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Hi everyone, thanks a lot for the feedback! Chapter 3:

Ashok staggered towards the ground as the soldiers threw him."Ashok?" Emperor Bindusar asked."Samrat, this boy attacked rajkumar Shushim brutally," One of the soldiers explained."What? Ashok, did you really hit Shushim?" Bindusar was really stunned."Samrat I-" He stopped midway."Yes," He said."Why Ashok, you should know that attacking a royal member has a very brutal punishment," Samrat said."Yes Samrat, I know," Ashok looked towards the ground."I'm sorry Ashok, but a rule is a rule, there can't be any partiality," Samrat sighed, he ordered the soldiers to take Ashok away, and punish him until tomorrow.Ahankara put some medicine on her wound, her eyes lost in Ashok's thoughts.What are they doing to him?The doctor had visited, and had given her the ability to move around.She got up, and decided to head where Ashok was, afterall, he would be in intense pain.

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Ashok groaned as the whips slashed his body. The pain was horrible, and it grew more every second."Akand," A female voice, said. "Rajkumari Ahankara?" Ashok was happy. But his voice contained pain.Ahankara turned around to look at Ashok, when seeing him in such a state made her lose her control.She ran to him, sat down and observed the marks and blood. It was horrible. She gently touched a mark, when Ashok winced."Ashok!" She spread her arms wide open, hugging him."Rajkumari, please, calm down," Ashok said, although he would rather stay in that position forever.Ahankara let go, and smiled, wiping her tears."I have someone who wants to meet you," She said, calling in a figure."Acherya Chanakya?" Ashok said."Ashok, there's something I must tell you, something I know you'll hate, but it has to be told," Chanakya said."What is it Acherya?" Ashok tried his best to smile."Ashok... I'm here to tell you about your... father," Ashok's pupil grew a deep shade of brown."He is... you know him very well... his the Samrat,".Ashok and Ahankara gasped. "What? Samrat Bindusar? No! That's not possible!" Ashok shouted."Ashok, listen to me, he didn't leave you and your Mum on purpose," He said.And so he told them the reality, the truth."Did Mum know?" Ashok asked."Yes, she knew. In fact, here they come," And down the stairs came Dharma and Bindusar. Ashok couldn't believe it. He was a prince.The soldiers untied his wrists and Ashok collapsed. Ahankara caught him, gently moving him towards his parents."Mum," He hugged Dharma."Ashok, it's all true," She smiled. Ashok moved towards Bindusar."Father!" He never thought he would say that. They all hugged.

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"I have an anouncement to make," Bindusar began.All the princes and Ahankara were sitting there along with the patliputra."I have another son! And his name is Ashok!!" Bindusar anounced.Shushim sat there as if electrocuted."No! This can't be possible!" He whispered.Siamak smiled.And Drupad grinned.It really was lovely, except Shushim. "What can I do?" He thought desperately.Then he grinned, his eyes stapled to Ahankara."Of course," He smirked...

To Be Continued...
Edited by Swaryaforever01 - 10 years ago
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Its good to see famiy reunion. Whats in Sushim 's mind.
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Chapter 4:

Ashok stood in front of the full length mirror, observing his new outfit."You look excellent, rajkumar Ashok," Ahankara admired.Ashok smiled."Thank you, Rajkumari Ahankara," Ashok replied."I think we better get going, Samrat is waiting," Ahankara checked the time.Ashok nodded.Bindusar had planned a party to celebrate the return of Dharma and the birth of his son, Ashok.They hurried along the corridors, Ashok watching out for his outfit."Ashok!" Ahankara stopped."What's wrong?" Ashok asked."I think I've dropped one of my earrings," Ahankara turned back."Fine, let's go get it," Ashok said."No, you can go, I'll go and look for it," Ahankara turned back, searching for her earring."Where can it go!" She groaned, still looking, when she bumped into someone.She looked up, to see her earing, and looked at the person, and frowned."Looking for this?" Shushim asked.Ahankara snatched the earring. She turned around to leave, when Shushim grabbed her, he covered her mouth with his hand."Bring it here!" He ordered a soldier, who brought a cloth. Shushim took the cloth and stuffed it in front of Ahankara's face.Ahankara felt her eyelids grow heavy, and blackness began invading her sight."The plan has begun," Shushim laughed...

To Be Continued...

Sorry guys this one is short, but promise next one will be longer!
Edited by Swaryaforever01 - 10 years ago
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Oh...this Sushim is such a brute
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Chapter 5:

Ashok arrived at the grand party, he saw his Mum and Dad happily chatting, while he also noticed that the other Queens were not happy. He sat down next to Drupad and Siamak."Wow Asho - I mean brahtha Ashok, you look great!" Siamak retorted. "Thanks Rajkumar Siamak," Ashok said."No need to call me Rajkumar anymore, just Siamak," Siamak smiled.Ashok smiled and looked all around him, he saw maharani looking a little tensed, then he realised that Shushim wasn't here. That scared him a little, but he managed to calm down. "Ashok, have you seen where Ahankara is? It's been fifteen minutes, she should've been here by now," Samrat asked. Ashok grew tensed."No, father, I'll go check," Ashok got up, and headed out. Shushim and Ahankara both missing.He brisk walked along the long corridors, till he finally arrived at the spot he had last seen her."Ahankara?" He called softly.No reply.Ashok began looking around, that's when he noticed a broken piece of red bangle."This is Ahankara's," He whispered. He frantically searched more. Nothing.That's when an idea popped into his head.If the bangle broke, then obviously it would lead to some blood.He looked closely at the carpet, when he noticed little droplets of blood.He followed them, which lead him outside and into the woods. He once again called her name. When he heard little movements.He listened closely and followed the sound, and he arrived at a strange looking tree, and behind it was Ahankara."Ahankara!" He ran upto her.But she wasn't looking at him, but was staring at something behind him.He turned around, and his eyes grew wide...

To Be Continued...
Edited by Swaryaforever01 - 10 years ago
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Pls update fast dear... i want to know the suspense.
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Read all parts in one go..Loved it
waiting for your next update..
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Thanks for your support, everyone!! It's a real inspiration!

Chapter 6:

It's big red eyes stared down at Ashok, the huger was visible in the thirsty growl.It rubbed it's foot onto the dusty sand, and growled once again to warn it's prey. Then, it smirked, and began charging."Ashok! Run!" Ahankara shouted. The tiger was already on its way, she knew there was no way she could survive, but Ashok needed to survive.He had just found his family, regained that happiness, it can't all be lost now.Ashok turned around to check Ahankara was safe. That's when his eyes caught little meat stains.He grit his teeth, Shushim had tricked him, but had risked the life of Ahankara too.Ashok looked back at the tiger, it was ready to jump. It leaped up high, growling with thirst of fresh blood.'I have defeated a tiger before, I can do it now,' He began thinking. Just then the tiger attacked him, pinning him down onto the rough ground."Ashok!" Ahankara screamed.From the corner of his eye, Ashok spotted Ahankara throw a small rock at the tiger, hitting it on the eye.The tiger grew angry, and stared at Ahankara, immediately he began charging towards her, and she yelped.Ashok jumped up, springing onto the tiger's back covering both its eyes in dry sand.The tiger swung side to side, trying to shrug Ashok off, and it let out a painful growl, the sand itching it's eyeballs.Ashok jumped off, and ran to Ahankara, where he untied her and helped her up. Just then the tiger came back to it's senses.It leaped up once again, and Ashok smiled. He grabbed a piece of pointy stick, and jumped up, meeting with the beast in the midair, and with one swipe, he was back on the ground, with the tiger motionless beside him.He turned around and smiled."Wow, Ashok, that was-" Ahankara complimented."Impossible!" Shushim groaned from behind a bush.Ashok ran upto it, and pulled him out."Your such a coward Shushim!" Ashok shouted."What did you just call me?" Shushim asked, red in the face."A COWARD! That's YOU!" Ashok screamed.Shushim punched Ashok, and Ashok fell.He got up, and punched Shushim.The two began their fight."Ashok, it's not worth it!" Ahankara called."This loser could've gotten you killed!" Ashok fought.Shushim in anger, noticed a cliff."Oh yeah?" He smirked.He charged forward, pushing Ashok really hard.Ashok lost balance, and Ahankara ran forward to save him, but she was too slow. Ashok fell.Shushim smirked, and grabbed onto Ahankara's hair, pulling it."Who's going to save you now?" He laughed.Ahankara couldn't think. Ashok was dead?

To Be Continued...
Edited by Swaryaforever01 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ashok cant die...pls updte fast...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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read all parts...
nice ff !!
really enjoy reading !!
update next part soon..
n if possible plz pm..
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