NivRen FF:YehTohHonaHiTha (Ch. 3 updated) - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: aamina1010

Suman so sorry for late comment.
Very interesting story so far. Looking forward to nivren first meeting. X

Aamina di so happy u finally read it...wow its interesting...i thought everyone would have fallen asleep just reading half way through...will continue soon...not sure yet if first nivren meeting will be in next chapter or the one after...have to still figure out how i will post it here so that it is not too long...but u will have the nivren meeting soon promise😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Please continue soon waiting for your update.😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 2

After their classes are over Nivi and Divya head home. Of course as usual, Nivi was taunting Divya about her behavior around their friends. "Di why are you so mean to poor Kushal? You know that Roshni really likes Kushal, so at least be nice to him for her." Divya was getting tired of hearing the same old lecturing Nivi and groans. "Nivi, will you please shut up your lectures for one day. I am so tired of hearing this everyday. And I'm your "older" sister right? So should it not be me that should lecture you instead of the other way around?" Nivi could not wipe away the big grin on her face. "Di, you should really look at your face from the rear view mirror. You look just like a little child complaining to her mom." Divya stops the car and starts hitting Nivi. "What? This grown woman looks like a little child to you?" "Ouch'Dii!" Nivi was trying to get as far away from Divya that she could on her seat. "Wait. Lets reach home than we will see who the little child really is?" and Divya again begins to drive the car heading home. "Anyways, Di, I have one question?" Nivi said after a while breaking the silence between them. "You never quit do you?" Nivi shakes her head in no. "Fine what is it?" Nivi sits up straight. "Di, what happened to you this morning. Why were you in such a hurry to get to class?" Divya looks at Nivi, who was eagerly waiting for an answer. "What? No reason." Nivi was not convinced. "Are you sure Di?" "Yah" Nivi knew that she was not going to get the answer out of her Di so fast, but she knew that their was a BIG reason as to why her Di wanted to go to her class so quick.

As Nivi and Divya had just about reached home, they looked into their neighbors driveway and noticed that the movers were gone and their were no vehicles around. "hmm'maybe they are gone somewhere?" "Yah'probably'we will come with mom and dadi once they come back..." "hmmm." Nivi was really curious as to who could be their new neighbors. She loved meeting new people'but of course she would be shy around them at first.

Divya drove through the gate to their house and parked the car on the driveway. The girls got out and ran into their home. "DADI!!!" The girls would always meet their Dadi first when they would come home from college or just an outing. They loved their Dadi a lot'and of course she loved them a lot as well.
Edited by Suman_4_NivRen - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi everyone! 🤗Sorry I updated so late though I promised that I won't make you guys wait so long...at first I got stuck on updating my previous FF...and I also started getting busy with my baby nephew...he has become quite a handful now...and keeps me busy a lot...
...i will be updating during the weekends since my uni is about to start in a couple of weeks...but will try and make it that i post a couple of updates for this ff...but that also depends on if i get time to type it all😳
...do comment and let me know what you think...sorry it is so short...the next chapter will be longer and one to look forward to 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Suman... awesome update but it's too short..😛. i love the relationship between divya and nivi... and naughty nivi 😆 . am also waiting for the new people who will live near them 😆.. keep rocking girl waiting for the next ... and update when ever u can 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice update suman. Really can't wait till NivRen meet.
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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short but a sweet update..luv d bond btw the sisters..u r writing really well suman..continue soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanks for updating. Loved the update do continue whenever you can and really sorry for the late comment. 😊 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Please continue soon. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: love-mystery

Suman... awesome update but it's too short..😛. i love the relationship between divya and nivi... and naughty nivi 😆 . am also waiting for the new people who will live near them 😆.. keep rocking girl waiting for the next ... and update when ever u can 😉

thx lj...ya i know it was really short...actually you will notice that most of my chapters will be short...sorry for that in advance...but now i will try and update 2 chapters at once...hopefully that will make up for the short chapters...well you wont have to wait too long to meet the new neighbors...will update pretty soon

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