Chandra Nandini -An soulful Love Story ff NEW CHP 31 pg 24 - Page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Fantastic chapters Avantika😃
I read all of them in one go😊
This story is very interesting⭐️
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Nice chapter Avantika. Keep up the good work.
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Me thinks that Nandini is using her body as a weapon (women used it as their political strategy those days, nothing new) against Chandra. Earlier, she meant to use it only as an art of seduction or for earning sympathy (like singing Krishna song and shedding a tear or two in front of him) , but with her mom's persistence on conjugal rights, and her recent discovery of Chandra's love towards his dead Mitra (replica of Nandini), she must have chosen to become a temptress ..
Saam, daan, bedh, dand...
if she is too weak to win her enemy by Might, she will strike on his only weakness- his heart that aches.
But, in the process, she is also hurting herself. She has also fallen for him physically and mentally. How she will manage to face the odds between her husband and her father remains to be seen.

But the nagging question here is : How Nandini (daughter of NAND) is looking ditto to Mitra (daughter of His arch enemy Chanakya) ???
Makes me doubt Nand and Chanakya's wife... 😆.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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I really expected that someone asks me 😉...ok May be I give u later some revealations...
i have to think...even Chandra thinks Nandini is not nand daughter...😃 one thing i want to alert my readers is my Nandini is very different and so my Cgm...I cannot reveal more than this... because I think.. if everything becomes predictive,my grip over readers will be lost...one more thing... i imagine only Rt and spb lot of others when iam trying to pen my story like their appearance and hiw they conduct amongst themselves. More than that I am not using anything else from the cvs...RT AND SBP has definitely influenced me to such extent that i am trying to write which i wanted from serial...
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Chapter 10

The breeze blew in through the windows. The night was calm and peaceful so that even the sound of the distant waves of Ganga was audible. CHANDRA tossed in his bed with various thoughts keeping him awake. Beside him, a peaceful Nandini was fast asleep with a smile on her lips probably dreaming of moments of passion she experienced after a long wait.

She would also have found peace after unburdening her worries to her Lord and Chandra as an affectionate husband could have allayed her worries as any loving husband would. But Chandra just said I love you.HE gave her no replies nor said anything big about her lengthy sermons.

Chandra felt that She is trying to attack his weak point ...Even after being this much close with him,she did not confess of sending message to her father after his marriage. THIS irked him.. Chandra thought he will even pardon her,but he expected her to speak to him.Nandini was keeping mum on this whole issue and was treating him as though he was not aware of anything happening around him.

He gently moved aside Nandini's hand that had sort of half embraced him even as she slept. He got up from his bed and moved to the window, pondering over the issue that Nandini told earlier..He was deeply immersed in thoughts, and was unable to understand his wife.
HE thought that he is giving too much space for her. HE was unsure that what will she do,which side she will join . Is she in his side or other camp.Every time just after being close with her, Nandini always made it has a habit to compel Chandra to forgive Nand. He Thought why she is not opening her mouth before intimate moments.Why only after the act.This not end of confusion, why Nandini is stopping him when he says he is going to Durdhara. She is not showing any jealousy when He declares Helena as his dearer wife and Durdhara as Janapadakalyani(Who brings fortune to KINgdom.. ie KIng's favoured wife).She is not seen happy when she has been elected as Mukya Rani. Why she is always saying to him "I am feeling lonely..".Chandra contemplated Nandini's face. It was as placid as lake and as pristine as dew drops.

He heard a mumbling sound .. of course it was Nandini.

HE listened her inaudible sounds ,but after some minutes he could not believe her words.

Nandini : Chandra... I know you love me more than I deserve...but I have betrayed you... My father ...he is... sent me a ... message... Chandra i don't want to loose you... He cannot... even he cannot come between us...Shikandi...my foot... vasanth utsav don't come... dont go away from me..i have betrayed you... chandra hated me that time he... want to seek revenge...will you forgive me.Chandra... i am there for you alone... i am not seducing... i am trying to be happy... happy for you ...with you...only... Idiot malayaketu... treacherous rogue

It was blatantly clear that she dreams like she confessing to him.He understood that her actions were not to hurt him,but to seek his attention.Earlier Chandra had accused and even spate venom of hate whenever they came before each other.If Nandini is to blamed ,he too has to share this blame.Had he treated her properly,she could have not behaved like this.Chandra did not find necessary to find what she think during his wedding with her. He never inquired her views nor sought any explanation.

He turned and moved back to the bed where she had begun to sense his absence. He saw her hand groping over the bed to find him. He quickly moved to her side and took her close. Love of the woman is man's best ally, after all." He thought to himself, tenderly brushing Nandini's hair.

Chandra heard some one shouting "We are attacked". Immediately he realized that his weapons are in his room. Without wasting time ,he woke her up.

Chandra: Nandini,we are attacked...

Nandini : what ... Who...(She listens the commotion that is taking place outside)

Chandra: Who else... It is your father.( Nandini swallowed a lump).

Chandra continued"Nandini,my weapons are in my room. I cannot go out. Your father may attack me and Kill me.

Nandini shredded tears and Tried to calm him

"LOok ,I am here. Nobody can even touch you.. So what your weapons are in your room... I will help you out"..

Chandra making his face like a innocent kid "Nandini,How can we go out... We are surrounded. Iam sure Your brother is also came.He stopped and look into her eyes helplessly.

Nandini: you are surprising me..Did you forget That I am born in this palace .I know each corners of the palace. She cupped her hands around his face and said in low soft tone.

"Listen carefully, I know a secret path in this palace.It leads straight unto a room which is equipped with weapons. My father always used to be alert for situations like this. YOu can go and get it . I will help you. From there we can use a back staircase and come to the place where the attackers are present. We can retaliate.

Without wasting time,Nandini took his hands and torch to a room in other side of room.There she helped him to get into a corridor ,and finally into a room. Chandra was carefully observing her movements. Nandini lead him to the room and yes she was correct . That room was indeed provided with all weapons."Look Chandra,there is all weapons. Grab them quickly.She help the torch and Chandra swiftly took them. "Chandra,look it leads to the back staircase. Common quick. Dont waste time...

"Yes Nandini, .. I am coming.. GO front..."Nandini did not even think once ,How she is going to face her father All she was thinking was How to help him in this attack."My father... my foot" Nandini cursed Padmanand for his cowardice."He is not worth of Pardon" . She climbed the staircase and opened the door. What she saw at that nip of time, her whole heart stopped for a moment.

Nandini was totally bewildered.
there was Helena,Acharya Chanakya and other ministers were standing smiling at her and Chandra.

Chanakya :"Maharaj, We have curbed the attackers and he smiled at Chandra.

Nandini :"Maharaj,where is My father... "

"Gone far away from our lives" Chandra drew a smile on his face and Put his hand on her shoulder.

Chandra: Acharya.. yes you were right... We can Identify gold only by rubbing it with a stone...

Chanakya : I accept... Gold is always a Gold.Even Gods do mistake.


Poor Nandini cannot understand that all these were scripted by Chanakya. Why very simple

. For getting this answer we have to go back few hours before night.


Chandra,Helena and Chanakya . Three were secretly holding a meeting regarding Nandini.

Chandra: Acharya... Nandini is more trickier than I thought. I have a doubt that she is playing behind my back.She voluntarily always dashes on me. Always tells that she loves me and create scenes before everybody.

Helena : She cannot plot... Forget it...Its just a puupy..

Chanakya: No Helena, May be she is acting smart.

Chandra : We have to find her truth. But how.

Chanakya: Test your wife at the time of difficulties. Its a high time we plot and catch her. If she is innocent,she shall be spared else Chandra you have. no choice

Chandra: If she is guilty,I am ready to banish her from my life and throw her to prison.

Chanakya: You should not change your mind. Because Of date I am always seeing you entering her chambers. (Paused).. It is up to you. I am not bothered. Coming to NandiniIF she thinks herself as Chandragupt's wife ,I will always respect her else I have no sympathy for plotting Nand's daughter.

Chandra: How can we be sure?

Chanakya :Trap her ...

Chandra : You mean to say, We have to put under deliberate situation and watch which side she takes.you should not make her think that you dont trust her... Be natural

Chanakya:We dont have choice.. IF she is acting smart,we have to nip at the bud..If we drift away the time she will make Padmanand to escape. Lets see... which side she belongs.

Helena: If she finds the truth... Wont it be difficult for us

Chanakya: Dont give her time to react or think.It is in hand of Chandra. You have to wake her from sleep and just say Your father(he stressed father) attacked us. If we say simply attacker,my hunch says she may support Chandra. Thats not we need to Know. We need to Know how she reacts if she has been given options to chose between Chandra and Padmanand.

Chandra: Its promising.

Helena: I am eager to see ..

All of them dispersed after deciding timings of the sequence.

Present time.

Chanakya : Maharaj.. situation is tested and we are safe. Thanks Nandini to helping our Maharaj.

Nandini: you are surprising me... I just saved my Husband... It doesn't matter who is attacking Chandra. I am always try to help him.

Chanakya : Yes maharani... I appericiate for that wise words. Maharaj its still night, We all can retire peacefully now. Hope Chandra can be peaceful.

Chanakya went out and Helena just came to Chandra winked her eyes "Lucky you... Enjoy... "

Helena looking at Nandini " Well done.. Nandini...Do you have plans to continue your sleep.

Nandini : Yes ... I am going to sleep.. still long hours to go before dawn.

Helena.: I dont think tonight you can sleep... Isn't it Maharaj

Chandra made a wide smirk: Helena... Dont teach me what to do with my wife...

Helena.: I admit... You are an expert... Nandini you just say me tomorrow whether my words are correct or not.. Dont forget. Helena made her way out. Nandini soon found her hidden meanings of those words. when she and Chandra reached back her room.


Edited by Avantika1115 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice chapter Avantika😃
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KSHEER pOOJA

Ksheer pooja was scheduled to tak eplace next day as planned. All the royal family members along with Chanakya ,Sujatha and Avantika reached PataliGram. The very place were Chandra was bought up in ingontigo. He recieved tutellage under Chanakya. From here oonly he went to Takshakshila and only in this soil he fell in love with Mitra-mystical daughter of Chanakya and Sujatha.

Chandra,Durdhara and Mitra were all grown together from child hood. Later when he came from Takshashila he proposed Mitra . All happened before Durdhara's eyes . She was doing the role of cupid for them. Recollecting all old memories Durdhara unknowingly cried.

After they reached Pataligram. Nandini and Durdhara were sitting and chit chatting.
Dur: Heard Nandini that you save Chandra.. What any thing special... I see you neck having some marks here and there.What spell did you do ... common tell me..
I swear I will not tell any one .Nandini immediately became careful and tried to adjust with jewellaries.Inreturn

"Durdhara. How is things there. I saw you both in Nala Damayanti pose in Royal Garden.. Anything special
"
Very smart" Durdhara reiterated. "Nandini.. DId Chandra say anything about your striking resembelence with Mitra...(waited for reply).
"Yes Durdhara... he make it often(silence) How come she look like me
"Nandini I dont know.. may be its wonder... But I know she was not biological daughter of Acharya. They found her in tirth yatra. You know Mitra and Chandra were head on heels while loving. (paused).see ,I forgot to show. Durdhara opened a box..
"Nandini,this is Chandra's personal box. Where he used to store his special things. See this peacock feather, See this is Mitra.. (Durdhara pointed showing a portrait.) What a surprise,she looked like Nandini... and here this yellow saree which he bought for her from Takshasheela. They use to meet in Ksheer sarovar. I think today also he is there only.
Durdhara pondered and looked at Nandini" Here come with me inside room."
She dressed Nandini just like Mitra."Look Nandini ,we will go to Ksheer sarovar and surprise him..
Nandini eagerly accepted to this idea. She wanted to see How Chandra will feel if she Nandini in Mitra's attire.
Soon, they reached the spot. There he saw Chandra sitting under a tree and feeling gloomy. These girls did not understand intensity of his pain. They were in jest to tease him
Moment Nandini stood before him Chandra stood up from his place ,came before her.He beheld her in Mitra's costume and next moment a loud tight slap landed on Nandini's face
"Durdhara where are you" he voice reached top most pitch

Durdhara came before him trembling with fear"Durdhara,dont you have any sense... You are a queen and you stoop to this level. Dont you think How bad I will feel.
"Nandini, atleast you should have used your brain. YOu ARE NOT MY MITRA...YOU CANT BE GET LOST... BEFORE I GIVE YOU ANOTHER SLAP.
Durdhara and Nandini came back to room. Both did not speak anything. Chandra did not ven returned for having dinner with them. He asked dasis to get just Milk.
Durdhara when she herself went inside chamber to ask pardon, he indeed said "I am not angry... I think I have over reacted... Now you go to sleep dear... You have many rituals to do before Ksheer pooja.
Durdhara somewhat relieved. She opened her mouth" Chandra.. Nandini also did not eat"
"She will not die... Dont act stupid..."Durdhara left murmuring about his temper.

Chandra could not hold himself long after he behaved rudely with Nandini and Durdhara. Durdhara's nature that she was very bubbly and she will not over think even if he had slapped her. But Nandini..Very difficult to pacify.Chandra after speaking and inquiring Durdharaa He Went straight to Nandini's room.


Chandra: Tomorrow ,you have to assist me while I plough the field and Durdhara will sow seeds. THATS what we do in Ksheer pooja. Hope you know ...(He started conversation.)

Nandini: I know my role... MY place... thanks for enlightening me clearly... Dont worry...

Chandra: What role you are refering here..
Nandini: Generally ... I know my role...
Chandra: Come back... What role and what place...
Nandini: Nothing like that/... nothing special... (silence) Can you excuse me ... I am tired...
Chandra: You are saying me to get away from this room.
Nandini: I did not mean this...
Chandra: What is your point... I dont understand...
Nandini: I am not Mitra
Chandra left without answering..
Edited by Avantika1115 - 8 years ago
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Chandra left a deep sigh and left her room. Chandra lay awake in his bed, he could not sleep for a long time for thinking of what had happened . All thoughts of Mitra flashed back in his mind. Restlessly he loitered here and there in his room.Suddenly he felt soft touch. With that touch itself he recogonized it was His Mitra..
Mitra smilingly placed her hands on His arms and asked
MITRA: "Chandra.. are you missing me"
CHANDRA: "You have any doubt over this".
MITRA : Yes I know.. Thats why I came to sort out your confusion.
CHANDRA : Confusion... I have nothing like that.."
MITRA "Then why did you slap Her..."
CHANDRA "YOu mean Nandini"
MITRA : Yes... You are correct.
"CHANDRA : She irritated me... She wore your cloths and accesories which I bought from Takshashila. Do you remember ... How you used to Love things I bought for you... You were easily pleased with Glass bangles... That time my buying power was so meager. But today I can buy you whole world.. you are not here.
MITRA: Who said I am not here
CHANDRA: You died right before my eyes..
MITRA You are wrong.. I am always in your heart... ONly with these eyes of yours,you cannot see me.. but your heart always beats for me. I was with you... all along.. Its you who did not feel me... Definitely I know you were not desiring physical moments from me... We are soulfully connected..
CHANDRA : Are you not angry... Nandini wore your dress..
MITRA: You are surprising me... I have given you yourself to her.. what thing can be greater and priceless for me other than you.. I have happily gave you to her.. you are asking about some old clothes
CHANDRA :Should I love Her.
MITRA : ... Chandra... I can give you one assurance that Me and Her are two sides of same moon.. Thats you... When you can love me,why not her... Fretting over me cannot help..I am happy in heavens,I want you to be happy too. just like how you used to be... when we were together...
Chandra eyes filled with tears. "I promise I will be happy
MITRA : Thanks Chandra.. I cannot stay back here long... Just rest assured that I am always with you...If that not the case.. Why Nandini is looking exacytly like me.. Why she is married to you.. Why she gets emotional just like me seeing you hurt,Why she stands for you.. when your are in need ?Why you feel agitated seeing her.. your heart is skipping a beat. Think Chandra.. answer is within...

CHANDRA :Nandini ... Will be angry on me.
MITRA: SHE IS NOT ANGRY... how can she hate you... she realised this before than you.It is you who is reluctant to accept the truth.

CHANDRA : I WILL abide by your words . now please Dont go Mitra... Take me with you
MITRA :You have to achieve a lot.. Krishna created you for betterment of Bharatvarsh... remember my words...I am here within you... just deep within you.

Chandra woke up to realise that his conversation with her was dream. Chandra heard a soft anklet sound. To his surprise he saw Nandini, smiling at him.. wearing glass bangles and jasmine flowers.

Nandini came closer . "I know Chandra.. you are waiting for me... "
Chandra : " How did you know"
Nandini : " When I was sleeping,someone said that you need me at this moment. that voice was soft and sweet ... yes It was some girl's voice.. Which I have not heard before.

Chandra was speechless... Yes it was Mitra.. who else can it be.

Edited by Avantika1115 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very beautiful update! You brought in a spirit visitation of Mitra to clarify things in Chandra's mind. I loved all the parts in this chapter.
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Avantika - You write very fast and rapid.

Now you brought some super natural element also ? 😆

Any way I read 2 chapters and both ended with kissing on the lips. Now looks like you are moving the story forward - Will read and come back.

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