Chandra and a sensible sister to Nandini and intervenes at the right time assertively to bring peace between Chandini.

It is Nandini's character that needs building - according to me..
She is shown as a weak opponent to Chandra from the beginning, unable to stand up to his tantrums and torture, feels lonely, has hormonal imbalances, has urges of her age, unable to control her temper or emotions in front of others in a Queenly manner (I believe they are taught from the beginning how to make public appearance and behave in front of others), breaks down easily.
No woman can stand a man calling another woman's name when he is with her - albeit iduring a polygamous period . Here Nandini is aware of Mitra, chandra's love for her, and the truth that he is seeing Mitra in Nandini even while being physical with Nandini. That is a serious blow to ine's self esteem.
She needs to rise above the puppy level (that Helena and Chandra thinks abt her), show herself as a strong person, bold enough to be the sweetheart of an emperor, establish her identity As Nandini in the mind of Chandra as a husband, make him identify the similarities and differences between Mitra and Nandini, and make the scale tilt more towards Nandini in the bargain. How she takes a stand between her father and husband also remains to be seen. That takes some serious script work with more creative tracks.

That's my feel on the character building of Nandini. But storywise and sequences, great going dear... kudos.
Edited by rajatshweta - 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Avantika1115



its based on folk lore of Bihar yar... So I made use... Just to make CGM fall for nandini😳



Yes, I believe there is a fort in Chanakya daughter's name. She was believed to have been in love with Chandragupta. It's not clear whether he was also in love with her. It's also not clear whether she committed suicide. Folklore says Chanakya killed her because he dint want her to weaken Chandra in his Anand Bharath dream conquest - which doesn't sound logical to me. But yes, they believe that her ghost still (?!) roams the fort.
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Thanks Rajatsweta...I will definitely consider your angle.
Based on folklore only I took steps to introduce daughter's angle.Mitra nane I introduced. ...
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Originally posted by: rajatshweta




Yes, I believe there is a fort in Chanakya daughter's name. She was believed to have been in love with Chandragupta. It's not clear whether he was also in love with her. It's also not clear whether she committed suicide. Folklore says Chanakya killed her because he dint want her to weaken Chandra in his Anand Bharath dream conquest - which doesn't sound logical to me. But yes, they believe that her ghost still (?!) roams the fort.



Oh - That is moving, if it was real. Chandragupt fascinates me no end. The real one.

But chanakya is something else.
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Chapter 8 ,Part 2

It was late night ,when Chandra reached Nandini's room. He saw Nandini awake ,but did not come to receive him. He was anticipating it.He sat beside her closely in bed. Took her hand,But Nandini shrugged it off in anger. He tried to speak to her,but she did not speak to him. He tried kissing her as last resort,but Nandini broke it apart.
This made him quiet enraged "Nandini, listen to me "( in authoritative tone).Nandini did not budge in to his tricks. Chandra"Nandini,you dont know me. See these small tactics which a five year old kid can do but not you.. Definitely not my wife.
Nandini casted him a look,which was indicative that she is making fun of his words. Like Am I really your wife?

Chandra "Nandini, You don't know me.. I repeat... Now be a good girl. I just want you to look at me and smile"

Nandini turned her head in other direction."Nandini, smile ... I want you to look at me and smile".
Nandini ignored his words and looked out in balcony.

"Very well,Nandini. If you have this much ego,then as king how much will I have. In just another 20 minutes i will make you come to my chamber".

Nandini was sitting as though she was not afraid of his tantrums.

"Very well"..When he was about to say,

"Damad Ji ...Oh I am sorry.. I have disturbed you" saying Avantika entered the room. She was not aware of Chandragupt's presence.

"Oh Mother,you are embarrassing me by saying like this . I just came to gift my wife some jewelries and silk dresses. "

"Is it" Avantika was surprised at seeing the thalis
Only then Nandini took note that indeed he bought all these gifts for her.

"Maharaj,dont worry,I will send her dressed in those gifts you bought for her to your room. I want you two be happy always.You are not like my husband who ill treats women. I am blessed to have you as my Son in law.Avantika became emotional.

Chandra made a wide grin at Nandini,while Nandini looked at him.

"Well,Nandini I will be waiting ...for you only... Dont disappoint me my Darling"

"No Damad ji she will obey you..."Avantika hurriedly ...

After some time, Nandini went to His room

"Nandini... you are looking amazing... my kharghosh"I want to you to smile ..my girl..

"so you have won" Nandini demanded answer

"Nandini, I know your purport of asking. Just believe for greater good for you especially I am doing all these.. I have no pleasure in hurting you in front of Helena.. but situation demands that...try to think in my shoes"

Nandini was bit cleared with his answers.

"Now what you want My maharaj" Nandini was eager to know what he exactly desired by her.
"I want to you to love me" Chandra smilingly with soothing words.

"Thats I am doing every night" Nandini demanded

Chandra : "Who said no .. did I say"
Nandini : "But dasis..."

Chandra : "that's their nature..they will always blow a matter out of proportion Don't pay any heeds.Common lets leave those talks. Nandini you look so beautiful today. You make me feel special.sometimes i wish I was not a king. Because being king makes me pushed to awkward unpleasant situations. I cannot lead a normal life...I have to deal with so many situations and yield to so much pressures. I am tired mentally. I want someone who would be available to me when I seek . My heart says that you will be there for me always. Won't you Nandini?

Nandini : I am always ready for you. but you always try to..demand some closeness. Why do you do that

Chandra : yes ,because I do worship beauty.
Nandini" Am i So beautiful?
Chandra : Do you have any doubts .
Nandini: If you say then it must be correct.

Both smiled ...
Nandini : How should I love you...

Chandra forced his lips to hers, turning a silent moment into a cool passionate one. He wrapped his arms around hers, pulling closer to his warm body. said "I can't believe I've waited full day to do this." And as quickly as he could, he brought his soft lips back to hers, to her neck, was kissing all over until he let go once again. She realized there were tears in his eyes as he whispered "I love you." Chandra did not lie . He spoke the truth of his heart.Nandini for first time saw his tears. She embraced him and both slept together till dawn.


Edited by Avantika1115 - 8 years ago
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Chandragupt is manipulating Nandini a lot. She is allowing him to do it too. But does she have a hidden agenda in all this. Which side will she choose, her father or Chandragupt during Vasanth Utsav? Good part.
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That is the twist...
Nandini is immature and always thinks in emotional plane. AVantika factor also influences her thinking,because Avantika was abandoned by Nand. IE he only speaks to her or acts before Nandini. Avantika thinks that she failed handling Nand. So she does not want Nandini loose hold in Cgm. So as a mother She worries about her daughter life.Nand too after seeing closeness of Nandini And cgm will get provoked. NANDINI starts slowly falling for Cgm...
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Chapter 9

Nandini finished her daily worship and sat to take meals. It was two days since she met Chandra. By that time he made announcement that Durdhara is JanapadaKalyani and Nandini is mukya Rani. They have to leave for Pataligram next day for Ksheer pooja.

Avantika and host of others were very happy because Chandra chose Nandini as Mukyarani. Nandini though in beginning was happy,but she suddenly developed suspicion that Chandra is using her to some hidden purpose. He suddenly treats her as an unwanted person in palace. These two days he was seen with Durdhara . Even Nandini saw them in each others arms in Royal Garden.She was not jealous of Durdhara,but she was sensing that Chandra is avoiding her. Nandini even went to see him but he did not permit her inside his room. Nandini was upset.

"Is Chandra playing tricks or he really loves me" Nandini's mind echoed these questions since morning. She could not share her feelings with her mother. Avantika will accuse her that she is not taken him seriously. Avantika literally wants Nandini to offer herself whenever She can. Nandini thought " Being physically close and mentally close is different".Slowly evening and Night arrived She tossed in her bed and at last came to conclusion. She decided to see if Chandra really likes her or is he acting for hidden vendetta. She summoned dasi and asked her "Dasi, Where is Maharaj now"

"maharani ,Maharaj is getting ready to go to JanapadaKalyani Durdhara's chamber in an hour. "
"Fine... you may go" When Dasi disappeared ,Nandini took a quick bath and dressed herself carefully. She was extra consious to appear asl good looking but not as seductress.She spalashed some lavender perfume which was mild . Long strands of Jasmine flower,few glass bangles on both hands, yellow dress and kohled eyes. Just simple makeup. She was dazzling like a serene Goddess. She looked out,she still had 15 minutes. Wasted no time , went to his chambers and sneaked in.

Chandra was standing facing his back and was writing some thing . Maybe related to governance,who cares.
Nandini purposely removed her anklet, and went to him. He was deeply involved in the work.
Hugged him from behind.
"Durdhara... " Chandra said
" I have caught you atlast... " Nandini spoke softly.
Chandra gathered himself " YOU NAndini...How did you come inside?

Nandini : by front door. Who could stop me...I am your wife.
Chandra: I am going to Durdhara now.
Nandini: Go,who stopped you. I just came to tell, that I am also very much present in this vast palace.
Chandra : who denied it?
Nandini : Nobody can ... In fact there is no one who can take me out...
Chandra : Oh... I get it...
Nandini: you dont get it... Because Just leave it..
Chandra : What do you want...
Nandini: I want you.. Love... rights...
Chandra : I am not impressed... Nandini better luck next time...
Nandini: its now or never...Maharaj
Chandra: I am getting late... ( He hurried himself outof room)
Nandini: So, you have misled him correctly using his very own blood... Now you dont need me... Well played maharaj..Of course my silly mother is also manipulated by you...

Chandra gave a look,which was impossible for her to judge his answer. He went away without saying a word.
Nandini was in tears... She could not digest his behavior. She left his room and reached her own room.She cried and she layed herself in floors.
Time passed, she heard footsteps and door opening sound. Some mild perfume lingered in her nose. Yes it was his perfume. "What ,he .. why..."

Chandra saw her laying in floors with her head down. He lifted her and pinned her to wall. " What is your problem...Just because I am married to you, I should not attend my other wives... Am I your waiting dasi... If I went to Durdhara ,you accuse me of manipulating you. Are you my equal... Is You are only way to reach Nand... Then why the hell I need A man called Chanakya..Common Nandini.. Your are completely immature.you understanding is very little. I am a King... I have duties to attend. What you think of me ... your words are like a bee sting... You wont understand... I am wasting my time.

Nandini ":then why you avoided me...
Chandra : you accuse me ...If that the case (he stopped)... What should I do now.. Should I serve you.
Nandini : "you are hurting me a lot ... She cried...
Chandra : small argument ... you will cry... Look at Helena.. How strong is she... Look at Durdhara... She loves me still same like she used to even after knowing I am after you.. Everyone in this palace know this fact except you...Should I hang a board in my neck and roam ..Your tantrums are like a small toddler..Who nags his mother for attention.
Nandini I am feeling lonely. I have no one except you.. This is my problem... (she hugged him tightly and cried.)
She continued "Durdhara and Helena are different. They have their maternal home somewhere,where their family is there,waiting for them. Father is there ,brothers are there. Look at me... I have a father who has been overthrew ed. He is cunning and selfish .. My mother who always says me to get physical with my husband to have place in his heart. Myself Nandini,who cannot understand herself and feels very terrible if her Love does not speak to her or comes to her. You may think these are silly expectations,but for me my day starts and ends with you alone. I cherish time spending with you... Problem is with you.. You think I am a born bought up princess whereas I consider myself as a girl who is happy when she is with her love.. You think I love golds and silks.. I am contented with a glass bangles... Now say me... Am I wrong... I dont want any title... I am happy ... I am happy with your company... I dont understand politics..I am least concerned whether you are a king or a commoner or even forest dweller. I am ready to run with you anywhere and everywhere.I cannot bear separated from you... Hey Krishna .. I dont know what language my husband understands.. If possible make him understand.

Chandra did not reply. He just looked with surprise .He did not understand How Nand's daughter can be so simple and sweet.

Nandini at last gave him a shock "Maharaj, YOu ARE late,Durdhara will be waiting for you. I felt like sayiing ..so said my feelings. You are independent... I am not stopping you.

Chandra : Its a wonder... How did you take birth as daughter of Nand... are you his daughter.You dont have any of his character..Even gods make mistakes.Yes I am getting late... I dont like wasting time.

Saying so he went towards the door. Nandini felt very sad... To her surprise, he did not go out. He just locked the door and came to Nandini.

Nandini smiled at him,he too smiled " I am sorry... " Just at time , small pleasant breeze flowed on Nandini's face making her curls fall on her cheeks. He just gazed at her eyes which spoke more than she spoke. He felt her intensity of love.. Then, he smiled and kissed her on the check and there was silence... after a while he embraced her and kissed her lips . Nandini and Chandra heard each others heartbeats . They waited for it to regularize. Nandini parted by kissing him on his neck and saying that I love you. He just kissed on her forehead and said "I too". Both of them fell on the bed..Whatever happened next is purely desired bliss.


Edited by Avantika1115 - 8 years ago

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