~Farewell ashoke~ashwaki FF chapter 8 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Woah... Akbar nd Ashok.r frnds now... great...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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when will u update ? 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 5



Past


Ahankara wouldn't get sushim words out of her head. She sat down on her bed thinking "what was with him, asking her why she likes ashok", she couldn't figure him out, when he was ranting she could see so much emotions from him, anger, jealousy and sadness. " was that really how he felt, or was he faking it" she says, she stood up frustrated " why do I even care?!" " he is ashok murderer, I should be angry not trying to figure him out. Yes that's it, the incident yesterday was probably his way of tricking me so I will lose track"

Content she gets in her bed to sleep, she turn the light of and shut her eyes, but she couldn't sleep because sushim words kept repeating in her head. She turned to her right and cover her head, than she opens her eyes thinking I just can't figure him out.

The next day, sushim woke up, only to smell something nice. He turn his head to see a pretty girl burning what looks like a stick. He stood on the bed looking around " where am I?"

The girl smile walking to him while blowing the smoke with her hand, " your at prince ashan house" , sushim thought about it before remembering what happend. " your the girl from yesterday" he says

"I'm glad you remember me my king, I hope your stay was very pleasant" she says putting the pot down and walking to the bed. Sushim watch her before asking her what she was doing with the pot, the girl told him, she was wording of evil spirits. " I thought you were a wh**e" he says being blunt

The girl crying at the word " just because I sold my soul to this kingdom does not mean I am a wh**e, it has only been one man I had slept with ad that was the late kings brother. Other than that the only man that has touched me thus far is you" sushim was taken back, he would have thought she would be angry but she wasn't , it looks like she had came to terms with her life, she didn't look happy but t the same time she wasn't angry either.

Curious he asks her " are you content?"

"What do you think?" She asks

"I think you've given up hope long ago, instead of fighting to be free, you chose the easy route"

The girl frown" I beg to differ my prince, as long as I'm alive and my heart continues to sway, I will never give up. It just takes time. You on the other hand, have to much anger, and hatred, you look trapped and lonely. From what I can see you want someone to take your side even when your wrong, a ressurence"

Sushim frown upon her, he didn't like the way she was talking to him, " what exactly are you implying"

" you want love, not a mothers love, but a love that makes your heart beat and makes you feel like a king" when she said this sushim got of the bed "NONSENSE!?" he says pissed

He didn't know the girl well, but it seems like she knows him more than he knows himself. He didn't like it, he wasn't an open book. "Leave" he says, the girl got up leaving her pot before she looks at him one last time and leave

"I can't stay here, I have to get back to the palace . Ahankara I know you followed me here, but once I get back we will talk. I don't want any misunderstanding between us" he says

Modern

Kaurwaki was getting ready for school, she was just happy that ashok wasn't coming. After the embarrassment yesterday, she didn't know if she could take it anymore. She felt like she was going insane. She puts her clothes on and walk downstairs, she saw her brother already eating, her dad talking to her mom, and ashok? Speaking of which where is ashok? She thought

She asks her mom for ashok, and she says he's on the roof, what is he doing up there. Worried, she walk out the house and stood in the front. She saw him sitting while staring beyond. " ashok? What are you doing?" She asks

"I'm memorizing the direction"

" why?"

" so I can get back home"

"OK" she says

She turn and went back in the house, few minutes later her bus came. She said good bye to her mom before walking towards the bus, curious ashok asks where she was going, and she says school. When she left ashok thought of something " maybe I can get information from this school" he says to himself, before jumping down , using acrobats.

To be continued...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG!!!! Kauru is in trouble again...
I love the way u characterized Sushim...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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ohww😲
tho ashok kaurru ke school jayega
waiting for the next chappy
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 6



Modern


Ashok follow the bus, unaface by people watching him. Kauriwaki on the other hand was by the window looking out, bored. She tried to ignore the kids on the bus, and tunisha calling her anaadee karu, she hates that name. The only reason tunisha named her that was because during the talent show, she screwed up there duo and accidently fall of the stage, she was so embarrassed by the laughs and boo they were getting that after school she told her that she will make her life hell for ruining her chance.

Kaurwaki was worried about that. Couple of days later tunisha wouldn't sit with her, she started accusing her of stealing her things and even got into a fight with her. Kaurwaki, was suspendedsuspended for a week because everyone claimed she started it. Her mom had told her to not worry, and that everything will be fine, but it wasn't. When she reached her nineth grade year tunisha spreaded rumors about her and made everyone know her nickname.

She was so popular in a short time, that she became the face of the school. Sighing kaurwaki watch as the trees pass by, I will just try to make myself invisible once I get out. I'm sure they won't notice me. She thought before thinking I'm glad ashok didn't come with me, or my life would have been ruined. Just when she thought of that ashok appeared beside her window. By that time she was checking for her notes to study.

She turn and was surprise to see a reflection of ashoke. She turn to make sure and sigh when she saw no one there. Theirs no way ashoke followed me all the way from home, she thought before studying. On the other hand, ashoke got up after tripping on a pebble. Some people asked if he was OK and he said yes before running again to catch the bus.

When kaurwaki reached school, she quickly rushed out the bus and ran to class, missing ashok looking around. One of the kids who saw him, started laughing. Soon everyone that was of the bus started making fun of ashoke. Ashoke confuse asked them why they were pointing at him, and they told him, he looks like a clown with the outfit. Ashoke looks at his clothes wondering what was wrong with it. He looks at the boys clothes and frown, he's clothes are worse than mine, the material is terrible while mine is the finest amongst the land, he thought.

He told the boy anyone would die to have his clothes, this made people laugh even more. Ashoke confuse didn't understand them, he heard them calling him a clown, and he wondered what a clown was. These kids are disrespecting my clothing choices, are they mad. He thought, ashoke circle the boy who called him out before saying very loudly, " I ASHOKE WILL FORGIVE YOU FOR INSULTING ME, but next time I will not be so forgiven" he says.

The boy blink before laughing even harder, he got up before calling ashoke a weirdo. Everyone else thought the same,nodding. Ashoke frown " what is a weirdo?" He says

"What are you stupid, you don't know what a weirdo is" he says blinking his tears away. when ashoke nod his head the boy called him stupid, ashoke told him he was not familiar with the word, this made the boy gap. " this boy is really stupid" he says before saying he's leaving because he doesn't want to become dumb like him. So when the boy left, ashoke decides to search for the library. While searching he accidently enters the girl bathroom. He asks one of the girls washing there hands if they know where he can find a room filled with books.

The girls scream , calling him a pervert. The girl he asked slapped him out of anger, this left ashok with a red cheek. " these girls are really violent, they must be guards for this school" he says holding his cheeks. He continue walking, once again lost. He turn a corner, and bump into sushim. When sushin saw him, he tried to turn the other way, but ashoke put his hand on his shoulder to stop him. "Sushim?" He says

Sushim sighs, he told ashoke to leave him, but ashoke refused. Sushim tried to punch him, but ashoke duck. Sushim tries to kick him, but ashoke jumps making him kick air, ashoke tries to talk to him but sushim refuses to listen. Some kids walking stop to see them. They started cheering, while some call there friends. Soon it was a big crowd, they were cheering, taking picture and even video taping.

Kaurwaki, listening to the teacher lecture, saw kids running out in the hall, saying sushim was fighting some clown with weird clothes. At first kaurwaki thought it was ashoke, but she brushed it aside and continue listening. About five minutes into the lesson she got a video message from the schools page. She check it and gasp when she saw ashoke. Why, she thought before standing up. She told the teacher she has to do something quick before running out the room.

Kaurwaki, while running, wonder what ashok was doing at her school, he couldn't stay home, now could he, she thought now angry.

Past


Sushim walk inside the palace searching for ahan, he found her practicing her sword fight. He had forgotten how good she was at fighting. He clap his hand, getting her attention before complementing her on her skills. Ahankara roll her eyes, she couldn't sleep last night because of him, and now he's here to annoy her. She thought by practicing she could get rid of the words in her head but she couldn't.

"What are you doing here" she says
Sushim smirk before walking behind her and touch her hair " I thought you wound miss me" he says

Ahankara turn around with anger " and why would I do that" she asks

"Because you care for me" when he said this she laughs " I would careless where you are, and who you spend your time with"

" I never imply that" he says

"Its obvious you want me to be jealous, why else you keep going to that place" she says

This time sushim smirk " if I didn't know any better I would say your jealous"

"I'm not" she says

" you are" he finished

Ahankara irritated 😡 told him to pick up his sword. " what?" He says

"You heard me, pick up your sword" she says impatient, sushim was not expecting this, he thought she would at least welcome him, like a lover would. OK, scratch that part, we are in the process of being lovers, he thought sighing. "I won't ask again, pick up your sword" she says before attacking him

"Wait a second" he says surprise that she attack so forcefully.

To be continued...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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hahaha 😆 😆 loved reading ashok's encounter with school kids 😆
and love the fact that u r giving the both modern and ancient era glimpses in each updates... 😃
continue soon 👍🏼
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Chapter 7

When Kaurwaki reached the area, she pushed people out the way to get to ashok. She reached just in time to see sushim about ready to land a punch on ashoke and vis-versa. In panick kauriwki yells "STOP!" Urning stares from everyone.
This was the distraction sushim needed to punch ashok knocking him to the floor. Kaurwaki seeing this ran to ashok, she asks if he was OK and he said yes. Than she looks at sushim telling him he didn't have to punch him, sushim just turn and walk away.

Tunisha clap getting everyone's attention. She told kaurwaki if she was friends with this clown. When she didn't respond, tunisha laughs before saying just when she thought she was weird, she prove her wrong. She's a freak.

When she said this ashok could feel kaurwaki hand shaking. He wonder why the girl was making fun of kaurwaki. He got up and walk to her, frowning while his hand was cross. He look down at her demanding to know why she was hurting his friend.

Tunisha laugh before telling him it was none of his business. Ashok ignored her and demand her to tell him, this made her angry, she told kaurwaki to warn her friend or she will not be safe. She turned and walk away follow by the rest of the crowd.

Ashok turn to kaurwaki to see her leaving. He asked her if she was OK, and she told him to leave her alone. This made him confuse, what is her problem, he thought.

Later that day, ashok was talking to his friend akbar, he told his friend kaurwaki was mad at him, akbar in his room sat down, he also told him jodah is angry at him. Ashok asks why, and he said he made a decision without her so she won't talk to him. Akbar told him, joda should understand that as a king he can't show no weakness, but she wants him to be sympathetic in the court room.

Ashok agrees with him, he told akbar that his dad said the same to him. Just thinking about his dad made him think of his mom, he wonder if he will ever see her again.

Akbar told him not to worry, things will work out. This snaps ashok out of his head " your right, but what will I do about kaurwaki?" He says akbar nervously laugh before telling him his on his own on that. Before walking out the room, ashok call him a traitor before walking out the door himself to speak to kaurwaki.

Past

Sushim moved out the way when she attack. He grab his sword and block her next attack. Ahankara thought about ashok while attacking. She slam her sword hard on his and move back when he attacked. Angry she managed to cut his arm, drawing out blood. Usually sushim wouldn't hit girls, but that doesn't mean he won't hit her to protect himself.

He block her next attack and punch her out of anger. She fell while dropping her sword,holding her nose that was dripping with blood. " you punched me!?" She says

"And you tried to kill me, I guess we're even now" he says walking to her to help. She smack his hand and got up to leave. Sushim confuse wondered if he did the right thing by punching her. While thinking he was unaware of two people watching him.

Upset sushim decides to go to his friend palace. While going he remember what the girl told her, if he need someone to talk to come to her for comfort. He conteplat about it before making up his mind.

Ahankara look on before shaking her head. I can't think about him, I need to get more information on sushim. I should probably go to the market she says. While she left the two who were watching walk away " she's getting to comfortable with your son"

"Your right, what should we do?"

" she has to disappear like we did to ashok"

"But my son will notice, but your right ahankara is getting to close to figuring it out."

"We need to kidnap her and throw her into the sea"

"We have to be very cautious, so my son won't find out. I don't like that girl, she need to learn her place" she says evilly

To be continued...
Edited by angelk1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update , was waiting since last few days 😊
one question though, is modern tunisha ancient era's ahankara ? if so , wont ashok recognize her like he is doing so in case of sushim ?

update soon... 😳


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: _barbie

nice update , was waiting since last few days 😊

one question though, is modern tunisha ancient era's ahankara ? if so , wont ashok recognize her like he is doing so in case of sushim ?

Your right,but tunisha looks completely different compare to the past, sushim face was more recognizable since it didnt change much so he was able to recognize him. Besides why wouldn't ashok recognize a part of his father.



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